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Dimensional Descent by Awespec

Dimensional Descent
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The Third Dimension is collapsing. The Fourth Dimension is descending.

First it seemed... Read more
The Third Dimension is collapsing. The Fourth Dimension is descending.

First it seemed that only technology would evolve, but who knew the world itself could too? It wasn’t as simple as climate change or tectonic movement. No, the fundamental laws of physics that governed everything were changing.

Leonel was fairly lucky. His family was decently well off, his father loved him enough to brew vomit inducing nutrient rich smoothies every morning, and this was both the day of the National Championship and his 521st confession to his dream girl, Aina. As his father always said, nothing was more important than respect and persistence.

Unfortunately, everything changed that night. At the after party of ages, the world reached a saturation point and an apocalypse descended.

Abilities awakened. Sub-Dimensional Zones opened. Invalids rampaged through the Earth like a virus…

Those who could evolve would have a slim chance for survival. Those who couldn’t would die.

This novel will be a unique spin on the dungeon/system genre. Dungeons won’t be dungeons and the system won’t be a system… Take a look to find out what I maen :) Collapse
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    Penguin
    + 17 ⋅ 3 -
    This novel has interesting and semi-unique ideas but:
    Mc biggest simp that i ever seen. He ready trow away his life for girl that delay answer for 421 attempt, lies him, gets him into trouble without alert. Yes, she have feels to him too but wtf, why she use him to deal with her family thing but not even respond to his feelings?

    Author paint this mc like super calculative mastermind but every his step wrong. Literally every single one. Mc can't even think for a minute how he can use available stuff till plot armor force him to think about. He say everytime " i'm realize my weakness. I need to change" but next time he do it again or same thing. For example: he has huge database that cover all in the world and he has ability to save information in his mind fast and precision but he always ask this database after shit happens (one question can skip 100 ch) and ask minimum to know about shit but not waht he can do with.

    Nothing go right. In the end of every event chain definitely some shit will appear out of nowhere. Author just incapable to make tension or mystery other than trow mc in trouble but every trouble's keep unfinished.
    Every fight: mc tryies hard -> mc get initiative -> shit happens -> mc near to death -> "I'M REFUSE" -> plot armor activates. Just like shounen anime where main emeny can be defeat only in second battle but here every enemy that have name is main.
    Not only battles repetitive but arcs too: he come to new place > someone get offended fo no reason > mc become isolated > mc really offend them > everyone want to kill him > he escape with good stuff with big injures.

    Mc never deserving anything in author eyes. Author nerfed mc everytime he can. All mc's effort useless coz every disabled person without arms and legs can push him around to death.

    I'm understand that moral stuff is questionable and everyone have their own point but this time mc's moral frustrate me. He's painfully righteous but also is hypocrite. I don't want write much about it. Mc's moral disgust me more than every righteous guy that i ever see.
    I'm prefer evil protagonists but don't have any problem with other type unless they consistent and not retarded. i'm okay with absolute retard mc if it's make to develop mc further but it's not our case...

    Super slow pace. Mc's world evolve from 3rd grade to 4th grade. There are 10 grades and mc's world have potential 8. 333 ch and there are several year to complete first evolution. How many chapters will need to end story i can't even say but with this "trouble under every rock" style i don't think it will be ended.

    In the end it had potential but author chose money i think. It's have interesting worldbuilding and magic mechanics but plot is garbage. Even chinese "young master after young master" repetitive trash more creativity in their repetition. Mc just retard as i'm wrote above, his personality suck and how author build world around him suck twice.
    It's has potential as Oracle Path or Supremacy Games. But i can't even force myself to read new arc...
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      Ale18
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      I Became the Rich Second-generation Villain,esta es de villano,leela y dime si es mejor que esta.
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    tametyrannus
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    My disapointment os boundless.
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    rrdd
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    Is there a Harem in the novel?
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      OldDaoist
      + 6 ⋅ 1 -
      No, guy is simp to the point he is beta in relationship. Loves 'one and only' Aina and for no apparent reason, they barely interacted before the story began
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    kufus
    + 11 ⋅ 4 -
    his unconditional attachments towards this girl Aina ruins the good story.

    I could only read up to chapter 100. The story is good and refreshing. The only thing that kept me reading further is the mc himself. This guy is a huge simp. Because of this, he ignores whether the girl doesn't take him seriously, lies to him, treats him like he's a softie which is actually true.

    There are a lot of good stories like this ruined by simp mcs around. I just don't understand why authors sabotage their own work? This is no love.
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      yixiu
      + 6 ⋅ 1 -
      I would read this too but as soon as description mention Aina then you already know this mc a simp or some pu**y
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        SorenJayReynard
        + 8 ⋅ 7 -
        MC once said to his best friend that as long as Aina said no to his advances, he will back down and actually meant it. (Fortunately, she never said no, but neither does she said yes. She only blushed, became flustered, and fled for 521 times, hinting that she's considering it, but afraid of taking the last step due to abandonment and/or isolation in the past, maybe?)

