A Record of a Mortal's Journey to Immortality凡人修仙传

HELLO brothers
I'm a new author and I had just published my first work today.
If possible give it a try reading and if you find it interesting then share it with other readers
Although I'm new but I will try to maintain the pace of one chapter a day, you can even provide some suggestions if you like, it will be very helpful for me
And trust me you won't regret it

This is my novel's link

http://wbnv.in/a/e7jnVch

On Webnovel
It's title is
The endless becoming: the dream that refused to end.
By nameless_stranger

Love how you can see when someone has a hate boner against you and you can just see a section with one dislike each, even tho half or more of the comments are quite neutral/possitive. Sure its just alittle bit of time waste(probably less than this comment), but still somewhat funny to see.

Sadly i will now drop this novel after 1,7k ch.(I realy wish it wouldve made sense to continue but its just forcing it past this)
I overall quite liked the novel and probably wouldve continued the novel if it still had things that kept me going, but sadly it lost most of the good things pretty much already at around ch 600-700.

The good parts of the novel are:

- Worldbuilding

- Scaling

- Somewhat creative ideas espically for its time like the cheat even if not groundbreaking

- Chars to an extent aswell(not very good, but still good enough mostly, even if there are very questionable things in the first few hundred ch of the novel, one of the few parts that got better later in the novel and was worse in the beginning)

- till ch 600-700(not past that anymore tho/not importend) mc was a few times in seclusion for a while and those parts where by far the best the rest is trash compared to it

The bad parts are:

-Fights are complete trash espically since they are somewhat repetitive and always are about treasures and that the mc luckly had the correct cultivation art or treasure to win, the other way is steamroll where that isnt importend

-Random nervs everytime mc gets to a new area/region(is espically the case later in the beginning it was pretty much the oposite)

- MC has the doubly bad type of luck which is first of way to high like its stupid and secondly its (more importendly) the type that instead of the mc wanting to go do something to try his chances it quite literaly forces him to go somewhere most of the time only to than get insanly bad luck only for that to be negated by even more stupid good luck, the mc rarely has a voice in this and is mostly pulled by some bs from one treasure to the next alsmost like arrows randomly fly towards him and death is chasing him from behind

- Most good things just wont happen later in the novel like his seclusion phases or his cheat(the mc also never makes his own techniques or recipes even tho he has the perfect cheat for that)

-Cliche(even tho its old and those things probably werent than, doesnt change that it is for todays time)

-Lastly its way too streched like ive read longer novels that felt half as long as even those 1,7k ch and even they where streched.

There are other things like that the cultivation realms arent good later on(feels more like just a realm that requires more energy/higher types of it with tribulations ontop) or some minor things that could be added for both good and bad, but mostly are neutral

All in all not nessarly a timewaste but sadly the good things (for me) got cut and only the things that where bad remained (mostly, some were still there, even if i skipped alot of ch) in total 5-5,5/10. 6,5-7,5/10 for the first 600-700 ch
Overall dont realy recommend for experienced readers(if they arent bored because they have literaly nothing left to read), but should be fine for newer readers or maybe even intermidiate. If you didnt yet read Birth of the demonic sword read that its somewhat similar(like they truly do feel similar, even tho its like 2 years since ive read that one) just better in almost everyway(even tho its also not the best cultivation novel its better than this one and is similar enough)