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Astral Pet Store超神宠兽店

What’s not to love about my new life after transmigrating into a Pet-centered world?
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What’s not to love about my new life after transmigrating into a Pet-centered world?

There are mighty creatures that come in all shapes and sizes. They can either be cuddly companions, helpers in your daily life, daring scouts or strong fighters. Or all of the above. Not bad, huh?

I have a family, but the fact is completely overshadowed by my younger sister. She thoroughly hates my guts, and she makes sure that I know this. Every. Single. Day.

Did I mention that she’s disgustingly talented while I am a bottom feeder? A terribly handsome one at that.

I have free rein to run the family business on my own. A small and quaint Pet Store. It should have been great if not for the fact that the previous owner of this body was born with ZERO affinity to handle Astral Pets…

It wouldn’t be a proper transmigration without a gimmick or a system to pave my road to greatness, don’t you think? I have one, but I don’t know if I would be better off without it… Collapse
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    Wth the ending whoknows whoknows
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    arz
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    • 5.0
    5.0
    Yes at the beginning of this story it has a lots of unreasonable plot bullshit plot armor forced plot useless pointless face slapping chapters that i skipped but i still kept reading. Yes it is cringe in a lot of times. Yes a lot of times the MC was retarded and stupid. Yes there's a lot of cliche.

    But when you finish the whole 1580 chapters. Then suddenly close your Eyes and try to remember all the emotions the sadness, happiness, excitement, the adventure itself the ride the feeling that you didn't expect to be here yet you're still here. The memories of all the things you've gone together with MC Su Ping.

    You will feel it was WORTH IT. Even thought it has a lot of flaws and mistakes. This adventure is an irreplacable one that will forever stay in your heart
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    it was a journey, some may say it was a good one some may say it was a bad one but when you finish this novel you feel something unexplainable.
    For me this is a novel that will be always in my heart forever.
    Many might disagree but i don't care this is a gem amongst gems.
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    coconutpirate
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    This one isn't as refined as the author's other novel the dark king
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    • 3.3
    3.3
    The story is good and enjoyable until the dark cave event ( 600-700 maybe), if u somehow bear that the story becomes unbearable at around chapter 1250/1260. So much cringe and retarded MC
    The system is sentient which is irritating.
    Plus, the author sometimes forgets about some events and things in his own novel. Which is hilarious oru2x
    It certainly is enjoyable if you are new novel readers or didn't read chinese novels much,
    But for others, this will be a huge waste of time and cause for lost of brain cells pressure
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      arz
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      Yes at the beginning of this story it has a lots of unreasonable plot bullshit plot armor forced plot useless pointless face slapping chapters that i skipped but i still kept reading. Yes it is cringe in a lot of times. Yes a lot of times the MC was retarded and stupid. Yes there's a lot of cliche.

      But when you finish the whole 1580 chapters. Then suddenly close your Eyes and try to remember all the emotions the sadness, happiness, excitement, the adventure itself the ride the feeling that you didn't expect to be here yet you're still here. The memories of all the things you've gone together with MC Su Ping.

      You will feel it was WORTH IT. Even thought it has a lot of flaws and mistakes. This adventure is an irreplacable one that will forever stay in your heart
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        Well,,, i didn't finish it, dropped it around chapter 1250,,, looks like i have to give it a another go satisfied
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          same, i dropped around that since mc keep doing stupid things and plot got too messed up
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    arz
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    THANK YOU SU PING,ASTRAL PET STORE,AUTHOR ANCIENT XI. Thank you from the very origin of my existence truly Thank You for everything. The emotions the story the ride everything for that Thank you.

