Shadow Slave by Guiltythree

Exactly ...other websites the ratings is very high ...so I'm wondering what's wrong with this people...they make it look asif is all about sex or illogical power ups

You know how contradictory MC is, to the point that kills the story. For someone who claims to be ruthless and deceitful, Man sure is a A grade simp for women to walk all over him and blush like a soyboy when having physical contact with women, having inner conflict for simplest of cause, ready to play hero. Promise of ruthlessness shown in vol 1 was no where to be found in vol 2. Powering through this novel because story and world building looks pretty interesting. Do the self pity every 20 chapters and not every f#cking chapter. If MC was some rich sheltered kid who have no idea how world works, does this, would have been tolerable, but someone who claims to be ruthless and deceitful does this, the sheer hypocrisy will rub you the wrong way.

was it me ?

I think the reason why they hate the 2nd arc is for unexpected timeskip and also the confusing change in MC's personality after the timeskip without even revealing what happened after they see and made way to the coast of

I wholeheartedly agree with your comment.At the end of the day sunny is still just a kid. Sure he's hardened by the streets and becomes ruthless,but after the first arc starts to show signs of learning how to trust again only for all of that to come crashing down,added with the madness of the dream world,their hopeless circumstances,and his first cold blooded murder,and almost legit dying, it's hard to see how he would still stay sane while also living in the most dangerous ruins alone

i hate this argument lol. If you dont like something it means you cant have an opinion I dont agree with.

How the f#ck are you supposed to know if you don't like the novel or not if you don't read it eh dumbass. Tags only narrow down so much..

Are you a bit or an alt? You signed up 2 days ago and just keep praising this novel

You know this novel would have been great if author got his MC right, Nephis looks more like MC than this bitch. Author is just focussing on inner-conflict of MC, than progressing the story, to the point it gets annoying.

1. you've just assumed that we all read cliche novels, which we don't, rude
2. everyone has the right to their own opinion, so please don't disrespect others for their view

and finally (this is my own assumption):
3. are you the author or something? at the time of making this comment, you have made your account only 4 days ago, the day Shadow Slave was released on this site. If you are, don't be so inconspicuous. Admit your the author, and take feedback from this site (like technex). Most readers on ranobes are more experienced when it comes to finding flaws and pros, so most advice here is valuable. please don't be a dick.

-galacticrize

If attitude being realistic translates to him being a simp, self-pitying little bitch, then maybe stick with Japanese isekai novels, where MC has hero, white knight complex with women walking all over him.

Character development?? Looks more like character regression. Man turned from ruthless to little bitch in the span of 75 chapters. Once he first met Nephi and cassie in the dream realm, character development went to shit.

This Review Be like:
"Guys you can enter in this suspicious 《House》 just don't be afraid of the dead bodies on the floor, [Attention!] Don't be afraid of the dead bodies on the floor, you will surely come out Alive and Happy."

Sheessh chill dude 😂😂😂

I agree this had so much potential and the first arc was good to read even though the memory loss thing was a bit forced. The characters were 3d and it works because there are only 3characters to focus on.
The world is depiction is great, as a dark souls enjoyer its right up my ally.
Oh but in the second vol, that shit is brutal on mc. mc keeps behaving like a mob in vol2 even though there was a moment in first vol where his attitude changes when chooses to save nephis. He becomes an insecure hypocrite and simp for lack of a better word. Nephis knows this and uses it. I was hoping for mc's character development, the only development I got was mc losing his marbles by staying alone ,like why he was alone before.
I only read till 199 cliffhanger,

plz, let me know if mc's attitude becomes better in the following chaps.