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Chaos Heir by Eveofchaos

A reoccurring nightmare afflicted Khan’s nights since the Second Impact. His dreams replayed the... Read more
A reoccurring nightmare afflicted Khan’s nights since the Second Impact. His dreams replayed the scenes of the crash of the Nak’s spaceship, an alien race that the humans had defeated five hundred years ago.

Khan’s life had turned upside-down after the tragedy. His mother had died during the incident, and the Nak’s toxic mana had infected him. His father had managed to save him, but they ended up losing their home and name in the process.

The nightmares wouldn’t let Khan forget about the Nak, so he set his mind to join the Global Army and learn to wield mana. He had to put an end to those dreams, even if that meant hunting down that alien race through the stars. Collapse
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    I am on chapter 7. So far it's captivating. I am really picky when it comes to reading but this one is good.

    So far, the novel I have truly enjoyed are solo leveling, my vampire system, earth greatest mugus, super genes and release the Witch. The others just Boring.
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      DarkChocolate
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      You should try The First Order, truly superb
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        the humor in first order is absolutely fantastic
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      you should try these also:-
      the chronicles of the shura clan, death guns in another world, my three wives are beautiful vampires,
      rise of the demon god, blood warlock, inhuman warlock, Hero of Darkness, Son of the Hero King, Monarch of Time, The Great Demon System, The Path Of My Lustful Life, Supremacy Games
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        Is the mc in any of this novels edgy psychopath? One of the complaint I have with most novels is that the mc kills anyone just cus he can, or pissed off of him. Also some of the novels, the writing is shit - for example, mc goes to restaurant, someone pisses off mc and gets killed. Just stupid reason to kill off characters.
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          i guess in inhuman warlock there was a arc in which mc was a just a 10 year old child with abilities and tragic past so you can say he was psychopath and ignore the great demon system
          (sorry if there are any grammatical mistakes)
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          Desturion
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          One of my absolute favorites is still: The Oracle Paths by Arkinslize. MC is a little edgy especially at the start, but is not a psychotic killer and there were no wuxia young masters or other unreasonable encounters whithout reason.
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      if you like super gene then you are way less picky than you think lol, that is one of the trashiest piles of garbage to ever exist. though it can be mildly entertaining if you just want to waste a month of your life away.
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        I agree it gets Boring in later chapters. But not in early ones. It's something unique. It has interesting plot, world building and good character development. Also the mc actually works hard to get powerful. Not only physically but also using his brain. Can't say this for most novel
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          sure, it's the cream of the crop in terms of terrible mass produced garbage web novels, it definitely qualifies as a top pick when you are bored out of your mind. though there are still 1000s of better stories out there, it just takes a bit more searching. ironically, this site is actually pretty good at finding decent stories haha
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      Here u should try these in the order-
      Supremacy games- absolutely fantastic especially with the way the games are written, once u get to the point that MC joins U-VR world that's where story truly starts
      Second Coming of Gluttony- best character development within 500 chapters. Story has finished
      Overgeared- lot of investment and has 1500+ chapters but the world building is phenomenal with lot of character development. U can slowly see how the MC progresses and depth of everything he does. Like he starts a organization then that will feel like a proper organisation unlike the ones where we only get to see some aspects and rest is all done by MC
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        I checked out Supremacy games. I read the summary and as I understood from what I read it's not for me. I want action and adventure.

        And as for Second Coming of Gluttony I left at chapter 280 or 300 because I didn't like mc's personality. One sec he is acting nice, laughing, joking and one sec later his personality completely changes.

        The other thing I don't like about him is how he flirts with girls but the moment the flirtatious processes he acts like a virgin. It pisses me off when he does that. He had a girl friend, plus his past memory but gets surprised seeing a girl nude or when they kisses him.

        Not to mention how naive he is.

        I am reading overgeared manwha now. So far it looks good
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          The description for Supremacy Games does a really poor job illustrating what the book is actually like.