    At the beginning of this story it has a lots of unreasonable plot bullshit plot armor forced plot useless pointless face slapping chapters that i skipped but i still kept reading. And It Was Worth it. I never expected this story to be so important for me and to love it so much. That's why THANK YOU SU PING, ASTRAL PET STORE,AUTHOR ANCIENT XI YOU SHALL FOREVER REMAIN IN MY

    HEART
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      Did a 3 year old write this?
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    good theres no harem nor romance tag
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    If any of you who are going to read this novel are going to rant about MC supposedly collecting girls to his harem,
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      One of the few good things about the novel
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    hi, i need your help, i left it around the quarter final of the competition where his sister is participating, anyone knows which chapter is it?
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    i really liked this story but it just ruined it self by ch 1000 so i'm going to point out some of the things i disliked about this novel and it's flaws, u should try it everyone has a different taste and the thing i point out and don't like might not be a problem for u

    like some guy down in the comment rates this novel as a 10/10 and completely ignores the fact that the mc acts like a young master

    i made a post a couple if months ago where i go into more detail but here is the shorter summery

    -doesn't use pets for fighting and only for merging or to kill weaker fodder enemy's
    -hasn't upgraded the store in like hundreds of ch [talking about when i dropped it]
    -hasn't actually sold a pet or pet food in the same amount of time
    -he just goes of somewhere and leaves other people to do HIS job

    -doesn't know how to train pet's he just trows them into a cultivation site or gets his copies/clones to do or just gives the pets a law it and calls it a day
    -the system never teaches him anything

    -mc lacks common sense, a lot of times i found my self understanding what the other person is saying/talking about while the mc would just be clueless, it could be stuff about cultivation or just common sense a normal person should have in in real life, don't remember any examples sry

    -he acts in annoying ways, a lot of times if he didn't act like a dickhead it would save him soooooo much trouble like when he barged into the tower on blue planet, could have at least tried to talk but no

    -every person that's in the store is a girl for whatever reason, we don't see any other guy characters that isn't an enemy (he doesn't even have a guy friend)
    -most of the side characters we see that isn't an enemy, are all just girls that act the exact same

    -a lot of characters are forgotten like the disciple that he took in for no reason at at around ch 400,she plays no important role in the story what so ever, like she and a lot more people get locked in the store for days cuz the mc forgets they exist while he goes doing what ever there are more examples like her but i can't be bothered to mention them

    -mc also get into a lot of unnecessary conflict like when someone from one of the academy's tried to capture the skeleton he could have let them go but he was stubborn and killed them (the academy didn't go after him but the guy's family did). same in ch 1049 someone said to him “Humph. Where is this bumpkin from?” and he attacked them because of that. he's becoming a young master. he would have killed him if he guards didn't stop him

    -there are a lot of arrogant young masters but if he just showed them how strong he is a lot of people would leave him alone but he just doesn't bother, he always says ''i don't care what other people think of me'' that good and all but most of the time you're a lower realm and ur acting arrogant. they think ur weak and then they challenge/attack you because you thought it's beneath you to show ur power

    but a lot of the conflict is because a young masters is being dumb like always


    i want to make it clear that i don't hate the novel it was my favorite for some time but it just has to many flaws and ruined it self sigh
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      You say that I knowingly ignore the issues of this novel but it seems you are ignoring the context when stuff happened. It has already been quite a bit since this finished and even more since I started reading this novel , so I won't be able to specifically mention chapters about your points but if you give me the number of the specific chapter then I will be able to re-read them and answer you.

      - At the start he does let his pets attack on their own. The problem with your thinking is that the pet system was never about the pets attacking on their own. It was always about merging the power of many to a single individual. If you take a step back and think about armies of cultivators or supernatural beings , you will notice they can't actually fight like we Earthlings traditionally do. They will pretty much always have some type of formation (as in an item) or a military formation that allows the strength of all the soldiers to be combined. Especially in a novel like this where beings of a higher rank can easily supress those of a lower rank. Another problem is that each time a cultivator grows stronger he can contract even more beasts. Replacing beasts is something frowned upon. Their connection is too deep for such practices. This means that finding the best possible beast in each rank impossible to do. It is mentioned quite a few times where even high rank cultivators only have a couple beasts at their rank. The rest are kept like house pets since their potential can't keep up. Besides the pet system isn't mutual to humans and not only beasts can become pets. If someone wanted he could make even another human a pet.

