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The Author's POV by Entrail_JI

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The person whom the world revolves around.

The person who defeats all of his opponents,... Read more
The person whom the world revolves around.

The person who defeats all of his opponents, and ultimately gets the beautiful girl.

The sole existence all villains fear.

That is the protagonist.

What about me?

As a failed author who had only one success throughout his whole career, I had reincarnated into my late novel.

«This is it»

I thought, as I tightly clenched my fist.

Did I just get reincarnated in my own novel?

Is this where I reincarnate in a novel and become the protagonist?

No.

Sadly it’s not that kind of novel, as I reincarnated as a mob.

The world doesn’t revolve around me.

The girls don’t come flocking towards me.

The cheat items don’t come to me.

«Phew»

I let out a sigh of relief.

«Thank god I’m not the protagonist»

I joyfully shouted as tears streamed down my cheeks.

Wait, are you curious as to why I don’t want to be the protagonist?

I did forget to mention the most important thing when I was describing a protagonist.

That is…

They are calamity magnets.

I just died. If I learned something from that, it’s that it really isn’t a pleasant experience.

If possible let me live a long stable life.

Thank you, whoever reincarnated me.

I would later come to regret these words…

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Reader Disclaimer:

There are two MCs in this story.
1. The original MC of the novel
2. The author that transmigrates in the novel
In the beginning, the author plays the role of an extra with no ambition other than quietly waiting for the story to end. He is almost like a babysitter that watches over the plotline, however, this will only be in the first 40 chapters or so as he will soon be dragged into the plotline regardless of how much he doesn’t want to.

The MC may come off as someone that has no ambition in the beginning but as the story progresses it will change

Also, there may be a bit of info-dumping at the beginning of the novel (at least the first 30 chapters), but there shouldn’t be anymore in the following chapters. Well…being a new author I may end up doing it again. If I do so please do criticize me and scold me. If you don’t scold me how am I supposed to improve the story? What’s great about writing web novels is that I actually can hear your advice and opinions. You are just as much invested in this story as I am, so please help me out.

Well…I would appreciate it if you don’t leave a one star…not that I can stop you

Also, yes, the novel is inspired by TNE (The novel’s extra) you may see a lot of similarities in the beginning, but for future chapters the differences will start to become more apparent. I hope you manage to stick through it. Also, don’t come reading this expecting it to be another TNE. In fact don’t compare the two. If you do, the flaws of this book will become more apparent as you read ruining the whole experience Collapse
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    Scorch321
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    Do you know a novel where mc has Nine sword orifices body, there are 10 forbidden areas, mc cultivation is sealed for 3 years, then path for emperor is opened
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      RaiTatsumi
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      Unparalleled After Ten Consecutive Draws
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    Zein
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    Quote: Revenant98
    honestly I don't know what to think of this novel, the MC keeps complaining that everything he wrote was cliché, with retarded characters and I don't know what else, but basically the story is like that, it's so copied to "the novel's extra" I don't know how it's going to be 'different' in the future, and it's silly how the MC goes from one place to another without doing anything really productive, it's like, you know what happens in the future and you know what the villains are but You don't do anything, I literally come up with dozens of ideas on how to deal with them early on without affecting the plot, but he decides it's better to let them passively accumulate hatred until he activates the villains in a chain (which is what he is having. complaining) the scenarios are forced, like the story of the protagonist of his novel, he wants to make it seem tragic and regrettable but it is only a pity how he tries to force it, there is no development in the details of the characters, he only gave them a background scenario and that's it. ... at some point I started to feel that the author is similar to the MC


    All I can say is You're just plain stupid. Read and comprehend the disclaimer dumbass
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      Revenant98
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      Haaaa, retarded argument
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        Zein
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        Your comment is even more retarded.

        Try harder
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          Revenant98
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          Oh my god, is so stupid, I already gave my arguments about why this novel is poop, but apparently it does not work with donkeys
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            kumb
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            I have a better argument
            The guy reading it is a Downey who thinks everyone has the same opinion as him
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            Zein
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            Man, you're just so sad.
            And yeah please educate yourself.
            Your level of illiteracy is mind boggling.




