I'm the King Of Technology by lumydee

I didn't understand what people meant by cringe, but after reading chapter 4, I cringed hard. I cannot continue lol.

I could bear with most stuff, like the dumb king who would conveniently throw away a precious city, no matter how poor, to the MC, or the loyal knights that are conveniently given to the MC. All these can be said to have a reason and I can overlook it.

What I can't overlook is how the author underestimate human emotions. Just cause you give 100 copper coin more in salary, the servant will be extremely loyal? Just cause the kingdom don't want the knights, and you give them more coins, they will be extremely loyal? That's not how it works. Super knights? So cringe.

Personally, I think the author made a mistake by creating a system that forces the MC (Landon) to do certain things, otherwise he will die. Landon is a moral character and would probably listen to the systems' objectives most of the time.

The author should have tackled the system tasks in a different way, for example the system could have set consequences that not directly constituted the death of the MC, like bad luck for the country. Like the carrot and the stick approach so the MC would have maintained a sense of independent influence on the plot.

In the whole story I just see Landon as a puppet of the system that is forced to do whatever the system of his demands, otherwise 'he will be struck by lightning'.
The writing quality of the novel is poor, he has a way of describing things that annoys the hell out of me for example, this happened by 1000 workers building or saying this will happen here etc. Bro, just show us how it is done sometimes, I'm convinced that the writing quality is just in general shit and not worth looking forward.

This way of writing prevents you from using your imagination, a grandiose scene for example etc.
I was truly hoping that this novel would succeed because of the technological side of the novel on top of medieval kingdom building, but sadly I only got more disappointed the further I read. The last hope was blown away.

Recommendation: Don't get your hopes up, the concept is truly spectacular IMO but the execution by the author was TRASH to say it lightly.
Rating 2.3 - 2.5

The first chapters are horrible, the plot armor gets to be irritating, because it's so pathetic that it doesn't even cause emotion, MC needs something and out of nowhere he has it in his territory. And also his harem, if a girl looks at him, it's already for marriage. Is the author a f#cking virgin?

First chapters really bad and cringe dropped

I have read until about chapter 1200. And i must say it is on of the most enjoyable novel in here for my taste. I like that he builds a hold kingdom op and have an advantage over the medieval people of the world. The system he has is a dobbelt edge sword that i do not particularly like. It helps him with information about interuders and Spies in hes kingdom so there is no leakage of info, but it also gives him missions that he has to do or he will die, do not like forcefull systems. Some of the arcs are a little to long for my taste, it can get some boring sometimes. I like that we get side stories about his people and se their side and that his hard work is paying off. I like it and will give it 4,5/5

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#panic

Alright It was a fun ride (this is a lie) but I have to go because nowadays chapters have few word than this comment and I can tolerate being treated as a dumb reader and bad bad baaaad grammar and cheese but this kind of "I don't give a f#ck" is unbelievable. Seriously wtf author? I don't spend a penny but at least think of this one fan who actually like and pay for this on webnovel

At this point i just want the novel im reading to not have incest like tyranny of steel.

This is so dumb. The only thing I like about this novel is the idea of giving advance technology to medieval folk and watching their reaction this is so fun unfortunately I can get enough of it and keep reading the equivalent of... no at least Invisible Dragon make me laugh to tear, you can expect dialogue worse than that. The author has a tendency to hype something to death then when the thing happen you feel underwhelm at best. Big example



I sincerely applause readers from webnovel.com who keeps paying for such a sh*tty novel even if I was a billionaire I wouldn't want to spent a cent on this.

Villains are dumb, and there are a shitton of them.

The plot get ridiculous from managing a kingdom to