      - He doesn't upgrade the store not because he is lazy but because two of the conditions are actually quite harsh. First the points needed get increasingly more and more time consuming to gather. At some point he needs to accumulate years upon years of points despite having access to higher level of pets (which would give more points). He is limited in this case by the maximum amount of pets he can store in his pet storage in each wave of accepting clients. The second requirement is to have one of his pets be of a certain quality in a certain rank. This is quite hard to achieve. Especially when you consider that he is trying to do his damn best to raise their potential. They are his family. He doesn't want them to be left behind or for their only use to be to sacrifice to save him.
      To say he doesn't upgrade the store because he is being lazy or on purpose avoiding to do so is just spouting bullshit.

      - He actually sells both pets and pet food. The reason why doesn't do so in the start is two fold. First for the pet food. Its actually quite expensive compared to traditional pet food (the store sets the price). Although it is expensive its effects are quite miraculous. Since he wasn't able to build up a reputation high enough to uncoditionally trust him , his sales on that front aren't that big. Still he does make pet food sales. It's just that they aren't shown as much because there isn't much reason to do so. Now about the pets situation. In order to sell pets he needs to capture them. At the start to do so he relied on an item that is sold in limited quantities by the store. Selling below legendary pets would be a waste but at the time he can sell legendary pets he does so constantly. There simply weren't people that could buy said pets. Ofcourse another reason was that he was too weak at that point.

      -His job is to increase the combat power of the pets. Depending on the type of cultivation the pet owner picks , he has to meet certain criteria to be considered doing his job by the store. Being a clerk isn't his job. This why later down the line he gets someone else to do that job. The clerk also has to be powerful enough in order to keep the pets obedient. So this argument of yours has no actual basis.

      - This is mostly the fault of the author if you really want to point fingers to someone. The truth is that his strategy was enough. If you pair the fact that he can easily find natural treasures , there isn't much reason for him to learn those skills. They would actually slow him down. His method of training boils down to the "raising gu" technique". The only difference is that the pets he trains don't permanetly die. Arguably pets trained like this are much more powerful than some pets that had a pet trainer massaged in order to refine their energy. He would have never be able to deliver the same results if he used the same techniques "normal" trainers utilized. I don't think he ever imparted laws to pets other than his own. Normally learning a law is hard , much less learning multiple laws. To impart laws to a pet , much less a foreign one , was seen as idiotic. If someone managed to acquire those laws , would mean your hard work going to waste. So in the end he only passed laws done to his own pets. The reason he did so was mostly due to the miniature worlds and increasing thei combat power. As I said before he wasn't willing to leave behind his pets. Clones were only used for the simple cultivation type. That cultivation type wasn't that special hence didn't need his personal attendance.

      - I am not going to say much about this but the aim of the system was never to make him a traditional trainer much less the best traditional trainer. The purpose of the system was two fold. One was to increase the combat power of everyone. Two to cultivate his character. At the end of my comment I will leave a small spoiler which would explain a lot of things.

      -I haven't noticed this happening at all. At least the way you are describing it. The only time the MC was clueless about cultivation was because he genuinely didn't have access up to that point about said subject. I would go as far to say that the MC learnt the true face of that world quite fast and acted accordingly. (No letting your enemy go back to grow stronger and return to threaten you).

      - It isn't as much him acting as a dickhead but knowing the true face of others. If he doesn't press them down , they are only going to act out of their way more and more. The phrase "give them an inch and they will demand a mile" perfectly suits them. He acts overbearingly because he knows that if you don't set boundaries , they will only take you for a soft permisson and just continue doing dumb things. The whole scenario where you back away and the other responds with understanding happends only in fantasies and an extremely small amount of cases. Only the dumb ones continue to pester the MC. Later down the line people actually have a brain and don't antagonize the MC for no reason. Individuals who antagonize the MC belong to two categories. Those from protected environments thinking everyone should bow down to them and those that sooner or later would die due to their behavior regardless of the MC. I simple example is the families from the hometown of the MC latern submitting to him.