            Try harder kid.
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        Juzzdero
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        Dude, it's one of the disclaimer-warriors army.
        You can't win this war, there are too many.
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          kumb
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          lol someone still salty
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            Juzzdero
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            And someone still have a typo in his nickname.
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              kumb
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              It's *and someone still HAS a typo in his nickname* learn your English you illiterate.
              The irony
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                Juzzdero
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                Haha.
                Eng isn't my language, so I can make mistakes from time to time. I don't think there is something criminal.
                But you already HAVE your brain rotten to the stem. And no learning will fix it, freaky boy.
                P.S. If you don't get it, I hinted you are "kdumb"
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                  kumb
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                  So this is how it feels to argue with a child.
                  ...I see.
                  The level of maturity here.
                  Sigh.
                  I give up.
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                  Juzzdero
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                  Pffff, ahahahahahhaha. Now you make me laugh. No joking.
                  The guy who used two absurd arguments for whole conversation again and again, ignoring any common sense, didn't making any reasonable point and keep calling me 'salty' while being the one who started to offend personally.
                  You. Of all the people in the world. Call me child.
                  Now I truly feel shame for this novel's author. It's a curse to any artist to have a fan like you.
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                  kumb
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                  It seems like I’ve hurt the child’s feelings.
                  I apologise
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                  Juzzdero
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                  Aren't you gave up?)
                  Oh. I forgot you aren't able to follow basic logic.
                  Poor mad kid.
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    Seeker_Of_Fun
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    Join discord and Pick Amanda simp

    https://discord.gg/XkXXbahPHf
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      DizzyJosh
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      nah, pick Donna yall.

      also, f^ck you Sloth :>
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        Seeker_Of_Fun
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        How did you know? lshock
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          Daoist Ghoul
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          who can be this shameless to recruit people even here
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            Seeker_Of_Fun
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            Me the sloth
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      a1b2b39
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      Amanda is the superior option :D
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    Daoist Ghoul
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    so, folks, those who are waiting for the new chap, there won't be any new chap for the next few days
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    Revenant98
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    WoW hahahaha, bro, I already read a large part of the novel and I am reading the comments and I can say several things:

    1- this novel is at most another of the heap and does not deserve to be the first in popularity of any category.

    2- I think that those who defend this novel to the death, either have not read many novels or are paid, because I already said it does not have anything special that deserves attention.

    3- the details, characters, world construction are quite copied, it is as if he took the character models from another novel and exchanged some things.

    4- those of the comments defend the novel with "the author said that the first 40 chapters are bad" or "you only read a little so you cannot comment" etc., I can only say one thing, it is complete nonsense, I have read novels that They make you a world construction, backstory of the MC, direction of the story and others, in just the prologue or a few chapters, in some they even do it in 1 single chapter.

    5- if you have something nice or interesting I did not find it and to be looking for it I think it is more worth looking for another good novel.

