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Vile Evil Hides Under The Veil by Grayback

Eren Idril died as an old, decrepit, and piss-poor adventurer by the maws of a D-Rank monster. He... Read more
Eren Idril died as an old, decrepit, and piss-poor adventurer by the maws of a D-Rank monster. He had a lot of unfulfilled dreams and desires that couldn’t see the light of the day after the light in his own eyes died down.

But fortunately for him and unfortunately for the world, that wasn’t his end. Eren was somehow dived back in time when he was a mere teen, attending Lionheart Academy for adventurers.

When life gives him a second chance, Eren decides to exploit it to its fullest. Experience his vile deeds as he partakes in them without feeling the slightest bit of hesitation. Collapse
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    • 3.0
    3.0
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    If you manage to endure through the school arc
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    you will end up with a solid 4.6/5 novel. Grossly underrated IMO.
    Although an unbiased evaluation would probably be a 4.3/5
    Still, you don't see that anymore with R-18 novels nowadays
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      I dont see were this novel is above 9/10 i can understand if people say that its above average maybe even good but such a high eval no it definitly isnt that good its maybe ok, but thats just it.
      Even if you read past the school arc it still is quite medicore and annoying at many places to read.
      ( I dont know if its me but mc isnt special in any way ive seen way to many mc compabale to this that are just better (just being 'evil' and ruthless just isnt special after the nth time espically if done worse than in other cases)maybe thats also one of the reason i think this stuff is average at best)
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        but that is the thing, he was not supposed to start out as special, this was a story about an average dude starting over, Tho he does get special later on with some pretty good perks. It just takes time for his speciality to show and awaken.
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          Yeah i Know but aß far as ive read ist Just average even If you consider what how hes Changed so i cant Unserstand Someone saying it IS above 9 (the device i am using hates me XD)
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    For me, this work is one of the best among the R-18 novels. I’ll tell you, don’t regret reading it. Although at the beginning there were some caciques, the work gets better every time. And the huge advantage of the novel is that the novel is updated every day. You won't have to wait too long for a chapter.
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    Discord link anyone?
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    The most annoying is huge number of repetitions of chapters , 20-30 I assume for sure
    So it's not clear how many chapters there should be in the original at all atm
    Blame the one who writes or the one who posts - I don 't know
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      blame the script copying it from the source
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    AAAAAAAA what a big smoke, literally every five or ten chapters they change their point of view to return to the main one, you have to be quite gone to be able to follow the thread of the story xD
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    going to write a fresh review at chapter 748

    I see a lot of the people commenting negative things about the beginning, but the issue at hand is that they have failed to grasp the main point of the novel.

    This is not a redo of a person who was healthy and got a second chance at life.
    This is a redo of a person who had to live in suffering and addictions until 40 and ended up dying by having his wiener bitten off. So it is not by any means a sane person getting reincarnated.

    Also you have to understand that its a person with 0 background getting reincarnated so there is no option of oh, I will do better for clan and then instantly get swarmed with resources type of thing.

    As well you need to take note of the fact that he is underaged when he gets back in time. So his only logical options are to go to school. I hate school arcs as any other guy out there, but luckily while it is the worst part of the novel, it is also short time that he stays there and goes off to another adventures.

    So what you can expect here, is a story of a mentally ill dude that gets second chance and tying to figure out how to go about it in a way that he will not be given the F by life again. Hence the Anti-hero, dark theme of the novel, as MC wants to get revenge on people that F'ed him last time, and whilst doing that stumbles upon wider world as last time he was a cheery dude(before world decided to f him) with out 0 clue to wider world, so we get introduced to the real complexities of realities involved and see our MC striving for more than just being the next baddie in the small neighbourhood.

    Story actually picks up well after the school arc, and lots of intrigue and happenings. Solid world building, and novel does well in showing MC quickly that what he thought he knew of the world previously in fact does not help him in current life at all.

    Negatives : Some of the POV switches are strange, but they rarely are good so its understandable, best to read in batches, like stockpile 10-20 chapters and then read as otherwise it can be annoying and confusing. It also seems that in latest chapters Author ends up confusing his own characters, as he names people not on the scene.

    Anyhow I personally would rate this a solid 4.5/5, only because I do not like the way POV switches are done in certain parts, what I mean is for instance is that Author progresses the story by two weeks and suddenly switches POV to someone else and starts telling the story from different perspective 2 weeks ago. Can be confusing and demotivational, hence recommended to read in batches.
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      Finally a sane comment
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      THANKS MAN..FINALLY A COMMENT I WAS WAITING TO SEE butwhy
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    i well skip this cause the polygamy tag should be removed cause the author himslef confirmed that there is no harem just open relationship meaning he only have sex friends
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      it;s open relationship? damn, author might as well have made it a cuck novel then
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        Wake up, women don't have to eternally serve the man they f#cked with.
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          Yeah, they do; it's their duty to cook, clean, and make sandwiches oru2x
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          Man I'd love to be your family friend to help your wife when she needs it swindler
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        That's one way of saying that you've not dated anyone in the past ten years.
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      open relationship? hmm I have not seen any of the females MC has laid with done it with any other and MC has plenty that he keeps around him as what he considers his.

      Also, I dont think considered being in relationship means that they have to be stuck at each other by the hips all the time so, this thing going on here with his slave/manager, teacher and others can still be considered as having a relationship that is more than friends.
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      They are not sex friends per say...most are branded by his mark of sin and those who are not are too much in love with eren that the would would do literally anything for him..
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    Who has a link to Discord or to the author's Instagram?
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    The story is alright, and the character development was pretty nice too.. but.. the world building is pretty scuffed and it's pretty immersion breaking later on in the chapters.
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