      -This a complete lie. Like there are only three girls in the store with one being a freaking pill. Other than that there are both males and females in the sidecharacters. His master is a male. A lot of the supremes are males. Just because the story has an actual normal male to female ratio doesn't mean the author is focusing too much on females.

      - He took her as a disciple in order to further his influence in that holy city. The problem was that he progressed way faster than she did. Hence she became useless. I actually think this is more organic than having every single plot point being measured to the dot. Though I don't remember if the author properly close her plot line. I don't think he has actually ever closed someon in his store for multiple days as you mention. He basically has it open every day. A customer comes in and the next day can take away his pet. In contrast other pet stores would need weeks or months to achieve a similar improvement to the pet if they could match it all. The only times he closed his shop was when he upgraded it. Other than that it was working constantly. The only difference would probably be not having professional cultivation available. This is the reason why he needed clerks. So you are spouting bullshit again.

      -He killed him in order to set his stance. If he didn't do so , they would just return either way to demand remuneration. Might as well remove him from the middle. On your second example are you ignoring the dialogue between the MC and the guard. The guard was actually the first to propose killing that youngster. The only reason he didn't do so was because he might have an important background and made things complicated. The MC acknowledged that might be the situation and just requested what that youngster demanded from him tenfold. Imagine this , you are inside your home and someone comes there and starts being rude in front a lot of people. Aren't you going to be heavy handed with him ? People have killed for similar things irl quite a few times. Much less considering the situation of the MC. Not only the MC is stronger than that dumbass but his master is a Supreme and the Lord of the Region. If the MC had wanted could have easily killed that dude with his first punch but didn't. You are being obnoxious and ignoring context once again.

      - The only time he doesn't show his power was when he was still in his hometown and wasn't a legend yet. He actually didn't have much to show off at that point. After he became to lord of Blue Star he has never held back. This is also the reason he was able to become a Supreme's disciple. So you are ignoring context again.

      The novel doesn't really have those flaws you mention or plot holes (which is rare) , it's just that you are ignoring context.

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        holy shit and i thought i could write shocked3

        u pointed out some valid points .

        -is it really a problem with me thinking that a novel named astral PET store would focus more on well i don't know the pets? and not just merging with them when the mc can't beat the enemy?.

        -i never said he was being lazy don't know where u got that from, i know the requirements are harsh and they should be but to go hundreds of chapter without him upgrading the store is to long in my opinion, again store in the name.

        -okay first i guess u missed the part where i said i read more then 1000 chapters so of course i know all that but i'm talking about after he left blue planet, he had the reputation and people were rich enough to buy the pet food and the legendary pets and like u said He is limited in this case by the maximum amount of pets he can store in his pet storage in each wave of accepting clients, then why didn't he go out capture more legendary pets when he was strong enough instead of just waiting till all the pets finished training?, he could have made extra points and would have been closer to upgrading the store, he rarely went out of his way to capture pets, he did capture pets but not all frequently just sometimes and not many at that.

        also what u said in the spoiler tag, sure threes no point in upgrading the store but he doesn't know that does he?, the store is all he has to rely on so he should want to upgrade it as much as possible no?.

        -okay fair it's not his job to be a clerk but i would think he would spend more time at the store and do at least some work, this novel does have store in it's name after all and even when he does train the pets himself all he does is what the clones did.

        -the best example that i can kinda remember is when he goes to the sea of illusions someone says something to him and he doesn't understand while i remember fully understanding what she was talking about don't remember the exact ch but it doesn't matter i guess.

        -i'm not saying he should act like pushover but at least try to talk first instead of immediately attacking, he doesn't even try to talk unless the other person is stronger then him.

        -if it's a lie then is there a guy that works at the store? up to where i read which is somewhere around 1100 there was no guy working at his store and yea one of them is a pill but what does she look like? a girl and is even called Green LADY clearly supposed to be female.

        also i kinda miss spoke saying there were only female side characters i was mainly talking about the store and characters that the mc had a friendly relationship with cuz most of the guys he meets are enemy's with him and he has no guy friends except maybe that other senior disciple of his master but what that's 1 guy friend in 800 or more ch? and is he even a friend or just a fellow disciple fallowing his masters orders?.

