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Douluo Dalu: The Legend of Heavenly Ruler by Nine_Clouds

Leon is an average high school student who likes to watch anime and read novels.
He's about to... Read more
Leon is an average high school student who likes to watch anime and read novels.
He's about to cross the street, only to be greeted by a truck and died.
But, he got reincarnated as Uchiha yet dead again because Itachi killed him.
Leon got reincarnated again as the grandson of the recovery girl.
He got kidnaped and tortured by All For One.
After his third death, he got reincarnated as a son of Bibi Dong.
In this fourth life, he wants to change his fate to become the strongest.

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    Absolutely trash novel.
    Author has no idea what's he is writing about.
    He is just writing randomly and adding girls like nothing with nonsensical reasons. Mc is barely 8 and he already had 4 Maids. And women likes him for soooo stupid reasons.
    I have hell load to complain about this Fanfic novel. I have read fanfiction before, some are brilliant and this was is clearly disgusting.

    If it's about Adult things, then author should add those but I am above 80 chapters and mc barely is 10 years or something.
    If it's about story, adventure, action and so on then write those!
    If it's about both then balance that!

    Balancing sucks. Action sucks, story sucks, romance- don't ever talk about it. And mc is still a child so no, no adult things.
    Atleast make him 14-15 so he can atleast grope or play with his women, even if sex doesn't happen!

    This novel did extremely terrible at everything. Conversation between mc & girls are so boring and pointless as well, extremely stupid as well just remembering MC's constant 'weak smile' and the girls over exaggerated reaction to everything. Simply pisses me off eyetwit

    I seriously don't understand, who the f#ck gives this novel above 4 rating.
    Even a blind person can probably see that author is simply writing randomly.
    And there are novels which are far less rating than this and are far more better!
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      Edit: After chapter 80-90. Fights and story picks ups. Which is not bad. And got me hooked to continue till chapter 269, where I dropped the novel completely.

      The fights in this novel is not bad the only thing that killing it is Harem and there are some other points but those are minor reasons.

      I like harem but this is far too terribly done. Well most harem novels are terrible, sadly. If one can see clearly, there is no romance here only forced situations with all the women's. Anyway I am tired of it.

      It would be amazing if Author stops for a moment and write a fantasy action novel with harem but don't add women like Pokemon, even if its maids it's still needs to done properly. Also this is my personal taste but in fantasy novels where women can fight its better if they fight complete battle by themselves and not like in this novel where it's always mentioned how badass MC's maid are but in each fight mc will suddenly drop in.

      It's better if harem members are shorter in number and also more badass and more importantly their relationship is not business based. In other words 'you give me this, I give you that. Because you are the 'best' man I will follow you.' things like that.
      (Well I am ziping it but people who can see will clearly see thats how harem members relationship with mc is in this novel, except his sister probably.)

      Well that's why author needs to write better romance then it will be great as author really wrote the action/fights and story quite amazingly after chapter 80-90.
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    Есть тайтлы где не нужно думать просто читайте на свое удовольствие
    Сделав так мне этот тайтл понравился
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    • 2.3
    2.3
    dropped, wtf with this pedo mc, he was flirting with a 8-9 year old wtf?
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    when does he grows up? between 15-20 years old
    i have never liked novels where you can see a kid blasting buildings and winning against people 10 times their age, i remember that i have read this, but i dropped it when he goes back with bibi dong and enters the spirit hall, when he encounters himself with qian renxue
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    • 4.0
    4.0
    Great read, highly recommend. So far it blends soul land, naruto, mha. Would love more r18 chapters and or a little more vanilla interaction with every member of harem. I know they are in middle of preparation for war but still he can just manipulate time to spend with them
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    Tir
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    So a question guy's. Does mc becomes female or what? Is it also a gender bender. Because one tag is called beautiful female lead that why.
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      + 30 -
      Usually a tag used for when the MC’s girlfriend/wife or whatever is beautiful
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    the unknown god kill
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    Please someone can recomanded me some fanfics?
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    + 22 -
    I'm starting to read. Wish me luck.
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      LYCIFER
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      Good Luck, so how was it?
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        I advise.I like it. I read it in 2 days. I would like R-18 chapters.
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    Bastard
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    I'm even more amused, I think the fanfiction is absurd, the novel will be like a novel that explores various anime. all anime and donghua characters are included in this novel. I drop there is a Naruto character in soul land
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      LYCIFER
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      This is fanfic, what do you expect?
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        It didn’t say there was naruto in it tho so everyone thought every character are only related to soul land
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          LYCIFER
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          It did tho? Itachi was mentioned in the original website(Webnovel) synopsis and the first chapter.
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            + 01 -
            Oh.
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              Bro even in this synopsis it says so
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              Only as a background story
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    Can someone recommend me some good Douluo Dalu(Soul Land) SI( Self-Insert) like this? maybe some 200+ chapters
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      On webnovel
      'Douluo: my spirit is a spirit ring'
      Definitely a good read I'm only 80 chps in rn and it has 300 completed
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        Na it aint that good

        Go read some douluo fanfics from uukanshu website u will absolutely love it
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          It is good, I standby
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      dragon king of apocalypsis
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      quest maker of soul land.
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