The Rise of the Black Plain by RVN_1998

Too many times I find the word "THAT" in a sentence that shouldn't have the word "THAT", which makes me uncomfortable

[Chapter 1]

Honestly, I usually never write any review before finishing the last, updated chapters —or... because I'm planning to abandon it— but this one... this one clearly needs some better translation.

I mean, from the get-go of chapter 1, I had to struggle to read and re-read, in order to maybe quasi-understand the estimated meaning.

Ex:

[Several explosions took place in a few seconds, along with the chaos generated by the people who passed in the area and were now fled in despair. Some students left the Spiritual Academy, several vendors, and many passers-by who would typically pass by this place almost any time of day.
...
As the crowd dispersed, five cultivators from the Spiritual King stage were fighting 4 of them were attacking the 5th with clear intention to kill.
...
etc.]

Honestly, even if the author use a translation program, he should have done a much better revision than this. Punctuations exist for good reasons.

So, this review has nothing to do with the story —that I have yet read and understood— but everything to do with the poor translation.

And that, is besides the weird dialogues.

Ex:

["Albert, you should never have had absurd thoughts of getting a mid-level spiritual region as a reward given by the kingdom. Hahaha, as if a newly created noble family like yours could do so."

Come on, the day I hear someone never-have-had me in a short conversation—with enough time to describe: getting a mid-level spiritual region as a reward given by the kingdom in-the-very-middle-of-a-fight—Well, that's probably the very day of the end-of-the-English-world as we all know.

In any case, I will still try to read this, and see how far I will go.

I don't like to do this, but it's about 2 months without an update. If anyone still doesn't know, you can read it here:
https://www.panda-novel.com/details/the-rise-of-the-black-plain(FN)-1179

Автор настолько нахуевертил плоских персонажей, что на 800й главе силы терпеть это были полностью исчерпаны. Большинство ситуаций высосаны из пальца, мир не просто фантастика, а даже не фэнтези, такое общество не сможет прожить более 100 лет, а тут 200к+. Бред запредельного уровня. Минос вольготно прогуливаясь по территории спокойно разворошил половину королевств, бред. Надежда на крепкий середнячок провалилась к 600 главе. Я не смог определить какую оценку поставить этому произведению, колеблется между 3/10 и 2/10. Мусор.

Ok I stopped reading around 350 chapters. At that time I've thought that this would be a good novel, so I was planning on stocking up and no need to explain the plot its typical world buildinh with a taste of revenge. When I saw that it reach 990 chapters, Ive started reading it again. On the other hand the story got stale. It was prolonged so much did you it took at least 300 or so chapters before he reach lvl 50 to 51. I've know that the author was thinking of focusing on the story but the problem is that it was oversaturated and there are too much description to normal things, as if we are being reminded again and again of similar plots. Sometimes there is even a pattern of reintroducing the characters in the chapters in later stages as if he is trying to prolong or input enought word count. After reaching 900, it got more tasteless as he focuses on killing leaders of the family(enemy) alone, as if ignoring all the build up of his army. Instead of fighting head on, he preferred mind games or trickery. Well that is nit a problem if we establish it as his personality earlier but it was different from the start, I know we want the characters to mature but it change so much that the main character became boring or we just dont care about him anymore. So to those who are reading be brepared if your a veteran like me who read a lot. For beginners maybe this can be a starting point for world building genre. All in all dissapointing.

FINALMENTE

Waitingggggg……

Where is new ch?

Ah yes, I can feel the passion of all the whore haters, I can feel your desire for True love. Its beautiful