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The Adventurous Gamer Ninja - Daichi Hekima by MonkWithAPen

The Adventurous Gamer Ninja - Daichi Hekima
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The universe gave me another chance after life screwed me over.

My second life brought... Read more
The universe gave me another chance after life screwed me over.

My second life brought me to a world where people breath fire, walk on water and some people with special eyes that give them bullsh#t powers.

Well, I got the gamer ability. And I’m gonna use it to stand at the peak. But it's gonna be a long journey before I reach that summit.

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    Hansbk
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    -- This is the novel that you're getting yourself into --

    Are you bored with Naruto using Talk-no-jutsu???
    Introducing No-Talk-no-jutsu... The story will go exactly the same as the cannon, except Author being a parasocial so MC hangs around important characters without making any changes
    and replace Naruto when he use talk-no-jutsu in every crucial moments
    with the MC using no-talk-no-jutsu.
     Okay perhaps not that overboard...

    Chapter 12:
    'Status' /// took almost half the chapter
    (Keep it up Author... Soon you'll be able to maximize the cheese status panel gives to the word count. Soon it'll be something like...)

    Chapter ???:
    'Status' MC muttered.
    -- Next Chapter --

    Chapter ??? + 1:
    Skill:
    [5. Dishwashing - Passive (LV.1): A skill obtained through continuous dishwashing. With more mastery, you can clean any dirty spots with more speed.

    Effects: +5% increase in speed] /// This is an actual Skill the MC has in Ch. 12
    -- Next Chapter --

    Chapter ??? + 2:
    Equipment:
    -- Next Chapter --

    Amazing novel... *throws book at the Author's head AGGRESSIVELY*

    Oh- Nvm, it might come sooner than I thought... Chapter 18 Status panel took 3/4 of the whole chapter.

    Note: Jump Straight to Ch 24 after reading Ch. 1; u won't miss anything.

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    Okay I start to understand the actual value of this novel now... Author is actually proficient in making Fighting Narrations (Ch 62-63) this is geniunely good; really well thoughtout .

    Too many useless notifications. This novel is literally the embodiment of System to the point of cancer. I just wish Author toned down the notification instead simply showcase it in fights, or testing, or anything but the notification format; It's too repetitive.

    Those skill names, cooldowns, +%, etc... It doesn't hold any meaning if Author doesn't show its' actual difference in combat/testing. And most of the skill ended up never being shown the difference; cause there're simply too many... and they change too rapidly. All the Author end up doing with those notifications are, literally, creating FILLERS to get more word count; as if he didn't have enough from calling up the status back to back.

    Ch. 66- 67 -- when Author narrates cannon flashback... the quality of the narrative soar to the roof. But when it's something Author made on his own it plunge back down to sub-par.

    Ch. 71 -- this is what it mean by a 'Forced Plot'. MC literally has a skill to influence ppl's thought to aggree to his suggestions.
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    Overall:
    Author is only good when full fighting narrations, and narrations when it's full summary of the cannon flashback 1 to 1. Everything else? 3/5... I'm gonna bash it too hard. Cause once u get used to skipping and ignoring the obvious flaws... It's actually a pleasant read. (I mostly write this review after seeing how sloppy the uchiha massacre was handled by the MC and was writing out of spite... Literally if u read it u would understand. But starting from Chapter 75 things start to become 4/5)
    Another Noteworth Naruto Fan-Fic: "Reborn with Tenseigan"
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      Jack Kaneki
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      Yeah they botched that shit (the uchiha massacre) as hard as Naruto Shippuden botched Madara
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    Qyingying
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    system novel without harem, big yikes.
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      Hansbk
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      "All u gotta do is scroll around the ranking list and u'll basically find harem with R18... If every novel is made horny teens like you, the website is fuc-"

      "There's already a website like that called 'wattpad'." Jiraya interrupted.

      "..."
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      Reverend Serenity
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      no you
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      Jack Kaneki
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      leveling with lust exist it is very horny but also decently good plot tho if you want the whole story you need to go to a different website if you like it and want the link to the website let me know after you read it
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      Marlboro Red
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      Reader who only likes harem, big yucks.
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      Soft Little Kitten
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      Harem sucks, let's be honest.

      I get why you and others like it, but... well, once you age a little, you'll naturally grow out of it. Unless you are a sexual deviant or something of some kind.