          I was also completely turned off by it as well, and I almost missed out.

          It checks a lot of the boxes you mentioned earlier .

          Unique level/evolution/power-up system. (A bit similar to supergene but its different) Check.
          MC who isn't a murder hobo (But will kill when needed). Check.
          MC who isn't naive. Check.
          MC that is willing to use his penis (and the sex doesn't detrack or overtake the plot). Check.

          Action, adventure, comedy, decent fight scenes, and some face-slaps. Check. check. check. And check.

          The world-building quality is high, and I don't find myself losing immersion due to bad editing.

          I know that still, the story isn't for everyone, but I did wanna take a sec to say, "that description sucks", it makes the story sound waaayyyyy more e-sporty and team-oriented than it actually is.

          Its more MC solo adventures, leveling, crafting, investments etc. Even when team stuff comes up, its an MC carry-fest. So if you are basing your decision solely on the novel description, I recommend giving it a fair shake, it might surprise you.
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    ˈsevən
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    The novel is extremely expressive and the author has done wonderful world-building.
    A few points for everyone:-
    1) Weak to Strong MC
    2) NOT OP MC
    3) Universal world (~aliens). Not those dimensional ones but different planets same universe ones.
    4) NO HAREM
    5) The novel is psychological(~has a heavy emphasis on real-life situations and corresponding emotions.

    6) Till now no inheritances of any sort that make him leap in strength.
    7)

    8) Based in swords and magic world with no single OP element of any sort. All elements have their uses and advantages. No element above other till now. No discrimination between warriors and mages like in some other novels. Both are treated equally and seriously.

    This is all I can think of right now. Gonna say that at least read till chapter 20 before dropping the novel!

    ~Happy Reading~
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      This convinced me
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    So you'll wants HAREM? Then just read

    Mushoku tensei
    Second gluttony of coming
    High school dxd
    Dual cultivation
    Fourth Prince Debauchery
    My path of my Lusftful life

    Why bother finding HAREM in a action genre Novels, Just read mature genre Novels, You can't always just fit any novels to your liking, because we all have different taste and mindset, respect the novel, what about the author? Imagine hating his novels because his work don't have HAREM contain on it.
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    I’m starting this with 194 chapters to binge
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    THEKAUZ
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    those if you saying khan isnt loyal to martha shut up, they barely knew what those feeling are and didnt get a chance to discuss further plus khan knew martha would support him with his relationship if shere were awake
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      CoshinoLarry
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      I'm not talking about loyalty, just respect for a person who gave a lot for you and is now having a hard time, MC started dating a girl he knew for less than 1 month, and it's only been a couple of months since Martha has been in coma. It is not something that a responsible person would do with the feelings of others, by the way I do not care if there is Harem or not, I just say that you have to be respectful with those you supposedly love.
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        THEKAUZ
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        NVM you got a point but still, khan doesn't know when Martha would wake up it could be a month or even years and I don't think she would want khan to wait that long just for her, she would want him to live his life
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          He could of waited for at least a month or two then proceed getting into new relationship.

          You said that he didn't know when she would wake up but yes that is the thing. She could have woken up the next day.

          As I see it they both liked each other, and Martha liked him more seeing how she blushed and stuff around him. And clearly they both were flirting with each other.

          When she wakes up, she would be devastated. Lost her potential lover - time and damaged appearance.

