The Rise of the Black Plain by RVN_1998

Mc нелогичен. Нужно тихо культивировать, развивает город и идет на турнир. Развивая город не волнуется что его предадут. Все ему благодарны и никто не предаст... Размышления маленького ребенка. И последнее, слишком много сцен секса по несколько глав. Лучше бы друзей заводил и строил контакты, чем спать со всеми. И по несколько глав... Приходится пропускать главами.

The info dump is strong in this one ...

I have read till around 800 chapters and I can say that till 500 chapters it was great and at 300 chapters only one point was that I hated that "he hates his mother was something that was nonsensical as it was his father who didn't want to come with his wife to her sect. and he knows that his mother could not save his father as she cannot use her powers in kingdom because of church and still he hates her. which was only one point in this novel that irritated me. The world building and kingdom building were great, with very few plot holes and lots of action and politics.

but then after that came ntr, ntr, ntr, ntr,... and the reason I stopped reading because at a point you will start to pity his enemy if you have even a little bit on humanity inside of you.

(In his mother's sect there was a guy who was just a little rude to him and he had a crush who he was courting from childhood but she didn't give a f#ck about him but when she saw our MC she didn't even resist having s*x with him and they let that guy watch him having s*x with MC, and then in anger that guy wanted to fight MC and clearly MC humiliated that guy very badly. Here, Mc didn't have any romantic interest in her and she also knew it but still she wanted to do with him but she didn't even want to give a chance to someone who was following her like a dog from her childhood, who clearly loved her and could give his life for her. you can tell that her logical path should be to be with that guy who is someone who loves her for reset of her life but instead she choose to be with mc and her uncle, which is illogical according to my logic and this is just one of many .......)

Here, think yourself and think why you are even reading a novel, because one thing for sure: this novel is pure evil. I stopped reading it because he has done it with his aunt and I get the idea that he will cuck his own father, who fought enemies and died for him. and which clearly crosses the line for me.

Ask yourself the reason why even you read the novel...

Is this a novel you want to read, as he will cuck everyone beside his allies or maybe even them?

Hear ye weaklings! Quit whining about grammar.
What doesn't kill you makes you stronger.

The R18 is good and doesn't affect the plot much. Mc knows to distinguish his wife from his Paramores, though the r18 become less at the later chapters the plot remains great nonetheless.

How is the r18 in the novel, is it too often and does it hinder the plot much

Have read only 30 chapters
Boring and bland.
CN Xianxia young master(s)
Vague cultivation techniques.
Vague cultivation knowledge.
Low variety of ways to get strong.
Nothing innovative.
LQ(Low Quality) Technique Descriptors.
Strength measured in levels(1-100).
Bad Grammar(Not the broken kind, but nonsensical-sometimes).
Doesn't seem to be much of a kingdom-building novel, even after 1 year of in-novel development.
Plot armor.
Enemies IQ reduced, so MC can seem smart, although he just uses common sense.
Probably in the future:faceslapping.
Cliches.

Comment if anything changes in the future(and what) so others know, but I will not be reading this anymore. If you find it interesting, you are free to continue reading. I only wrote my opinion.

Ps. The reason I didn't criticize grammar more is because I am used to nonsensical word structure from MTLs.

This is one of those terrible novels where the mc cultivates slow af because "muh god physique", just run away bro.
RUN!

this author needs a prof reader, it editor if he or she could not afford then grammarly is good enough...... reading this novel is really a challenge, my brain cells are almost dead....