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The Author's POV by Entrail_JI

The person whom the world revolves around.

The person who defeats all of his opponents,... Read more
The person whom the world revolves around.

The person who defeats all of his opponents, and ultimately gets the beautiful girl.

The sole existence all villains fear.

That is the protagonist.

What about me?

As a failed author who had only one success throughout his whole career, I had reincarnated into my late novel.

«This is it»

I thought, as I tightly clenched my fist.

Did I just get reincarnated in my own novel?

Is this where I reincarnate in a novel and become the protagonist?

No.

Sadly it’s not that kind of novel, as I reincarnated as a mob.

The world doesn’t revolve around me.

The girls don’t come flocking towards me.

The cheat items don’t come to me.

«Phew»

I let out a sigh of relief.

«Thank god I’m not the protagonist»

I joyfully shouted as tears streamed down my cheeks.

Wait, are you curious as to why I don’t want to be the protagonist?

I did forget to mention the most important thing when I was describing a protagonist.

That is…

They are calamity magnets.

I just died. If I learned something from that, it’s that it really isn’t a pleasant experience.

If possible let me live a long stable life.

Thank you, whoever reincarnated me.

I would later come to regret these words…

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Reader Disclaimer:

There are two MCs in this story.
1. The original MC of the novel
2. The author that transmigrates in the novel
In the beginning, the author plays the role of an extra with no ambition other than quietly waiting for the story to end. He is almost like a babysitter that watches over the plotline, however, this will only be in the first 40 chapters or so as he will soon be dragged into the plotline regardless of how much he doesn’t want to.

The MC may come off as someone that has no ambition in the beginning but as the story progresses it will change

Also, there may be a bit of info-dumping at the beginning of the novel (at least the first 30 chapters), but there shouldn’t be anymore in the following chapters. Well…being a new author I may end up doing it again. If I do so please do criticize me and scold me. If you don’t scold me how am I supposed to improve the story? What’s great about writing web novels is that I actually can hear your advice and opinions. You are just as much invested in this story as I am, so please help me out.

Well…I would appreciate it if you don’t leave a one star…not that I can stop you

Also, yes, the novel is inspired by TNE (The novel’s extra) you may see a lot of similarities in the beginning, but for future chapters the differences will start to become more apparent. I hope you manage to stick through it. Also, don’t come reading this expecting it to be another TNE. In fact don’t compare the two. If you do, the flaws of this book will become more apparent as you read ruining the whole experience Collapse
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    Hansbk
    + 88 -
    My interest is dying after following this novel since ch 100-ish

    I have another novel replacing this as my Top 1 and I think I'm gonna stack this one. There's no more, "Oh. I wonder what's gonna happen to this, or that?" Right now MC's skill is like, he'll be stronger but it'll again be a *click* and move on.

    This is still a great novel. But I think it's peeked. Unless MC actually loses--for once-- or important people die, important here are not the girls or MC's parents; they can die a dog's death and it won't affect the firepower. Important characters are all the males and the teachers. (Don't u notice that? during fights, the girls only fight mobs, bigger mobs but still mobs.)

    MC, Kevin, Jin, Donna, Monica, (Angelica).

    Make Anglica get spotted. Or Kevin suffer major damage (totally unexpected). Donna or Monica Killed (I prefer Donna, audience has more bond w/ her). Or something happened to MC. Like the book -- have Everblood come over and burn the book and make the future prediction stop. Raise the stake, higher the bar, make a loss feel like an actual loss.

    Replace it with a buff for the girls, give them a glow-up. Their power level is so small they seem like bigger ants. (But don't give it right now, the team is already super positive they seem invincible.)

    The story right now is walking on layers and layers of safety nets. It's been a long time since MC is in an actual threat of death. Like during Angelica's fight -- that's the best fight so far, imo -- where we are put in a place where, "Oh shit, I wonder what he's gonna do."

    It's fine if we know MC's gonna win. But don't make it obvious to the point, "Ah. This will be over in a *click* because this villain has no build-up." (#°Д°)

    What Author needs right now is to introduce villains, tons, and tons of villains. To the point where it lurks everywhere and MC has no arc in peace. Or Author might as well add a slice of life to the tag (¬_¬ )

    I hope Author see this, "Merry Christmas & Happy New Year, mate. And I wish you the best for the year ahead. Cheers." \( ̄︶ ̄*\))
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      Hansbk
      + 11 -
      Geez, It always not easy to stop following up on novels if you've been doing it for a while. escape I'm sorry but Tyranny of Steel suits my taste more.
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        mysteriosoldman
        mysteriosoldman
        + 11 -
        i see a brother from TOS wiseacre
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          Hansbk
          + 00 -
          Hooh...? Also a fellow brother of ToS?
          Well... As they said... "God With Us" . wiseacre
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            Abinash
            Abinash
            + 10 -
            Hello brothers from TOD “ GOD WITH US”
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      Entrail_JI
      Entrail_JI
      + 151 -
      First time here in a while.
      Anyhow, this is very fair criticism. But I'll just say one thing.
      All this peaceful stuff happening right now is on purpose. (so are the items he is getting and everything. Be it Monolith ring, mask, watch, poison...)
      Everything that is currently being given to him is a long set up for the next arc, which will happen after the tournament.
      ...and well.
      Let's just say that, s*it will hit the fan real hard. There will be no peace for quite a while after this.
      I won't say any spoilers, but, I do recommend you to stockpile. Because there will be a lot of cliffs. (why? Cus i've mastered it's dao and I shall naturally exploit it)
      Anyhow, it's gonna be a gruesome arc. (At least that's what I'd like to think it will be)
      P.S. I love tyranny of steel too. So good.
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        Ryuen
        Ryuen
        + 20 -
        Wow..so authors do comment on this website ... Would be lying if I said I'm not surprised middle
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          Mark_Arrows
          Mark_Arrows
          + 30 -
          I write a little sci-fi, got no issue with Ranobes posting the chapters up here. The book's free to read anyhow, so folks here are kind of helping me out by posting for me.

