My Celestial Ascension by LittleBastard879

Honestly this story loose it’s appeal as the story continues first of all the author looks like he or she is forcing so many things from many different stories he/she has read into one place without properly constructing how it will fit into the story he/she is trying to portray.

My first irk is the incest, now I don’t mind incest but I have a limit to how much stories I can read containing incest just because someone made a story of incest and a lot of people liked it does not mean a lot of people will like the next incest story cause it’s looking like a trend now that every R-18 stories must contain some kind of incest such as mother or sister sleeping with their son and honestly it’s getting annoying, they are other ways they can do this without the incest like adopted son or sister or even step mother or step sister that is better but incest with the same blood and just because he transmigrated from another world does not make it any better the worst are those that don’t even transmigrate yet sleep with their mother or sister. There is a saying moderation is better than excess, I don’t want to read a R-18 story and half of the story is about how a guy sleep with his whole family members .Aunt/cousin is okay but immediate family is a little bit too much.

My second irk deals with the way the author tries to combine the genre of cultivation with game another thing that most authors are doing nowadays that I feel just does not work and the reason why most of them don’t get a good ratings and eventually cancel their whole story or take indefinite hiatus. The simple fact is that adding a game approach to the story just diminish the mystical or magical aspect of cultivation and one of the little things that people enjoy in cultivation trope stories, now you might disregard it since it’s just a little aspect of cultivation story but without it the story is no longer a cultivation story. This is what am talking about in the stages of his cultivation you give a limit in numbers of how many qi for each stage, to me that is just downright terrible cause I like to see when the author describes how the character cultivates until he is filled up like how someone feels after eating and then the character breakthrough now with that we have a sense of imagination of the human body especially the dantain and how it feels up with the qi and if the dantain/meridian is bigger and how he could accumulate more qi than others now with this I get to imagine the human body and how qi would work if I were in the character place but with game attributes(numbers) I instead think of a game avatar instead of immersing in the story and character and the story then looks like the author is just talking about a game to me instead of presenting a magical Taoist/dao world to me, I don’t mind system but I believe the system should be there to give a summary of the techniques and abilities of the character to the reader and serve as a magical golden spoon to the character like giving him techniques and abilities that he could buy through the system the only number for me should be the currency or points the character exchange with the system for awesome rewards.

Now my third irk is that when authors combines genre of cultivation with other genre especially fan-made stories of anime’s mixed with cultivation the author does not go in-dept in the cultivation trope to make it enjoyable for people that like the cultivation genre in fact the cultivation feels more like a system of the genre the author is trying to mix the cultivation story with so it becomes boring cause most of the thing we enjoy in cultivation stories are not there or not talked about much like for example the dao won’t be talked about at all or just a few words mention in the technique and that’s all, the technique name/ability are some kind of simple stuff that will barely be surface stuff in a real cultivation story.

And lastly making the system fully emotional and acting so close with the Mc just killed the vibe,it feels like you are quickening the pace just to make her another mc girl/waifu, if the pace between them were a little slow like gaining emotions as the story continued would have been perfect.

it's seems I'm late discovering this. Well .. I'm following my brothers

LittleBastard879 are you from Assam? If yes from which district?

Cover is so hot

How difficult to read this... forced interactions, cliche conflicts, childhood romance and also the brainless mc, this novel is not even good for entertaining.

This one is like the combination of Cultivation Online and Witch Hunter......

ahh the cover. when will i learn not to get horny baited

heh! my dao of right hand is getting rusty lately so ill try and read this and get some insignificant comprehension along the way.

Hmm idk about rest of you but my celestial dragon sure is rising to pierce heavens... let's see how the novel is brothers.