        -increase his influence in holy city? he never said that i even checked using ctrl+f to check when the word influence was used from ch 400 to 475 not even when he took her in as a disciple at 464 did he say ''i'll take her in to increase my influence in the holy city'' ur spouting bullshit and i'll say the same thing to u as u said to someone else, just u saying trust me isn't good enough if u find where he says that i'll gladly admit i my mistake.

        he did close her and that tang girl i think it was for days, he did close the store sometimes when he planed to be away for a long time, he didn't plan to be away for so long when he became a disciple of that celestial guy so he didn't close the store at the time.

        - i'll just re-post this

        or like when someone from one of the academy's tried to capture the skeleton he could have let them go but he was stubborn and killed them, the academy didn't go after him but the guy's family did.

        if he let him go and that guy still wanted revenge it wouldn't nearly be as bad as it was when he killed him, the family might not even bothered to send anyone or what if the academy sent someone and the mc beat them so they end up sending a ascended, then the mc would have to stay inside his store until he's strong enough, but that wouldn't happen cuz guess what, it's a story and it would be boring if he was forced to stay in the store.

        so he can act in the most stupid and illogical ways with no consequence.

        now for the second example, if u remember i said mc also get into a lot of unnecessary conflict i'm not saying who wanted to kill him first i'm saying is that the mc is becoming a young master and getting into unnecessary conflict, that's what young masters do when someone insults them the would attack them just cuz of that

        and don't try to justify what the mc did just because it might very rarely happen sometimes in real life, it's completely unreasonable to attack someone just for a few words if u think it's reasonable then sigh

        and ur also saying just because the mc is stronger and has a better backing makes it right for him to attack someone just beacuse they said something bad to the mc, then it would be perfectly fine if the roles were reversed no? the mc insulted him and got attacked, if u say otherwise that's called being a hypocrite whoknows

        and just because the mc could have killed him in one punch but didn't doesn't make it better, also u said the system wants to cultivate his attitude right? what kind of attitude is this then?

        -now ur lying, in ch 1010 some one challenged him,

        The arrogant senior said with cold eyes, "Are you scared?"

        "If you say so." Su Ping was too lazy to explain

        this is what happens a lot hes to lazy

        so he doesn't show his power and a lot of times it makes people think hes weaker then he actually is which bring trouble now before this in the last ch he did fight and some some of his power but not enough i would show u a better example but this is the only one i can remember.

        also why was he too lazy this time but in ch 1049 he attacked someone who only insulted him and didn't even challenge him to a fight, is his ego so fragile that he can't even take one insult?


        it does these flaws it's just that ur ignoring them and i never said anything about plot holes u keep putting words i my mouth
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          -How to tell someone you haven't read the novel without saying you haven't read the novel. To be concise , I just need to point out how cultivation worked in every era. There was always a focus on individual betterment. Though this has been proven to be insufficient again and again. This is how human pet cultivation came about ( I am not going to point out who created this cultivation method). This is a typical problem any cultivation novel finds itself with an army consisting of cultivator soldiers. Gathering the power of the many in to one is actually the best way to confront a single much more powerful opponent. So if you came here expecting pokemon style battles , then you were expecting wrong. This is beast taming not pokemon. That only thing common with pokemons is catching beasts (though as the system said again and again "everything can be cultivated EVERYTHING" , thus even that point doesn't really exist). Other than that there is a reference to pokemon with an item ball the MC can buy from the store that can easily catch pets (It was only used breafly in the start due to the inability of the MC to make contracts with too many pets).

          - Upgrading the store needs a couple conditions. The most important one being to have a pet of a certain ranking in the respective cultivation realm. Other than that he needs a set amount of energy. The first condition gets fulfilled passively as he explores the various cultivation realms. The second can only be fulfilled with the passage of time. The more ranks he upgrades the less interesting it is to see him grind energy. Besides the levelling of the store is meaningless except from giving the MC more time. In other words the system doesn't get any real benefit from the MC fulfilling those goals. They exist only to show that the MC has reached a certain watershed.