        It may not look like it, but the MC has high IQ and EQ, with his emotions backed heavily by cold and calculative logic, indicating that once he is betrayed or cast aside, he will willingly cut ties with that person without being consumed by emotions; and by contrast, he will immediately turn into a demon from hell once Aina is harmed or threatened, showing that if people stood by him, he will do the same for them, especially when his heart and family is invested into the goal and effort.

        An MC like that, who knows his limits, reins in his emotions once he has a goal and purpose to accomplish, capable of fooling veteran fighters to think that he is just an immature boy that they can underestimate, hiding his abilities unless absolutely necessary, and turning into a berserker in an instant when his loved ones are compromised, is a person I never want to cross.

        He's actually far from being a mere simp.
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      SorenJayReynard
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      Aina never actually took Leonel for granted as she saw him to be invaluable as a warrior, strategist, and emotional support.

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        OldDaoist
        + 8 ⋅ 1 -
        Oh yeah, almost 600 chapters later they held hands, how lewd
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          SorenJayReynard
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          Held hands?? Have you read Chapter 504, 507-508?



          And to be clear, when I said Aina gradually reciprocates Leonel's advances, I didn't meant that they have s-x, but a gradual acceptance of the other's feelings.

          Leonel wooed Aina for a long time in order for her to accept him, not for him to sleep with her on the get go.



          That would be a very shallow and immature goal for someone like Leonel, who's literal motto is "Patience and Perseverance".
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          maximux
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          she gave him a handjob ! you weren't reading ?! chapter 507-508. it was quite steamy if you ask me...
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    Aathil
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    In which ch does he uncover the truth abt his past and his fam
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      Ebrahim
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      What do you mean by his own past? He knows about his father that is from higher dimention in the early chapters, but he still doesn't know that his father is one of the elites of his own family, and he finds out about his mother and grandfather in the chapter 500.
      But Dont think about this matters give it a try its good
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    Zer0Wing
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    Plot: 4/5
    Good plot, nothing is too inconsistent and it progresses fairly smoothly. The high rating comes from the premise which is very interesting. Zones are my favorite part of the story, and I hope we get to see even more of them on other planets.
    Characters: 4.5/5
    Decent characters all around. Main annoying bits are the mc himself and the fl. Takes a while for their romance to progress beyond "oooh she pretty." I dislike the word but yeah mc is a huge simp. Antagonists are intelligent and take advantage of every opportunity they're given. Mc actually has some good threats and he does lose occasionally. He is not op, at least not yet.
    World Building: 3.5/5
    Power system is well explained maybe too explained. However, I feel like abilities are too vaguely explained/not explained enough. The universe is shown as this immense place with all sorts of higher dimensional beings and planets. It's very interesting. However, Earth is very underdeveloped.

    4/5 as of chapter 400
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    AndreesM
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    1 fml?
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      Ebrahim
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      Yeah MC is just chasing after one female
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    xExekut3x
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    I'm only a few chapters in, but this is great so far! It's really well written, which is my biggest sticking point.
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      xExekut3x
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      I'm all caught up, now. Story eventually suffers from the same problem all WebNovel works have: bloat. Pointless drivel and repetition to jack up that word count for more $$$...

      I find myself skipping a lot in each chapter. I skipped over a few entire chapters, at one point.
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    Badnana
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    Really good premise and very good concept. I don't like the random power numbers the mc seeming gets from a glance. The power levels and different power systems are also badly explained.
    Hopefully things get better.
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      Jha_Alexander
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      I thought the power levels and power system where explained quite well actually
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    Smile4Me
    + 4 ⋅ 3 -
    too many info. lot of explanation. it take more than half of everything in a chapter. so much comparison just to make a single point that he gain strength.and more powerful than before.
    even a casual conversation will devolved into a history lesson and could take like 5 to 8 paragraphs .its annoying.

    this novels are suitable for those who love so much info even if its unnecessary for the whole arc.
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      White_Sami
      + 0 ⋅ 1 -
      I don't really agree, there are info du people to be sure but it isn't difficult to follow imo. They make it pretty clear what we are supposed to know. Comparisons are made to ensure we know the strength of the MC better after a breakthrough. It's info heavy but don't let that stop you from reading it since its really a quality read.
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      Readingweeb
      + 2 ⋅ 0 -
      This is not true but I will not talk too much about it just remember the story has a lot of potential for chapters and could easily end up with 2k+. Also, remember although it has a large amount of info this helps with this particular story's progression as it can easily become very confusing, and do not forget he uploads 2-3 chapters daily so it is worth the read.
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