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The Adventurous Gamer Ninja - Daichi Hekima by MonkWithAPen

The universe gave me another chance after life screwed me over.

My second life brought... Read more
The universe gave me another chance after life screwed me over.

My second life brought me to a world where people breath fire, walk on water and some people with special eyes that give them bullsh#t powers.

Well, I got the gamer ability. And I’m gonna use it to stand at the peak. But it's gonna be a long journey before I reach that summit.

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SI - MC.

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  1. Offline
    Johnk1312
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    I quite liked this novel although sometimes too wordy overall its a nice read 👍👍👍👍
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    Gunts92
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    je lis deja sur webnovel, mais vu leurs comportement avec leur site internet, c'est bien d'avoir des options supplementaires
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    Life screwed him over yet he didn't even learn from it, or at least that's what the tags tell me, cuz someone who got screwed over should at least be an antihero.
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      Pandas
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      tell that to naruto!!!
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        + 30 -
        That boy from demon slayer too
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          Pandas
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          Modoria
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      Some one has not watched many shonen shows it seems
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        I both pity and envy him/he/she/her/they/them or whatever identity (am i the only one who loses brain cells whenever people are slighted by this gender shit?!) anyway almost all shounen has good animation (fight scenes) so you’re missing out. But i stopped watching it because the mc usually lacks common sense and basic understanding. I tried to skip all the senseless scenes while watching but i just couldn’t take it anymore. Funny this realization hit and made me wonder how i could stomach all the shounen i watched but it do be like that i guess.
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    Why does everyone have to write a Naruto story? It gets old super fast, and it's not that great of a series.
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    1. Offline
      + 170 -
      It's the same as One Piece then. Or even worse than Naruto imo.
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      1. Offline
        + 131 -
        One piece fanfics are way worse than Naruto's
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          + 51 -
          IMO it's Naruto and Danmachi
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            + 20 -
            there's such thing as a danmachi fanfic?
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              + 51 -
              Yep there're a lot of danmachi fanfic in webnovel app and only a few in this website.
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              Well there are some of Marvel's and DCs , i hate mostly the aime world hopping
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              one novel that has a background setting with danmachi is Endless Path : Infinite Cosmos
              word of caution. Its basically harem city
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      Naruto is not a good anime to make a parody, Everthing that can be explored is already been done in OG, shippuden and boruto. better to take some inspiration and make your own worldbuilding.
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        That's not all, another difficulty is for authors to explore it without failing. Fanfics are nice because the world is already built, but the prob is that fans of original work often dislike changes or what they judge as "irrealistic". And with old series like that, 2 fans can have different POV about "changes" and whats realistic

        hard work but if well done you get tons of readers
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      + 42 -
      Its a training wheel for noob authors to try to write, who doesnt know where to begin to build a solid setting and foundation to their story. So they hitch a ride on establiahed popular works.
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    https://ko-fi.com/qais10
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  6. Offline
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    Read to ch105.
    Slow paced, really. World start = naruto academy start
    MC is an okay guy, evolving a little although it's mostly superficial. Quite the respect for the original.

    Cons:
    -Sometimes too wordy, not sure we need that much
    -MC system is too OP

    Pros: the novel is nice, quite cool to read, give it a shot!
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      SoldierLeitor_
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      the system is not.
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        + 10 -
        okay
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      The System isn't too op to me though. If you compared to "The Gamer" manhwa system, you'll be blown away on how overpowered the manhwa's system is. It's like there's almost no comparison. The system from this novel are just downgraded of the "The Gamer" system.
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        What you said is true, but imo it's irrelevant here. i'm reading naruto-verse, as such i "look"(as a reader) at the system in this universe, not "The Gamer"

        little spoil (if u read the gamer its ok)

        just the point-gift system is already plenty amazing there (in the ratio point gained * power given by point / naruto verse combat power)
        then there's dungeons, then theres unrealistic/absolute cheat skills
        then there's the relation between 'system-given' improvement by skill lvl-up, makes him grow at an insane rate