    6- read "the novels extra" is the same but better.
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      kumb
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      47-71 is interesting part ur looking for
      Also nobody is defending this novel to death we just don’t understand how u come here reading the novel expecting it to be different then what disclaimer says.
      ...also author himself said his novel was inspired by novel extra and that its far worse then it.
      Try reading part I pointed out and see why ppl like it
      If u don’t like it it just means u have different tastes then others
      Don’t insult other readers that genuinely love the novel.
      Reality check
      World doesn’t revolve around you, just cus u don’t like it doesn’t mean other will have same opinion
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        Revenant98
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        Wow ya no se puede comentar nada aquí, creo que no insulté a nadie solo hice mi crítica, y reitero, para que gastar un par de horas de mucha mierda para encontrar el dulce que dura muy poco? Qué le ponga descargo de responsabilidad no lo hace instantáneamente soportable, osea si fuera entendible si sólo es información de más pero no, el mc es mediocre, la historia no tiene rumbo aparente, los fondos son forzados, entre otras cosas... Y si hay quienes 'defienden a muerte' esta novela, osea en los años que llevó leyendo novelas en distintos sitios web y creo que está es la primera vez que leo una discusión tan intensa
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          kumb
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          soz can't speak Spanish and I can't be bothered to translate.
          I'll repeat what I said before, give the book a shot until 47-71 chapters.
          If you can make it till there and still feel the same way ill just shut up.
          Most reviewers here say the same thing, the beginning is crap. Even the author himself said it.
          Therefore, as you have been warned beforehand, it is only natural that you should have more patience.
          ...else what is the point of reading after being warned that it is bad at the beginning?
          It's like going to the sea that had a shark sign and not expecting there to be any shark. Since you chose to swim in the shark-infested water you should expect there to be sharks.
          Your point that you shouldn't read further since it sucks makes no sense since you have literally been warned beforehand that it wasn't going to be good.
          It's like if someone tells you that the beginning of the TV is shit and you still watch it expecting for it to be good.
          ...you gud?
          Had you not been warned, you had every right to just crap over it. But you knew and still willingly read it.
          What does that say about you?
          Either way, all im telling you is to read 47-71 and see if it's still as bad as you think it is.
          Also, the amount of support this novel is getting goes to show how well received it is from people. Especially since this is a pirated site where author can't delete reviews. Oh and, this is not the only pirated site this novel is doing well.
          Either way, imma just ignore you from now as this ridiculous talk is actually drowning out proper reviews that don't crap on readers or author cus they like a novel that you don't like
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            Revenant98
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            You know, I already read more than 100 chapters and it still seems mediocre to me, as far as there are many people who support this novel, I don't know Rick, I've been on this site for a long time and I can tell who are the users who have read multiple novels because They are always commenting and in this novel I have not seen anyone comment, at least not in this section, so I can only infer that those who have read it and continue to say that it is good, that the disclaimers are a justification of how bad it is. It is and that it gets good after many chapters, I can only assume that they are bots or they have not read many novels, frogs at the bottom of the well as my Chinese friends would say

            If it is not enough, I will give you more reasons why the novel is stupid or perhaps the author ... At the beginning it gives too much information that is later forgotten, it explains about so many characters that later you forget which is which, there are so many events happening that in the end there is no fixed course, I do not understand why the author begins to describe so many places at the same time. Sometimes if he is still confined to the same city, because he describes so many characters at the same time if he does not even interact with them, because he hints of so many situations if he does not want to address them, and for the love of God, because you do not get rid of the damn characters that They only serve to f#ck, "if you kneel I forgive you" "damn you stared at me, I will kill you" "Do you dare to touch me? Do you know who I am?" etc etc, it's stupid and boring, if I want to read that I'm just going to read a generic Chinese novel from 5 years ago ... Another thing is that it gives descriptions of a modern world with magic but it doesn't really feel like one, the descriptions don't make you feel immersed because the author doesn't even describe them well with the excuse that the mc was vague at the time of writing, but in the same way he likes to be changing the scene all the time
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              kumb
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              Now this is the perfect example of someone who thinks the world revolves around himself
              Thinks that novel sucks and assumes other are just bots and people who haven’t read novels
              Let me tell you this most people here have read way more novels than you\
              And they still like it
              Sorry to break it to you but no the world does not revolve around you my little sugar candy
              Just because you don’t like it doesn’t mean others shouldn’t like it
              If u were right why da hell is it doing so well on most websites?
              That’s just proof enough that it’s mostly u
              All top novels will have that one guy that doesn’t like it and ur that guy
              Sugar candy baby
              I’ll repeat it again
              We are not you
              If u don’t like it it’s you. What are you some kind of god that has the same tastes as everyone?
              I’ve read TLM LOTM and basically most novels on this site and I still like this
              ...so yes little sugar candy baby boy
              The world does not revolve around your little candy ass.
              Calling people out for not sharing similar tastes to you is the dumbest and most self centred thing someone can do.
              You are pathetic
              My already low opinion of you just fell even more
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                Im bad at names
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                TLM and LOTM are my favorites. TLM just feels a bit bland for me but LOTM is f#cking fire. I think this novel has potential maybe author should rewrite the first ~40 chaps after finishing it tho.