      Once you've seen reality for what it is, you will not want the shallow connections a harem builds.
      Harems are not love but merely lust. It's not worth the effort nor time.

      In fact, the best novels are those that inspire true emotions. Harem novels are incapable of that. They are simply too unrealistic.

      Lately I've awoken to the real truth: no romance. Without romance, there is time available for real plot, pain, angst and more pain. That's where I've found the best novels I've ever read.
      I'd advise anyone not looking for "fast food" (if you will) to take a look at the website Archive of our own (AO3). It's a bastion of fanfiction and wayyy, way, way better organised than fanfiction.net ever could be.

      There are millions of high-quality fics over there. And, well, if you wish to read those, there are also millions of smut and harem/multi fics over there as well.
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        Addict
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        Wait 5 min for postnut enlightenment to pass.
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      FredQuimby
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      you should be hunted down then sent to middle earth
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    Zibril
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    The story is too slow, 121 Ch but still at the academy. If the aouthor keep writing with this pace. I higly doubt he will finish the story. Not to mention it is just fanfiction. So if you dont like slow pace story, this is not for you my guy.
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      gfcz
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      I dont understand why fanfic writers bother writing slow paced story. We all know they're not gonna write thousand chapters novel.
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        F5 Sect Disciple
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        True facts, but at the same time, when everything is rushed it lacks substance.

        I wish the academy arc was skipped every time.

        At the same time, how long is an average arc? I wrote a fanfic with 180k words, (300k+ views) and wrote like 2 arcs and was wrapping up the third arc before I got super bored. Rushed stories lack character development. But hey, very few fanfictions can finish.

        For fun writers just lose hella motivation when getting smack talked all the time. When you get 400+ likes on a chapter, but the next is 200~ you just don't feel like writing anymore.
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    Cesar
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    Every fanfic of naruto world disappointed me in one or two ways, some of them had a harem tag (which seems to me much more illogical than having a system in Naruto world), and some had overwhelmingly strong mc from the start which killed the joy of reading the story, or novel like "Naruto: The Strongest Kakashi" (Good in the start, average in the middle part and horrible development for the latest part).
    Here mc has his huge cheat but has to work hard to achieve something. He has an interaction with the main characters of the story but his influence on the whole story only increases statically. Till the latest chapter, it seems worthy to read and even to donate to the Author for his hard work.
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      Sami
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      indeed, great read so far.
      I hope it keeps being so.
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    F5 Sect Disciple
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    #panic# add harem tag pls~
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      F5 Sect Disciple
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      Author said it was going to be harem. Lolz.
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        Reverend Serenity
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        im out then, naruto world with harem is the last thing i want to read
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    Ceaser
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    Usually I'm not a big fan of fanfic but this was really well done, excellent work.
    The story is well written, engaging, and creative.
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    gfcz
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    ch10 and i still dont know which time period he's in. Isnt it like the most basic and first thing you'd look for? Just look up at the giant stone faces ffs
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      VulcanHajin
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      Answer : Naruto age, academy will start.

      But honestly it's your bad 100%

      If you know Naruto series and ur not scrolling but actually reading, by chapter 2 you already know :

      'So my name's Daichi Hekima. I am now 5 years old. My parents died in the nine tails attack. That's a bummer. Currently living in an orphanage. And today is my birthday - March 28. And the kid who just came was called Jozu. A genin who helps out here. And the matron is a woman in her late fifties named Aiko.'
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        icycold jinpeg6039
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        Oh yeah that's all on him
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          Sigh_2912
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          Yep 😂
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    ID:entity:Kelvin
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    THE ONE WILL TAKE THE 69TH COMMENT IS THE MOST CULTURED AND THAT WOULD BE ME!!!! oru2x
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      Sigh_2912
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      I have vague memories of seeing similar comments by you on other novels too😂
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    Galaleo
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    So this is my first time reading a fanfic and it’s pretty good. The MC is likable but not an idiot, the characters from the series match what you’d expect and the world is well researched and tastefully expanded. Overall a pretty fun read I didn’t think I would enjoy.

    So far no romance. Grammar is decent. Story moves at a solid pace.

    4.5/5 as of chapter 116
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    Ihatepeace
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    Is there romance?
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      xana
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