          -After a certain point it is implied that he always has pets available to be bought. Problem is that pets other than those with Supreme qualifications are common quite common. Not to mention the real difficult condition to fulfill was to have a pet of a certain rank in a certain cultivation realm. The rest conditions were just a game of waiting. Besides he always had things to do it. It would be pointless to rush energy accumulation when his own personal strength accumulation was lacking. The store's levels indicated he passed a certain watershed. What is the point rushing those levels when he lacked the personal qualifications. Nonetheless a lot of things were implied to happen. For example both selling pet food and cultivation resources were implied to be sold regularly. We are told that while he is travelling the murial cultivation realms he is always scouring for resources. Most of those consumed by the pets he has on his hands at that moment and the rest put in the store to be sold. Only ignorant people in Blue Star ignored such a huge benefit. As he clientele became more refined , they ofcourse fully utilized the benefits he brought (pet cultivation resources where one of them). I should point out that choosing pets is important and usually the people going to his store have already mostly a full team. So relatively more people would choose training than buying new pets. Besides you can only buy what one , two , three, .... , ten pets ? They can train more than ten or even hundreds of times a single pet , much less a full team.

          -He understands he doesn't need to go out of his way to exclusively upgrade the store because he doesn't get any direct benefit from upgrading the shop. The only benefit he gets is two gather energy faster which he mostly uses to upgrade the store. Better cultivation realms don't matter because he would be lacking in strength. Especially after he met enemies that can imprison him with the time law. It is useless to fight or meet them if his strength isn't even close to them. Other than that he is constantly busy with either the academy or various special events (like the void/illusion realm). When he was not busy with those he was personally cultivating customer's pets or improving his strength and his pets.

          -His clones take care only for normal cultivation. He only has one body. Why should he delay himself even more with the inferior normal cultivation option. Professional cultivation exists for this specific reason. Besides all the cultivation resources he sells he collected himself and not his clones. So his clones exist only to relief him from basic work that would only delay his progress even more. The requirements for the basic cultivation are so low that it would be a waste of energy for himself to do it.

          -He does that because he understand those guys. From his time in Blue Star he has already shown quite a bit of patience. Though he has understood a truth. As long as you give them an inch , they are gonna demand a foot. He has nothing to be afraid off and his social rank and strength demands respect. To act with humility to a nobody that is insulting him is nonsensical. He owes them nothing and they owe him everything for every chance he is providing them. He has never retreated an inch regarding him protecting humanity. So tell me , why should behave like a little bitch to nobody that he can squeeze whenever he wants ?

          - Tang Ruyan has no close relationship with him at the start. She only started accepting her position when he helped her with her family. Even after he never starts a relationship with her , even if he could at any moment. Joana's relationship with him has always been special. Despite having deeper feelings for each other they never really get a chance to enact on them due to you know the whole apocalypse thing. The pill has next to zero interactions with him and only existed as a connection for him to the immortal world. It would be a bit awkard to have a male pill fanboying over an immortal king. His skelly is male , his dog is male , his dragon is male , his other dragon is also male , his snake is male , the bug thingy is also male. His master and most of his fellow disciples are males. Only the crow heiress is female. Just because his three clerks are female doesn't mean that the whole cast around him are female. I might say that they are quite balanced. The clerks are female and his pets are male. Arguably his pets are more important to him than anyone else other than the system and Joana (he is somewhat close to the crow lady).

          -"“Student?”

          Su Ping raised his eyebrows. He was about to say no when he thought of something.

          The Holy Light Base City was a sacred place for trainers, and one of the most important base cities of the Subcontinent District. The economy there was more developed and had a less restrained flow of information. He would spend most of his time at the store in the Longjiang Base City where he wouldn’t receive information timely. The Longjiang Base City was far from the Holy Light Base City. When something sensational happened there, the people from his Base City wouldn’t even know. This inconvenience went both ways.

