Shadow Slave by Guiltythree

I tried reading this up to Chapter250 but I'm dropping it. What's with the MC and Nephis, it's as if Sunny is not the main character besides his so called personality does not match his actions. From the review I read here, he endures more nonsense further along the line. Author should have just made his lead neph maybe it would have some sense. The characters are just weird. In fact why would a MC be a slave to someone else, very good story though but something's are just a turnoff when you read more

Damn I have nothing else to read, I'll have to go along with the realization that sunny is a side character instead of MC so as to enjoy the story. I mean it makes sense, the book is titlef "Shadow Slave". A slave to the real MC and forever be in her shadow. Alriiiiight let's go. I'm back


Usually it's the main character who moves the story forward, has ambition and goals, makes important decisions and the leader but I guess guiltythree had other ideas for his own cvck MC. Okay I get him being a slave and always in the shadow of the real MC but if author was trying to present him to readers atleast make his personality consistent and firm not him having mixed feelings about his eventual slave and betrayed birch of a friend. Sunless is basically a regdoll who doesn't gets taken seriously in his own story. Maybe author was trying to do something different but it's not really realistic sometimes and it's a pity cuz it is a good story but the idea of the MC not being the MC is just out of place

Peak novel. The best ever

guys I'm stockpiling chapters but I checked and there's a chapter called epilogue. why is that there? this novel isn't ending soon right? surely not right?

Хорошее произведение и стоит потраченного времени. Автор силен в сюжете. Тут нет чеховских ружей которые не стреляют. Многие незначительные детали сыграют свою весьма значительную роль много позже. Сюжетная броня не навязчива и «рояли в кустах» скорее интересны, чем раздражают. Единственная слабость автора - это отношение полов. Так что если вы будите ждать адекватных для 20+ лет героев романов, их тут не будет. Герои вечные девственники аутисты + отношение автора к женским героям сродни к гиковской коллекции фигурок на полке. Одна идеальней и краше другой, и при этом с эротизмом пластиковой куклы. Т.е. все читатели знают, что автор заглядывает к ним под юбки, но стесняется об этом говорить. И еще минус у романа: автор любит заниматься описательным самоповторением для заполнения глав, но этим страдают почти все авторы, что публикуют произведение по главам - бизнес модель. Если не эти минусы, то произведение не хуже «Многоярусного мира» Фармера.

Yes he is a saint now

Is this like death sutra or does this mc have stockholm syndrome?