I'm the King Of Technology by lumydee

Te digo algo en lso oltimos capitulos el autor a metido demaciada mierda por aqui y por allá, a tal punto que ya no puedo leer la novela.

It was fun at first but it just kept dragging on and on and I just felt like I already know what would happen even if I don't read it and I was right about 90% of the time so overall a passing grade just try not to burn yourself reading it

Seriously reviews on this site makes me want to not read any Novel xD
seriousely plz point out good points too
As I might drop the site as i wont be reading anything here otherwise
Unless summery feels tooooo interesting to me

HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA what the heck am i reading? He got technology so advance in just, months? Srly. Just think that the system is doing the heavy work to make it more enjoyable. This comment is about chapts. 1-50.
The world building is 80% fantasy + 20% realistic. He got advance technology too fast, the author took a leap rather than a step. 3.5/5 for me.

Hmm so i kept reading further into this novel since im interested in world building novels concept.

Unfortunately, this novel cannot be enjoyed my men.

1)Random villains, a , b , c , d , f , g ,h ,i ............x, y , z , with exactly the same 1-dimensional personality as the other villains, and with minus 100 IQ , appear constantly throughout the novel .

Every male villain is a rapist, sadist, nobel, killing maniac, who is either a prince/crown prince/king/emperor/master of the worlds largest underground organization which has existed for 400 years/monarch, which unfortunately no matter what it is they all have exactly the same character and minus-100 IQ.
Every female villain is a sadist, killing maniac, who is either a princess/concubine/first wife/second wife/third wife/main wife/mother Queen of a emperor/empire which unfortunately all have the exactly same character and same minus-100 IQ, and also they have exactly the same goals!

2)The plot is constantly recycled minus-100 IQ plot as well. Constantly random villain a,b,c,....x,y,z create trouble for our MC which just happens to be a -100IQ character as well. MC at this point is already omnipotent, dont let the title deceive you. While MC created technological weapons centuried ahead of their time, in actuallity he doesnt even need them. Thats because he can just take a sword and kill 1000+ men by himself. The system is nothing sort of omnipotent which makes the novel feel bland as f#ck always, since there is never any risk for the MC with that type of system.

Everyone in this novel is so stupid im honestly offended.

Anyway, i somehow managed to read as long as 800 chapters in 2 months though because i got headaches every time after reading more than 20 chapters a day.
I have nothing more to add, other than the fact that this novel seems to be written by a teenager since it lacks any common sense that can be found in people who are in contact with society.
At least thats what i hope.


So here is my conclusion.
----->If this novel is written by a teen, then i have to say good job and commend his hard work, and i'll be looking forward to reading future novels and seeing his improvements.
------>If this novel is written by and adult, then i have to say he should go out and experience society in order to get some common sense, if he ever hopes to write a better novel in the future.

Peace

Ужасный

Ok, this novel has absolutely no resemblance of logic so far(chapter 26).
1)Author calls our MC a king, when actually at best he is just a fcking lord of a terittorry, since he has gone through nothing official to be crowned king(corronation exc.).

2)This guy should learn to act as for what his identity is. He supposedly is a KING, BUT
-----> HE calls every fcking peasants on his territory "my family". No fcking king will call the peasants in his territory his family :) . You can call them my people, or my subjects exc. Anything is better that calling them my family.
-----> Also he keeps going around his territory in order to teach the peasants MATH. You are the fcking king idiot, start acting like it. Teach your trusted somewhat educated subordinates basic knowledge, and then have them teach the general population. What a stupid *******.

3) I almost forgot, but the moment this MC woke up in the new body he instantly called all the people close to him by name, like everything was normal. We are not described what he thinks about it at all. Its like he never reincarnated in the first place. He just woke up in the body of a new person and called 'MOM I AM HUNGRY' like he had rehearsed this 10000 times.....

I mean come on man, most reaaders dont really care about the details, for example how much time does the wheat need to grow?? or shit like that. Even if you get it wrong who gives a f#ck.
But some common sense is the only thing thats absolutely necessary...


Anyway Because i am interested in this system-world building thing im gonna keep reading for a while more, and hopefully novel will improve or else adios!

This novel was good at early chapters but as time passes it becomes boring as hell! The technological and kingdom development was too fast for a backward civilization that it only takes less than 3 years to develop a desolate land into a prosperous city/kingdom from modern civilization. The MC and the heroine didn't act befitting for their status! And in the later chapter, the story looked at the different characters and didn't focus on the MC, so it is pretty boring.

I wouldn't read it if not for the kingdom building and technology development. Overall, I rate it 2/5

My favorite part of the novel is the faces the author makes with the symbols.
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Status (Chapters Read): 169

Star Rating: ⭐⭐⭐

This novel is actually quite decent once you get further into it. It has some glaring issues but also positives. You will be shocked by the speed of progression but at the same time feel as if it's too slow. It's a weird state.

The characters are interesting enough, and some of them will often re-appear and have background given to them, even whole chapters which does help to break up the monotony of constantly hearing about how 'godly' Landon is. The MC, Landon is also interesting enough and is compassionate, caring but also ruthless enough to protect his Kingdom from the scourge of the world.

World building is also solid and you'll have chapters dedicated to learning about powerful figureheads and the movement of these people within the world and how it affects Landon and his Kingdom. Furthermore, you learn about power struggles, what continents have what, religions, cultures, etc.

Grammar is... passable. It's good enough to read but dialogue can be clunky and the author consistently misuses '...' during sentences for some odd reason. Spelling is fine and apart from the occasional misspelt word, you won't need to correct everything. There are also author notes which take up entire chapters.

If you like RTW (Release that Witch), you will probably like this novel. It focuses more heavily on Kingdom building and the MC has a system to help him out, though it doesn't show up all too often at the moment.