          Also, in this day and age, trainers had the most honorable position.

          Trainers were more glamorous than battle pet warriors of the same rank.

          To build up a connection in the circle of trainers should be beneficial for him."
          Literally says how it would beneficial to him to have some sphere of influence in the Holy Light Base City. Did you even bother to understand what you are reading ??

          - You clearly don't understand how those families work. First he would need to beat him up close to death in order to "convince" him that his skelly isn't up from grabs. At that point he has already offended the family. Because he wasn't firm enough , they would probably attack him faster than they did because the would believe that his was a pushover since he didn't kill that guy. But what is the point of doing all that since no matter what they would become enemies. You might even say that by forcing them to that point they wouldn't have the room to trouble him from the dark. He is nor a weakling nor a nobody. He has no reason to give them face. If that guy had the stronger fist , he would probably kill him in order to get his skelly. Why show mercy to such an individual ? Why allow for his enemy to go back and just return for revenge ? Isn't this a common complaint where the MC doesn't kill his enemies and just lets them go back for free ?
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            Holy shit, man, you two need to collaborate and create a novel together
            it will really work out for both of you
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              holy shit that genius yeah u wanna be our prof reader or something? we wouldn't pay u or anything like that but u could read the best novel ever made before anyone else welldone
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                Deal, tho I would like to be paid 2 memes a day
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            How to tell someone you haven't read the novel without saying you haven't read the novel
            lol sure

            - looks like u misunderstood what i meant when i said focus more on the pets, no i didn't mean it should be like pokemon, what i meant was that the pets should actually be strong and helpful and not the mc focusing so much on individual betterment that the pets became useless unless he wants to merge, i have no problem with Gathering the power of the many into one, my problem is when he only uses them for that,

            u also didn't answer my question is it really a problem with me thinking that a novel named astral PET store would focus more on well i don't know the pets? and not just merging with them when the mc can't beat the enemy?. cuz u said The problem with your thinking is that the pet system was never about the pets attacking on their own. It was always about merging the power of many to a single individual again not like pokemon but is there a problem with me thinking this?

            - again for the second time didn't read what i said, How to tell someone you haven't read what they said without saying you haven't read what they said monk again i read more then 1000ch so i know the conditions even if it's been a while and again i know it's meaningless but he doesn't know that does he?, the store is the only thing he has to rely on so he should want to upgrade it as much as possible no?.

            yea it would be boring to watch him grind energy but there exists a thing called time skipping, have the mc get points and we skip the boring process and get the end result, my problem was that he didn't try to get more energy

            - i'm not going to deny that they could have said that he did have pets to sell but every time he's at the store it always people buying the training things and never people buying pets or food, it would have been great if it was mentioned multiple times instead of once in passing god know when, otherwise i wouldn't have been complaining about this,

            how is it pointless for him to accumulate energy in something that would increase his strength? again before u say it HE DOESN'T KNOW WHAT THE SYSTEM WANTS FROM HIM

            if we do assume that most of the people going to his store do have a full team... so what? what i'm saying is that he has a way to increase his points and he doesn't do it.

            - if there's only 2 benefits of upgrading the store and they don't help the mc what's the point of the store? if the thing in the name of the novel is pointless to upgrade so quickly then that's bad writing, a lot of people came here cuz it had store in it's name and now the store is pointless, then why not call the novel astral pet system instead? or crazy idea, actually do good writing and have the system upgrades bring new and useful things? thoughts?

            - i'm not saying for him to do the normal tier of cultivation god no but at least do something other then be a cashier at his own store, again not be a clerk but something and the Professional cultivation is a scam like does he do anything different that the clones don't do?