          But ya, they didn't confess. It's not like he is cheating. Just rushed.
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        xsmarty
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        You have to remember they are teenagers, not adults. Their minds aren't fully developed yet, so they won't be acting like the responsible adults. Sure, Khan is most definitely more mature than others his age, but he is still developing. (I think this makes sense, but I'm not sure. feel free to pick apart my argument :thumbsup:)
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    No harlem=GOOD, Harlem=GOOD, One female love interest=GOOD, Male love interest=NO GOOD
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      Big Brother
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      But Harlem Shake=LITAF
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        ?3102 ,siht si tahW ?gnivlove sdrawkcab snamuh era ,oN .eb tsuM
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    Hey there if you want to read the comments so you can get better idea about the novel . I highly recommend you to not do that because there is a world war III down there 😂😂
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    CoshinoLarry
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    Quote: Immortal phoenix
    Reviewing the Alien universe of Eve:
    °First of all I would like to say something to everyone reading this.
    I know most of you have might have already read Demonic sword and it might have left an impression of MC on you. But I want to tell you that even though Eve had written a wonderful novel with a cold and apathetic MC, he himself is not a cold-blooded author. So he can also write novels where MC will express their emotions and fell love and sorrow.
    °The novel is about Khan(MC) who was tainted by the Mana during the second impact.
    He is haunted by the nightmares of that night and fell extreme hatred towards the Aliens responsible, that's why he joins army so that he could meet and kill the Nak(alien).
    MC is mostly ignorant about many things due to having lived in slums, but he has displayed good talent in learning customs, social behaviour, martial arts.
    His relation with his father was shown as pretty good, and I think he could some screen time but I guess that will to wait.
    °The novel is about post-apocalyptic earth but with aliens and not those dimensional rifts, and earth is quite developed(futuristic), so world background is pretty good.
    °Eve's world building couldn't be doubted, as it makes the reading more interesting and doesn't make to bore.
    °Although MC has chaos element, it isn't any kind of cheat, as it can be found in many Nak's, so other than having innately higher destruction ability it isn't that great compared to other elements (at least that's what we know until now!), furthermore it might actually become quite the hassle for MC to learn spells because this element is unconventional—so hard time for MC!
    °Sometimes we forget after reading those too-good-to-be-true novels where even the worst that happens to MC is losing his power or temporary separation from his loving one's.
    Eve has made this novel as realistic as possible, as you can the girl that he had developed good relationship with getting badly injured and how MC reacted to this (though I would prefer that he still chooses her even if she became disfigured—quite the good girl she is).
    °The novel has fantasy sword and magic in it, but with additional aliens but like I said Eve tries his best to make it natural, like MC is not give secret legacy and becomes insanely OP.
    (My favourite part about Eve)
    °The story involves Aliens so we can expect much space exploration In future.
    °This novel is pretty good better than many of those out there and I would like for you read at 20 chapters before deciding to drop it!
    Thank you~

    Thank you finally a true review, tired of all these people arguing over harem...
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      ayo this is harem? Like, harem as in harem where the mc gets them all or he picks only 1?
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        Whitecatsoda
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        It is most likely not harem
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        xsmarty
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        No, this is NOT a harem.
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    All the people that are against harem are just mad that they cant do it in real life and they just want to feel relatable to the mc.
    Harem is good if it is done well for example Warlock of the magus world. The main focus of the book is not about his women but focuses on the plot and the women are just trophies to demonstrate his higher status.
    U guys are just beta cucks that only want the mc to build with one women like that is possible in the real world and even if it is possible it is extremely rare. Women dont build they move in.
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      i have no hate towards harem novels
      buut when a perfectly good novel gets ruined by an unnecessary harem im mad , not because that makes it less relatable but because it ruins the plot
      in fact i like harems where character have actual 'character' of their own and has logical circumstances
      and also...
      you know your a f#cking beta when you need trophies to show your worth
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        Dont get me wrong most harem novels are trash but the good ones are super good and I prefer them over the usual asexual mc and one of the main reasons why I keep grinding in life is to sit in my mansion one day with like four trophy girls not wives so u can call me beta for wanting that.
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          lol no im with you on that one
          just that the idea of multiple trophy wives doesnt sit well with me but i dint say anything about anything else lol
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          Zhulong
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          Warlock of the magus world was good...but I've read too many trash harem novels that I avoid novels with harem tags like a plague..if you have any good read please recommend
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            Tyranny of Steel, Monarch of Darkness, Arsene and Armipotent.
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        Whitecatsoda
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        there is no harem at all
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      They're not beta cucks. They're just normal people with different interests. There's nothing wrong with liking a story with only one romantic partner or love interest, or even a story that doesn't contain one at all. I really like Harem novels, and I read them a lot but that doesn't mean I want every novel to have a harem in it, nor does every novel need to have one.

