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Void Evolution System by Crocs_is_Dead

5 years ago, Earth was subject to an event now known as the “World Awakening”.

At that... Read more
5 years ago, Earth was subject to an event now known as the “World Awakening”.

At that time, the world completely changed. Mana awakened in the world, gates began opening, and a holographic screen showed up in front of the eyes of every human that outlined their “status”.

Each individual was given a talent to start with, ranging from simple abilities like enhanced eyesight to insane fantasy stuff like pyrokinesis.

And within this myriad of abilities, Damien awakened a spatial affinity with the skill “short-distance teleportation”.

At first, he was excited, thinking about intense battles and gaining great power, but the reality was quick to shoot him down.

His ability only worked in the area 10 meters around himself, and his physical stats were insanely weak, leaving him tired after using his ability a couple of times.

Disillusioned by his weakness, Damien lived a quiet life doing anything he could to meet ends meet, until one day, everything changed.

Damien was betrayed and thrown into a gate, left to fend for himself in a labyrinth of beasts.

Something snapped in him that day. He refused to stay weak and keep his head down any longer.

When he emerged from the darkness, he found himself in a new world with no idea how to return to earth.

However, he wasn’t the same kid he was when he first fell. Collapse
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    Man these are getting boring. I want to regress or erase my memories of good novels so i can read them again and have those mix emotions when i read them. Not some novel that are so generic to the point you can see where the story is going.
    From weakest to strongest, unique ability, "Audience is like wooahh he is the only one that can do that?! He is an irregular umu".
    Orphaned to living a tough life, getting connections, go to academy, show off.
    Don't mind me, im just a bit on the edge and its making me irritated when I can't seem to find a good novel to satisfy my boredom
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      KingJake122
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      your not the only one its hard gloom
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        Urh gloom
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      I know how you feel man. I wish I could go back to the days I had just discovered them and stayed up all night reading on novelplanet
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    This is the worst type of novel to me, taking a real place in an alternate universe or future setting and ignoring any semblance of local worldview and social structure and replace it with on that does not exist there. Not to mention the plot and events are a mix and match copy paste from several other popular novels.
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    + 123 -
    How did I not realize it was Calli?

    Yeah...
    I'm not reading this.
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    Eon
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    Is that Calli on the novel cover? And based of the synopsis this seems like a mix between solo leveling and arifureta
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    This novel is a rip-off of Solo leveling and Arifureta, the MC is one of the weakest hunters, his mother became a potato his father is missing somewhere (basically solo leveling).
    When he was in the dungeon one young master was jealous of him because the pretty girl liked the MC for some reason so he threw the MC into a cliff thus it's begun the MC's journey crawling from the abyss to come back to the upper world (basically Arifureta)
    Oh yeah, the MC is quite stupid and he also often whines about him not having a plot armor
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      + 180 -
      Probably could use a spoiler warning, but I appreciate this review.
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      + 115 -
      its free, and it can past your time
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        Samwalski
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        Yeah and so is breathing(free most of the time). Doesnt mean I enjoy it
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      the MC is one of the weakest hunters, his mother became a potato his father is missing somewhere (basically solo leveling).


      Basically any Korean novel based on hunters lol
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        Name some then?
        A novel besides solo leveling that has: The MC is the weakest before he got his plot armor, his mother is a potato due to awakening disease(idk whatever it is called), and a mysterious missing father
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          I was referring in a general context: a pitiful and bad family situation, whereas the MC is always on the small-fry range before his 'awakening'

          -The S-Classes That I Raised
          -I’m Not a Regressor

          and so on
          there is even a starter pack (Posted by
          u/Monokuma-pandabear)
          -system
          -sick family/debt
          -given the lowest rank
          -dies/almost dies at the start
          -dungeon/tower
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            The two examples that you gave are not necessarily similar to the settings of solo leveling (weak MC, potato mother, missing father)
            My point is this novel is glaringly similar to Solo Leveling and for your information I'm not the only one who thinks like this, just go to the webnovel and read the paragraph comment you will find people who called out how similar this novel is to SL.
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          saw a few such manhwas
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          + 30 -
          suicide hunter, solo leveling, solo login, solo spellcaster... I know there are many more, but it's such a staple cliche that I honestly don't remember. I filter it out whenever I see it.
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            Using a similar concept is still okay I mean just look at how many isekai, harem, and VR novels are out there but if the content is 90% similar it's called plagiarism which this book is.

