Renegade Immortal仙逆

Xian Ni

It’s been so long since I completed a novel .

Taking a step, flying, 1000 feet away, with a normal expression, while the step causes the ground to crack like a web all over. Cold eyes, that are colder than the coldest, and then they shine, coldly, while indifferently taking a step, while looking down at the person looking up....and then coldly looking with an indifferent look, then more eyes shining, while they shine, then softly saying some words! while cloths and hair flutter and move about without wind, with cold indifferent eyes that shine.

BEWARE
the number of times people's eyes light up may cause permanent blindness. Read at your own risk.

Story development: 5/5
Writing quality: 3/5
World background: 5/5
Character design: 4.5/5

Pros
1.) Er gen novels always have great storyline and world background which I always liked.

2.) Er gen novels always has a charm which captures readers attention. Sometimes he also is able to make us feel like we were right beside MC in his journey and we were part in every MC good, sad or bad times

Cons
1.) Author has made quite spelling mistake, changing characters names on whim, changing cultivation level name and many more. There are even sentence which does not even make sense. I don't know whether these mistakes are due to translation and author himself.

2.) Sometimes author just write same thing again and again either in same way or different ways. And all these way of writing will mean same like an example if MC is angry then author will same thing in many ways just to write more chapters.

MC keep on getting chased by these old farts. It's getting repetitive.

I tried watching the donghua they created for this and it’s just not for me. But I guess that may be due to the fact that this novel is not for me anymore. Back when I first started reading novels and came across this, it was a gem for sure. However after so many years of reading other novels and the novels developing I just don’t think this book is top tier anymore.

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Er Gen is good but that doesn't mean all of his novel is good, specially this one which one of his first.
Er Gen changes his plot a lot, like every 100 chapters there's plot twists and after it's accumulated it becomes plot hole or forced shit.

For Ex. Heaven shaking powerful spell, never used again after introduction. New Heaven Shaking Cultivation Method?? Forgotten like after 20 chapters. MC becomes Heavens Young Master after 1 chapter running like a dog.

I can't understand how this novel get so highly recommended, I even doubt whether this recommending people read same ending as me.

Always tragedy, but my favorite

My rating suffering/10 would definitely recommend

Easily the best cultivation novel I've read imo. Whenever I think of cultivation novels, this is the 1st book that comes to mind. Now granted, I haven't read all the popular cultivation novels, but of all of them, this stands out to me.

Heads up -> There is no harem and the romance barely doesn't exist, which is a plus for me.

Wang Lin is a character that suffers throughout the whole novel, but still finds a reason to push through and get stronger. I wouldn't say the character is original and different, I would be lying, but he is unique enough and evolves in a decent pace throughout the novel.

The would building is great imo, even though there's that, I guess cliché (?) of having new areas with stronger enemies, its mostly well explained and you, as a reader are prepared for it, since the author mentions it one way or another in the previous chapters, so it fells more natural in a way.

The story is very normal at first, but its develops really well as the plot progresses. One thing I really like, is that a decent amount of characters he talks to and befriends at the early stages of the novel are relevant in a way, or are at least not forgotten.

The cultivation system is explained really well, and it cant even be compared to most cultivation novels, the system is mostly the same as ErGen's other novels, but it has a different approach as with every book he has wrote. In short, its deep, well explained and logic in a way you'll understand.

Now, the ending. It was not what I was expecting! And I'm glad it wasn't! The ending, while for some might not be as good, to me, it was really great, so look forward for it.