        note :i did read the gamer, stopped around 480 i think? well power-scale had already gone amazing there

        if u didnt read to 100 dont read further, big spoil ahead









        [s]Just reminding you that we are really super-early in the story-line, the system (only) has him set to have x10 juubi chakra, every dojutsu,master every element, highest taijutsu,highest ninjutsu, maybe even genjutsu etc.. question becomes what will he lack? That's too amazing[s]
        And all of that is ignoring his potential as a reincarnator and knowing the future plotline
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          Well, fair enough. In Naruto verse, the power scaling is not that powerful compared to The Gamer verse. So even though the system is the downgraded version, it's still too powerful.
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            Yup
            that's only the system, not his transmigration advantage. That's why "system too OP"
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      Agreed also the "leveling" of skills are not really showing their effects as much because of how many time they change, I feel like after reading Chrysalis and Book of the Dead I can't take the overpowered systems to seriously
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    someone recom me good "The gamer" fan fic
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      Project: Gamer Ver. 2
      The Gamer, DC - main, Final fantasy and some games are worlds that mc will visit.
      Not on this site but still good. Mc is mature person and behave different than your typical mc.
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        SoldierLeitor_
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        This novel has less than 26 chapters on the web-novel, don't you have another site that has more chapters? few chapters are not 100% sure if the end of the story will be good or bad.
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          Here original source 160 ch.
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            SoldierLeitor_
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            Thanks, may the community have more readers like you.
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      The games we play by ryuugi is one of the better ones.
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    Before 40th chapter, it was decent, characters are shallow, interactions are cringr, but the progression and the fact that its a naruto world fanfic redeemed its flaws(also MC didnt interact with that many people so it wasnt that noticable). After 40th chapter the whole novel went to shit, because mc turned off gamers mind (an ability that numbs his emotions and lets him stay calm). The mc who is mentally 20years old, started making stupid f#cking decisions that jeopardize not only his life but his only familys as well, just to save some boy he doesnt even really know (who is also like 7 years old, and is also a edo tensei created by orochimaru). 20 f#cking year old MC became best friends with 7 year olds.
    The author struggles with interactions and emotions, so before when mcs emotions were numbed, novel was still readable, but after that it turned to shit smh
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      SoldierLeitor_
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      really, novel 1/5.
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    + 127 -
    If it isn't harem then I can give 3 stars without reading. I would have to read to give it more. These Naruto FICS for some reason always have a f#cking harem collector mc like it's pokemon
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      Does it have harem?
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      Haha i know one fanfic - hokage master (author is Russian, so low update rate)
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      It is a harem. I was on questionable questing spelunking, and saw the author say it was going to be harem.
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    It's not bad at all, I've read a lot of fanfics and this one is pretty good in comparison, no big flaws and not super cliché either, doesn't rail road canon. 4/5
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      Ain’t no way you rated it above average. It’s dog shit.
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      1. Offline
        + 20 -
        well, I've read so much fanfiction that anything that isn't garbage is good.
        Actual great naruto fanfics are few, Like Dreaming of Sunshine.
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          + 00 -
          Can you recommend me those good naruto fanfics?
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            + 21 -
            Well I went on a dive to find some good ones that I remember.
            Dreaming of sunshine (this one is the best to be honest, has like 120 chapters or so too)
            Seeing Red (this one is a Quest over on Sufficient Velocity c o m)
            Shadow Play (this one only has like 2 chapters)
            The life and times of Hatake Kakashi, nukenin (good for a laugh)
            Squad 7 and their Accidental Instructor (also good for a laugh)
            Joie de Vivre (this one I vaguely remember liking, it's on royal road c o m)

            You can find most of these over at fanfiction n e t, if you want more just look trough the highest rated there, maybe you'll find something you like.
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          SoldierLeitor_
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          for me it's the opposite, I've seen so many junk and poorly done novels that I almost don't find anything good in a novel, like the one the author really knows how to write and it's without plot holes or without being a boring story.
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