            For a good example, The author's POV got inspiration from The Novel's Extra but those two are completely different.
            meanwhile this one, the weakest hunter, potato mother, a missing dad, fall into the abyss, arm got eaten by a bear, eating monster makes him stronger, met a companion in the abyss, yada yada
            tell me if it's not called plagiarism then I don't know what anymore
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              As long as the plot itself is different, even if the setting is the same I don't consider it plagiarism. So if he then goes conquering dungeons to fight god, then it's plagiarism.
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                Just read it yourself if you don't find any glaring similarities then I say your opinion is biased
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                  I might read it eventually, but not now. It seems quite shit tbh.
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          it doesnt really matter it was the same idea at the beginning it was different after that and its pretty good novel
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        better than Chinese face-slaping novels though
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    + 132 -
    Is stealing fan art of vtubers to and make it your novel cover is a thing now?
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      It's not that popular. It's only 4th that i saw.
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        Hah rookie numbers oru2x
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      Stealing somebody art to use as cover is as old as internet itself.
      Some authors even straight up say the cover is stolen
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    I was expecting something generic, but this is surprisingly well written and the plot is thought out to a surprising degree.
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      if you say by copying solo leveling and Arifureta counted as well written, then congratulation you dont read much novels yet.
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        No, no, I mean well written as in actually making sense. Some of these novels tend to have horrifying grammar due to either bad translations, or the writer not knowing enough English. The fact that this is actually readable makes it well written.

        As for plot, it is incredibly derivative of many works from Korea, "dungeon outbreak", Arifureta, for the dungeon assassination attempt and the drop in the abyss, and China for the whole dao and cultivation thing going on in the newest chapters.

        But even as derivative as it is, it does manage to blend these together without making it feel like they don't "fit". Besides, pretty much anything coming out from these newer novelsm lately is pretty much all a rehash of the big novels just with different characters.
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          The fact that this is actually readable makes it well written

          Your standard is really low about this subject

          Besides, pretty much anything coming out from these newer novelsm lately is pretty much all a rehash of the big novels just with different characters.

          Please, there are differences between taking other books as an inspiration and blatantly copy-paste the same events from other books.
          For a good example, The author's POV got inspiration from The Novel's Extra but those two are completely different.
          meanwhile this one, the weakest hunter, potato mother, a missing dad, fall into the abyss, arm got eaten by a bear, eating monster makes him stronger, met a companion in the abyss, yada yada 17
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            Naw fall into the abyss cuz young master doesn't like the fact that the pretty girl likes MC, arm got eaten by a bear, eating monster makes him stronger, met a companion in the abyss? This is legit copy paste of the storyline of Arifureta. I watched S1 (which was shit) of the anime and a few episodes of S2, and have finished book 10 in the LN. This is an extremely cut and dry case of a copy. This is no longer inspiration. I saw in other reviews it was similar and I just thought it was "heavily inspired" but this isn't even that. Bro took the first half of like the first book
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              People downvote me for telling the truth lol, surprisingly this book has quite a few loyal followers
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                I haven't even read the first chapter of this book, so i'll take your word for it, but damn. BTW with ur response with solo leveling, most Korean Dungeon novels have similar tropes so it is to be expected if the author used those same tropes (haven't read solo leveling)
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          I respect your viewpoint but I think u are wrong, if this guy is to be believed.
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    I forgot to mention, an event in chapter 21 MAY SEEM LIKE
    , but later on in the chapter
    so take it as you will
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      Well the complaintants might only read the most vanilla vanilla
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      If my memory does not betray me,
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        That’s after crocs edited it, originally the young master dude
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          Ohhhhhhh
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        which i what i thought and said to that commenter in wn but then i got to know was that crocs had edited it...
        but still I wouldn't consider it ntr
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    Every time I scroll past the novel i keep thinking its astolfo on the front page instead of the Vtuber
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    Very basic, things are just jumped and skimmed over.

    A lot of narration but we dont get enough dialogue, introspection and conversations, especially after 80 chapters. Because of that we dont get to experience the events, only read about them like its some sort of report.
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      I would have actually loved to see how the system and power classifications worked but most of it is just glossed over.
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