                Edit: the dude just died after ur comment lmao
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                  EverByte
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                  Hey whats TLM And LOTM?
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      Entrail_JI
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      I apologize if you didn't like it.
      Most of your points are indeed true and there is no denying it.
      This originally started after I read novel's extra and I was sort of writing a fan fic with my own twist to it so yes, a lot of elements are indeed the same. (copied)
      I've tried changing it up a bit around 40+
      ...but considering that it took that long for a change to happen your review is very understandable and I'm not mad about it.
      Thank you for trying.
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        fizbin
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        Yes. I think most can agree (for those that have bothered) that after the ~40 intro chapters, the story does start to pick up and the uniqueness begins to shine through. I, for one, plan to keep reading and hope you use this story to develop an even better one afterwards.

        Thanks. It's always great when a writer grows with their work!
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        Revenant98
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        Bro, I understand you, I have also made manuscripts of various stories and I know how difficult it is to develop them especially when a model is copied but you don't want it to be so similar, but you also have to ask readers for criticism, they always help you, especially veterans, but I don't see you doing that ... you know, it is not necessary to put too much information to develop the story, you can drop clues along the way, so you don't give so much information that people can get confused, I mean, if you are going to develop a character, you can put a description of the character and an event that you do with the mc, it is more memorable, if you develop a scenario you can mention a real world scenario as a reference to the reader, and when you make an interaction between characters do not put so many monologues because one is more interested in the character not in what the mc believes about the character, do not carry your protagonist from one place to another because you do not understand the purpose to In the end, what I hate about novels is that a protagonist is incompetent, literally your MC is a person who knows about how the world develops, and does not know a better way to make money than to bet on investments at the expense of future development. of humanity (the first 30 chapters), you don't know how difficult it was to try to read so many chapters seeing such a vague protagonist
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          kumb
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          Bruh
          U said u read 100 and then u write this
          ...what kind of BS am I seeing
          Moreover why in the world would U see author ask for criticism on this website (pirated one) when he operates on another one?
          …BRUUUUH are u like dumb?
          You def have not read 100 chaps like you claim u did or else you would’ve easily noticed how the author is improving and listening to advice as there is less info dumps
          And if u still say story is similar after 100 chaps u are delusional
          Man, bring ur BS out of here
          ...keep writing ur sorry manuscripts that no one will bother even glancing st
          (What’s even funnier is that author literal asks for criticism on top)
          My word, u just look dumber the more I see u
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          Entrail_JI
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          Quote: Revenant98
          you do not understand the purpose to In the end, what I hate about novels is that a protagonist is incompetent, literally your MC is a person who knows about how the world develops, and does not know a better way to make money than to bet on investments at

          I understand your point however, you must keep in mind that MC was a reclusive NEET before any of this. He was not a genius with a military background or anything of the sort.
          He was someone whose parents died and he failed to get in the university he wanted and fell into depression and isolated himself at home.
          If he suddenly has the grand goal of becoming a hero or saving the world, now that wouldn't make sense.
          I've kept it vague on purpose at the beginning specifically for character growth and development when events happen.
          After all, if a reclusive neet suddenly wants to become a hero it would just not make sense. He needs to go through trials and events to develop those goals and stuff.
          Also, he does know of a better way to make money, it just happens in the later chapters. But, investment was the fastest method he had available because developing something that can make money can take a very long time, hence why the investment was the fastest possible scenario at the moment.
          Also, there is no such thing as making money without affecting the plot. If you plan on making bug bucks, regardless you will affect the world and plot. That's especially if it involves a lot of money.
          Regarding advice, I do listen to them, its just that for the first 30 chaps or so I had no readers so I had no idea where I was going wrong.
          Either way, thank you for the feedback
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            EverByte
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            --- Thanks for Writing ---
            Oh so the MC gradually develops unlike those MCs that already even if were NEET in last life become godlike characters once transmigrated or got powers i mean i agree with you man i still haven't found a novel to this day where MC's transformation/personality change after he got powers or get isekai'd

            well whatever am saying I'll just say I have hope after reading all comments on this novel till now i think this novel will be one which I might truly enjoy i don't mind his slow transformation
            if it feels natural thats all that matters to me no matter the number of chapters
            (I haven't started to read yet will be reading first chapter after this comment)

            thanks for interacting with everyone here hope you keep up the great work
            ---- Best of Luck ----

