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The Undying Immortal System by G Tolley

Living in a world of cultivators is like walking on the edge of a knife. If you slip, the best... Read more
Living in a world of cultivators is like walking on the edge of a knife. If you slip, the best result is a deep cut, but the likely result is death. Su Fang is brought into this world completely unprepared, knowing nothing, and lacking any skills to help him. This means only one thing. He is destined to die.

Fortunately, Su Fang is immortal. Not because he cannot die, but because when he does, he un-dies.

In this world, everyone is born with a Golden Finger to help them survive. Su Fang’s blessing is to return to the beginning of his journey after every death. His System provides him credits upon death with which he can purchase absolutely anything, but he is only rewarded enough credits to help him return to the point he died. To advance further, he must rely on himself.

This is both a time loop story and a xianxia story. At different points, one element is more pronounced than the other, but it is always a combination of both.

This can also be considered a slice-of-life story. It isn’t about saving the world or defeating a big bad guy. It is about living life in an unfamiliar world where it can sometimes seem like everyone is out to kill or enslave you.

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Expectations:

- Detailed cultivation and crafting.

- Limited fighting scenes through most of the story.

- Slow cultivation progression. Each level will be explored in detail.

- Somewhat unreliable narrator. Cultivation affects the mind, and it will affect the MC’s perceptions of the world. Facts can generally be trusted, but many times there are layers beyond what the narrator sees.

- Xianxia tropes with a world built around them so they make sense. Why do young masters go crazy shouting "You dare!"? Why do their guards willing throw themselves to their death against someone with significantly higher cultivation? All that and more is explained.

- This is a story of cultivation. It has cultivation in the xianxia sense, working to gain strength and power, but, more importantly, it is a story about cultivating the self. Finding ways to make yourself a better version of you.

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    One of the wrose novel i had the displeasure of reading
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    system of the swordsman who uses swords
    gunman with pistols system
    bow and arrow archer system


    i ran out of ideas give me some
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      Harem with a dickless system
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        So just reverse harem.
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    Mr.
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    • 1.0
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    0/10
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    arz
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    Boring Novel with Genre Weak MC to Weakest MC

    Usually when you read cultivation Novels you feel excitement when reading the story or satisfied when the MC reaches a higher REALM, but no this story is boring and SKIPPABLE. The MC is the weakest b!tch of the same power level even cannon fodder of the same cultivation can kill this TR@SH MC, he can't fight anyone his own realm because he's a worthless WEAKLING MC that can get one shot by someone who has lower realm than him.

    The MC focused to much on his alchemy skills but where did that get him ? Except being the weakest MC that can get one shot by someone who has lower realm than him. What help this did this useless Alchemy even gave him except nothing but making him a weak cannon fodder. all this time and effort spent on alchemy could have been bought by the MC if he was in a higher Realm.

    Well others might say this novel focuses on alchemy and how smart the MC is but no!! the MC is not smart he is barely average he does not make full use of time loops/System or exploit them in the best possible way. In short WEAKEST MC ever not even smart or cunning MC not trying to make full use of System and Time Loop MC bland and boring Personality MC. THERE IS NO REASON TO LIKE THIS TR@SH MC
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      Judge too early
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        arz
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        Im at chapter 100 and clearly the MC is still the weakest b!tch cannon fodder of the same realm and he's still at alchemy which is waste of words, chapters and is very skippable, you're saying im judging too early??? it's fcking chapter 100 that is in no way in any world or universe got anything to do with being "EARLY"
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          Chill man, although MC still weak at chap 100, which is a bit off-putting, but that's part of the journey. Broaden ur view man , don't be focused on a particular aspect. It's a foundation buildup. And for someone with an "immortal" system, protecting the 'way' is not as important as it is to someone without one.
          But yeah he was weak then.
          Isn't strong enough to be called invincible as of now(312), but he's strong enough.
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            arz
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            Nahhh the MC is just pathetic and incompetent, anyone else will make better decisions and judgement if they're in the position of the MC. For example you rico would make a better MC than the original one
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              You would be surprised that there really are a lot of stupid and dumb guys in this world.
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    The MC is dumb af. I just can't anymore.
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      + 60 -
      Please give me some examples of their stupidity so I can judge if I can tolerate the poison.
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        He’s not. MC is just a normal pleb in a world where cultivation techniques literally f#ck with thier mindset. Like the first few tech’s that MC gets his hands on are designed to mold him into a slave. Ofc, it doesn’t truly matter as MC will reset upon death.
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          Hmmm so its a example of the MC having forced character derailment.... That should be tolerable depending on the severity and how the MC reacts to it once free.
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            It's one of those you have to read to understand. MC isn't a Mary Sue. He often takes sub-par actions. But thing is, it doesn't really matter most of the time since resets mean little consequences. But there is genuine character growth unlike the majority of Chinese MCs who are all hyper-competent psycopathic killers right out of the box. Depends on how much patience you have for the story and the MC tbh.

            At the same time don’t take this to be some sort of master piece or even compare against top line novels like Longevity Simulation or LOTM.
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              + 91 -
              The mc has lived for thousands of years and is still a crybaby
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                Did he though? He has lived lifetimes… But the majority were under serious mental manipulation and his resets mean he doesn’t really carry that much ‘emotional experience’ across. Which is by design to avoid serious PTSD. That being said, sure. MC does come across as someone who’s a bit autistic. As in low EQ. Ofc definitely emotionally incontinent compared to the average xianxia MC.
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                  I still think the story is pretty good, but the thing that bothers me is how emotional and irrational he is. Like I don't understand why he feels so indebted to some characters when the interactions he had with them were basically equal exchange.
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                  It's not really logical I agree, but people rarely are. And I'm fairly sure the MC is at least a bit touched in the head after going through everything he's gone through and is grasping at connections to people to stay sane. Even if did connections are basically reset everytime. Tbh I kinda agree with this over something like in Regressor's Tale where that MC is like 'everyone dies at reset and they're all basically completely new people everytime around'. That's just a terribly depressing way of looking at things.
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                  He spent a few centuries using cultivation method that, aside from making him essentially slave, emphasized returning debts. That left it's mark on developing of his soul, especially considering that those lives happened near the beginning of its development.
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      So, it's another "A Regressor’s Tale of Cultivation" and.... NOT "My Longevity Simulation"
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        How much is it like "What if i can't die" ?
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          Surprisingly very little. Just near the start and the repeat suicide gets kiboshed quiet quickly.
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    It's good, but some of the lives go on too long when they arent really that crucial to the plot later on.
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    I’ve read a lot of this, it’s decent but the mc is painfully stupid. I wish he would dump his points into intelligence, or anything useful.
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    + 220 -
    I swear down, if you ever read a synopsis and they start giving you a list of warnings/expectations, there's a 98% chance that it's an English original book 😂
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      + 150 -
      Honestly it's a pretty good way of filtering the mid novels from the good ones lmao.

      Good novels would just let the writing do the talking.
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        + 61 -
        There are exceptions but you're right
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      + 103 -
      In recent years almost every English novel has been garbage butwhy

      they should leave this job to their brothers from China and Korea 🙏😭
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    This is both a time loop story and a xianxia story

    Man after Longevity Simulation, my standards are too high for time loop cultivation stories forwhat
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    It's a good synopsis. I'll read it to draw my own conclusions.


    (I'm almost reaching the upper intermediate rank of extreme donwvote)
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