            - yes in most cultivation novels if u give someone an inch and they’ll take a yard, but it's still not fun to read a novel where the mc acts like a young master.

            okay going by ur logic why didn't the mc show respect to that one prince when he and Joana went to her home, not the demigod one but the other one cuz he was stronger then the mc at that time and had status or to even Joana when he met her for the first time there's also that skeleton king the mc stole from early on?

            also every chance he is providing them? what chance? i don't know what ur saying here, that he doesn't kill them? also ur line of thought is kinda worrisome why should behave like a little bitch to nobody that he can squeeze whenever he wants?so ur saying if i have the power to kill someone with ease like let's say with a gun and their a nobody and they insult me, i can kill them? but if i have the SELF CONTROL to not shot. that makes me a little bitch? or should i shot them cuz i have the power? u see how it can seem a bit worrisome?

            it also show that the mc has no self control, who says after he saves humanity he won't be the one to destroy it with this young master character of his that the system is trying to cultivate?.

            u also said in a different comment that he doesn't act like a young master, clearly a lie

            - okay i'll say this yes there's a kinda balanced male to female ration (never said there wasn't) but not how they interact, most of the males become the mc enemy's and most of the girls fall in love with the mc but act in a tsundere-ish way

            i have no clue why u decided to talk about the mc's status with Tang Ruyan, Joana, and green lady but okay?

            i don't really count his pets as part of the store, do they do any work? have a contract? Tang Ruyan doesn't but she still works at the store and any normal person would think shes an ''employee'' while the pets are the pets, so is there a person who is considered male based of their appearance and refereed to as he/him?, works at the store or has a contract?

            and u didn't mention a male friend, yes he may think of his pets as ''friends'' but their still pets, and it's kinda sad if u say his only male friends are his pets. is his master a friend? no it's his master, can any of the fellow disciples be considered a friend?

            if someone told u to list off all ur friends, would u include ur pets? i wouldn't

            - okay i'll admit my mistake here i completely forgot about this one sentence that's mentioned once in the whole novel and never becomes relevant again but as someone else commented in the same ch i still think he took her in for no reason,

            Man, mc's actions never make sense. He doesn't bother to become counselor with relatively few duties, but he's willing to take student out of nowhere which needs a lot of work and responsibility. It's same with him picking up random enemies that are girls for his shop. I mean come on, why wouldn't he give out those positions to friends instead?

            he doesn't even do any of the work and responsibility and i'm sure they wouldn't mind becoming connected with him even if he didn't take in a student

            - i do know how these family's work and yes they mostly would still have attacked but what if they didn't? what if they punished the kid instead? it's all about the what if's, there's a 99,9% chance that they would attack, but what if they didn't? by killing him he made it so they 100% attack him

            yes it is a common complaint where the MC doesn't kill his enemies and they just come back to make trouble but u know what else is a common complaint? young masters, and the mc acting like one doesn't make it better if anything it's worse and threes an easy fix for this, actually be a bit more unique and have the family not attack him, i remember reading a novel where the mc's family didn't try to kill him and was actually unified, people commented how surprised and refreshing it felt, it's not like threes a rule saying the family has to attack him.

            - okay u didn't say anything about this

            The only time he doesn't show his power was when he was still in his hometown and wasn't a legend yet. He actually didn't have much to show off at that point. After he became to lord of Blue Star he has never held back. This is also the reason he was able to become a Supreme's disciple. So you are ignoring context again.

            and my response

            now ur lying, in ch 1010 some one challenged him,

            The arrogant senior said with cold eyes, "Are you scared?"

            "If you say so." Su Ping was too lazy to explain

            this is what happens a lot he's to lazy

            so he doesn't show his power and a lot of times it makes people think hes weaker then he actually is which bring trouble now before this in the last ch he did fight and some some of his power but not enough i would show u a better example but this is the only one i can remember.

            also why was he too lazy this time but in ch 1049 he attacked someone who only insulted him and didn't even challenge him to a fight, is his ego so fragile that he can't even take one insult?


            why did he behave like a little bitch to a nobody this time but attack someone a different time?

            since i admired my mistake about why he accepted a disciple u should admit urs, that he does act like a young master and he doesn't show his power even tho it would save him trouble
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              Fu#k you guys do tell me about your novel when you have written it okay.
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