            -- to other guys -- please be lenient on author your practically roasting him --
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        AndreesM
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        it will be without harem right?
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      Bruneheart
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      Mate, do humanity a favor by shutting the f#ck up and getting out of your parents basement to touch some grass. It might help. Really.
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        Revenant98
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        Hola amiguito, me sorprende que seas capaz de utilizar un teclado con tan poca inteligencia en tu cabeza :)

        Hola amiguito, me sorprende que puedas usar un teclado con tan poca inteligencia en tu cabeza, saludos amigo retrasado boast
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      Tyrese.H
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      Bro do you know how hard it is to come up with a story and keep it flowing while having to read shit comment from people like you who never tried to write one
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      Venom
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      soo many dislikes for what ?.....
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    Revenant98
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    honestly I don't know what to think of this novel, the MC keeps complaining that everything he wrote was cliché, with retarded characters and I don't know what else, but basically the story is like that, it's so copied to "the novel's extra" I don't know how it's going to be 'different' in the future, and it's silly how the MC goes from one place to another without doing anything really productive, it's like, you know what happens in the future and you know what the villains are but You don't do anything, I literally come up with dozens of ideas on how to deal with them early on without affecting the plot, but he decides it's better to let them passively accumulate hatred until he activates the villains in a chain (which is what he is having. complaining) the scenarios are forced, like the story of the protagonist of his novel, he wants to make it seem tragic and regrettable but it is only a pity how he tries to force it, there is no development in the details of the characters, he only gave them a background scenario and that's it. ... at some point I started to feel that the author is similar to the MC
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    Daoist Ghoul
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    soo folks, join us on discord and help strengthen the power of Donna faction for the waifu wars
    We need all the help we can get
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      Seeker_Of_Fun
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      Heh says who
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    Sunny_Neptune
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    I can't help but say that I found the content entertaining and engrossing, went through Total 160 chapters in a day, hungry for more..
    Initial 40 chapters is like an information dump, it is redundant however necessary in order to establish however would follow later.
    The author gets better in his execution as the story progresses ...
    Scope of improvement is indeed there..
    Since he is new, I believe, in time he would develop as time goes... I hope he does not take things too casually and ends up being the same MC that he is writing about.. That would be a bummer, won't it? Jokes Apart, I wish him luck and best wishes ..
    The story has a lot of potential, plot elements are engaging, there are few pot holes and sometimes the author rushes over things which should have been explained more, and elaborates things which should have been concise , the prevalence of the later is more than the former.. Overall 7.5 out of 10...
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    ZakesDee
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    A proper warning to my curious fellow readers. If you want to read this novel be prepared for torture. Well simply put it gets to a point where it's so good that you feel the updates are way too slow.. and that's like 2 chapters a day sigh

    The beginning is a bit of an arse though.. but it gets so much better when MC stops being a bystander and actually starts interacting with the world. It's worth a read but at the same time if you like it..well you'll somehow hate the update rate thereafter so be warned. bossgif
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      Magekoij1458
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      Bruh, first of all, you are reading it on a pirated website and now you are complaining about how releases are slow. You have to wait months or even years for some novels and also the author is a student. He doesn't have all the time in the world like you.
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        ZakesDee
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        Bruuuh... that sounded like a complaint to you?? constraint . That's simply me telling people they'll enjoy it so much they'll wish he can upload quicker pressure ... don't assume cause I talked about upload time I also have all the freetime in the world bud.. I just have time for his novel cause I enjoy it.

        Relax, take it easy and chill bud.
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        Zein
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        When your reading comprehension goes brrrrtthr8ebeiweheiehe Stoopid hoomam
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    gaga
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    One thing that i hope is...when you make the ending...please dont be a suck ending like novels extra...its like its worthless for me to read hundreds of chapters if the ending just spoil the mood
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