Paragon of Sin by KevinAscending

Just read it
There are some issues but just continue

Honestly, this novel is good in the main storyline.!
However, there are too many elements included!
Slow plot development due to too many details, in each character the endings are forgotten in the next few chapters,
Yeah and the romance part when in bed is aaah too much hahahahah..
And the timeline, days and years are too unreasonable, there are already more than 1450 chapters but only 95 years old, well, readers, maybe you can understand what I mean, this is about cultivation.
Well it takes several thousand or hundreds of thousands of years.
Hmmm, just be enthusiastic about being a writer and being able to accept input

What's the point of na xinyi in this novel though and tian yinwus interest. An unwanted leech I could care less about imo

Book used to be so good man. But now plot moves at a snails pace and the harem is never ending. Story is heavily padded with useless bs that no one really cares about. I hate about a third of the harem and hope they were never there. Character descriptions are nonexistent and everything is "she was so beautiful" or "her beauty was blinding" all bs that tells us nothing about how the character looks like and is used on every future harem member.
For the harem, no one but the author remembers more than like 5 of them and even then you can barely picture the ones you remember cus the author doesn't know any character description words apart from "beautiful" (With the amount of times it's been used what actually is the standard for beauty at this point???).
In addition I think most of them are just complete leeches at least in my opinion. Mc spends a crazy amount of time and resources nurturing them and it just gets personally annoying having them basically be the whole plot. In conclusion to my little rant, the book is still brimming with potential and the worldbuilding along with the Mc is great but if the author doesn't start utilizing it soon its gonna go dry. For me personally I'm putting the book on hold until anything changes. Gl

This LN was written awkwardly. The writer begins with a MC that has a unique personality. Then after chapter 8ish, the author destroys the mc's built personality. Then forces one cliche after another, for nearly 350 chapters. The plot his forced. And I've decided to put down this LN for now.

Guys which chapter does mc meet phoenix ater evolution.

Прикольно конечно, но начало не пошло

It's been a month since a chapter dropped 😭