          Other authors don't like that their work is being hosted somewhere they have no control over, like moderation. And others are more legally bound - like if they tried to go on amazon, they are required to make sure the story is taken down everywhere, or else amazon will pull their earnings and basically paddle them for something they don't have control over.

          And then you got some authors on my boat that don't see anything wrong with it. I'm just happy other people that would have never known about my fic get a chance to read it. ^^
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        Hansbk
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        shocked3 shocked3 shocked3 He actually read my comment thrill
        s*it will hit the fan real hard. There will be no peace for quite a while after this.
        thrill Shit, I think I just came...
        I do recommend you to stockpile. Because there will be a lot of cliffs. (why? Cus i've mastered it's dao and I shall naturally exploit it)
        LMAO cheerful Trust me, I'm well aware of that one. I never once doubt your Dao. For I was hanged by it, every day, for breakfast of which it lasted for months on end. Thus, I can confidently say this, "I have seen Thee, and Thou art enough. To know, God made Thee as good as Thou art beautiful. " bowbowbow #Entrail_JI#
        P.S. I love tyranny of steel too. So good.
        Ohh... This is a surprising find... then, I'll end this with "GOD WITH US!" wiseacre
        and really looking forward to the GRUESOME ARC thrill
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      Venom
      + 03 -
      i agree with u this has started to become boring
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    SupremeMagus
    SupremeMagus
    + 10 -
    Updateeeee plssss
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    skuxxman
    + 111 -
    Um yeah, I don't like this at all. MC is very wishy-washy with ever changing goals and personality. I know the author said in the description that it was similar to novels extra, it has only gotten more similar since chapter 40. MC is an actual idiot, always doing stupid stuff and even starting to get involved with the protagonists.
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      kumb
      + 30 -
      Try reading till chapter 70.
      If you don't like the development then, than its just not for you. But usually, from 55-70 is where the novel truly picks up. (It's where the novel's charm truly starts)
      P.S. i'm not the guy who disliked your comment.
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        Nobelnerd
        Nobelnerd
        + 00 -
        Lol
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    UmbrellaInARainyDay
    + 10 -
    This novel is shooting up the ranks like a bullet. Just yesterday it was rank 14 and now it has overtaken MVS!!!! Can It take down CO?
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  5. Offline
    CatsAreOverrated
    + 50 -
    4.7/5, It's a bit cliche, and has a rough start, but honestly it was enjoyable nonetheless.
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    Qyingying
    + 27 -
    Ranobes has to do something about people botting to mass rate novels, this novel is a 3/5 at its peak.
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      CatsAreOverrated
      + 41 -
      No.
      It's good, at the very least, compared to the other webnovel novels in this site. And if it doesn't bother you what would you consider as a 5/5?
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      kumb
      + 50 -
      this novel gets 5000+ clicks per chapter lately. What in the world gave you the genius idea that this is botted?
      Just because you don't like something doesn't mean others will share the same opinion as you.
      Or is anything you don't like that is liked botted?
      What kind of way of thinking is this? It's as though you think the world revolves around your opinion, which surprise surprise, it doesn't.
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      Entrail_JI
      Entrail_JI
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      Damn it. You caught me. How did you know I was botting? what
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        Devorer
        + 10 -
        Oh my, my guess is correct? lshock
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          Entrail_JI
          Entrail_JI
          + 21 -
          indeed.
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    Eye_patch_
    + 30 -
    Ah..we need illustration for the characters.... author if u see this pls grant our wish🙏
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      Naveen777
      + 00 -
      illustrations available in the official discord...
      (maybe u already know but I am just informing)
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    Xanxian
    + 10 -
    Ow yeah!! thrill
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    Mao Miaomiao
    + 102 -
    Here's some of my novel recommendations to fellow brothers:
    Top R-18 : https://ranobes.net/user/Mao+Miaomiao/favorites/128814/
    Best Translated : https://ranobes.net/user/Mao+Miaomiao/favorites/128801/
    Intelligent MC : https://ranobes.net/user/Mao+Miaomiao/favorites/128800/
    Top 1% Webnovels : https://ranobes.net/user/Mao+Miaomiao/favorites/128827/
    P.S. Do tell if I have missed any hidden gem. boast
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      Hansbk
      + 10 -
      Out of ur top 1% list, u truly enjoy Chrysalis most? ( •_•)>⌐■-■

      There's a lot of Gold in that list. But Chrysalis? Really?
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        Mao Miaomiao
        + 21 -
        I found it decent enough bro, the system is great. The novel's not contracted to webnovel as the author has some difference in opinion with webnovel. So a lot of people overlook this novel(Literally Hidden gem). I think it's a decent read.
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      Entrail_JI
      Entrail_JI
      + 30 -
      You missed invisible dragon
      That not being number 1 is a crime tbh
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        Aimzay
        + 00 -
        Ah yes, a fellow invincible dragon reader, the plot twist with Duike was so shocking right
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          Entrail_JI
          Entrail_JI
          + 00 -
          Screw him!
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    Hansbk
    + 70 -
    Every day it's inching closer to the top 10... Hope the novels doesn't die out before making it to number 1
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