      The truth is, harems are barely ever done well in novels, and they can ruin a good story by introducing too many characters or ruining plot. It's just how it is.
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      No. Some people hates harem because, honestly, they are not suited for fantasy stories where things are supposed to be this and that, magic supernaturals heroes mana or adventures and another this and that. Let's be honest, they sometimes ruin pretty good novels, where we have spices of thrills and mystery just to be interrupted by girls with love interests? I have no grudges for harem, afterall it's still another genre like shoujo and shounen ai, but I firmly believe that their use for fantasy stories should be minimal and minimized.
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      Defying demon
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      Harems are mostly all similar tbh I used to like harems but a lot of them disappointed me. The girls are all similar you know the hidden princess, the quite one, the tsundere, the jealous one, the child hood friend who always like him or the sister who’s not blood related and more. Tbh I see harems as the mc basically cheating. I can understand if he was raised in a world where it’s normal. But for transmigrators who live in a world which is mostly monogamy how can u have a wife then go on an adventure and then come home with multiple wife’s. There just satisfy there sexual desires
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        If you are rich you can have as many wives as you want monogamy was only made for poor people so they don't go around killing the rich because they are sexually frustrated. So I don't belive in cheating when it comes to a man. And trust me all these rich dudes knows whats up.
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          Defying demon
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          Your delusional if you think monogamy was made so poor people don’t start killing the rich becuse there sexually frustrated. How does that even make sense. And so ur saying it’s literally impossible for men to cheat 😂😂 now thats cap.
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            Since the dawn of time 99% of females have reproduced and 40% of males did. There is something called hypergamy girls dont look for their equal they look for their superior. I have facts to back my claim u are just going of ur false belife to feel secure so you can slepp at night. I guarantee you if you are above average and have enough money to provide a certwin lifestyle ur girl will let you have more options if you have that talk. And the one girl that you say u want I bet she is gonna be a 4 and she only gonna be with you because the top guys dont want her so she is gonna settle for you. WAKE up bro life is not one of thse books women dont love unconditionally they love you on the basis of you providing something. And no Im not tricking with money but money builds attraction.
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              Defying demon
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              Yes there are a lot of girls who look for someone who’s more successful then them selfs rather then there equal and yes if ur above average and have enough money to provide for a certain life style there are loads of girls who would rather share there man so he can remain happy then him leave them because they said no. Not everyone’s like that. And yes life’s not like a romance book or a movie but I don’t know who cheated on you to think like that. There are millions of people if not billions who would disagree with you. And how can you say that men can’t cheat and monogamy is meant for the poor so they wouldn’t kill the rich because of there sexual desires. You literally changed the topic that’s what I was disagreeing with you on. And not everyone’s like that right now the majority of the world is monogamist and a lot are happy and have unconditional love for each other and not saying there’s anything thing wrong with polygamy in my religion you can have 4 wife’s that’s not the point it’s what you said and how u worded it like women are objects who you collect and that men cant cheat and how it’s meant for the poor to keep them tamed
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      I don't see any appeal for harem in novels. Most novels have shit writing for sex scenes and romance and there is nothing visual. It adds nothing to the story and actually detracts from it since it is rarely done well.

      Ok the girls serve as a trophy? How is that a good thing for a novel? They aren't even eye candy for readers since were reading a novel not watching something, they are just bland characters that take up space.

      For novels I don't want harem since 90+% of harem novels are trash. For porn or anime it can be great.
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