Author's Opinion

The Rise of the Black Plain

I think it's disappointing when that kind of situation happens. You meet a new character, learn a little about their reality and... Baam... The story forgets them, and all that no longer matters...

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I, as a reader, really like to see certain characters. That is why story planning should be done to prevent this type of situation from happening. Sometimes, there is nothing more rewarding than seeing certain characters...

4- MC development: another issue closely related to the previous one. Sometimes I see MCs saying they care about those related to him, friends, companions, and family. Still, all I see are individuals who don't seem to have much gratitude or a sense of responsibility.

The guy enters a sect, gets stronger, and sometimes receives excellent support from those places, and then there comes the point where he leaves and doesn't look back...

And look, in many of these stories, talent is almost worthless since the external resources will make the main characters so strong...

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So, why not help the one who welcomed you when you were weak? Sometimes they even return, almost at the end of the story, when the authors no longer want to spend a lot of time on these texts... This ends up not being satisfactory when I see it in my readings.

Anyway, these are some of my opinions about what should be in a novel. I'm just an amateur writer who decided to start writing his own story after reaching his share of disappointments in the texts I read.

While I write, I will try to avoid making the same mistakes as my predecessors, but you know how it's, right? I'm just a human... Oh! English isn't my first language, so there may be some problems with the grammar...