MMO: Pierce Heaven Til' It Breaks网游之射破苍穹

Dropped before ch600.
I would have liked to continue but it just didn't feel like it was worth it.

Best part of this story is scumbag Wang.

The author doesn't abstain from NTR-genre (you might get a hint from the story's summary, but that ). Or more like the author somewhat likes it, considering that there's plenty of relationships going that way in the story. And lots, lots of hints about that. Some other dark motives also exist: drugging, blackmailing, r*pe, prostitution (willing and unwilling).

The story plot overall is somewhat good. The harem women are...questionable. The MC can do a lot for the women he likes (like giving away his benefits). Or something like when: Other than situations like that he's pretty good.

The story is readable, but is still aggravating at times. And there's some rare moment where author just goes some alternative route while conveniently forgetting about some fact (and has audacity to continue switching between those routes), and sometimes he's just spawning another fact to get through the plot the way he likes. So unless you don't like thinking much about the story or then are wishing to overlook it...

And ye, whether or not he's sleeping with the women is really (really!) vague. It's one of the most annoying traits of this story. (one even starts to wonder WTH is going on, - really feels like cucking (which also exists in story, some wife swapping "jokes" and many other mentionings). Most of the sexual themes really mentioned are with the other characters - the MC even with his closest GF are having idk what, and pretty rarely. While I'm even surprised that the sexual-relationship with the NPCs as a theme wasn't elaborated upon almost at all (hints, jokes, but no action other than groping).

The ending arc isn't really that rushed like the others say - it's even better that way because the dungeon fights have already become pretty boring and excessively spamming with the abilities and *sounds* (and the ending chapters were sort of too much with that plot nagging). And I really am not sure about all those harem members - there's like 2 of the girls that MC really loves, while the rest are just for the collection. Whatever anyway.
I'd personaly put some age rating on this story. Even though there's been not much in terms of gore, the sexual themes and dirt of living/society are plenty.

3/5 stars...barely.

This is an alright novel to burn threw if you want to stock pile chapters for other novels. Assuming you like VrMmoRpg novels. I didn't enjoy this as much as I did Rebirth of a Thief or Shura's Wrath and I felt like those two were just average.

It could've been better with a better translation, and lack of censorship. It will remain a mystery why the translators chose to translate the censored raws instead of the original uncensored raws.

Due to the censorship, it makes the mc's relationships with some of the harem confusing for most of the novel. As he has sex or fools around with some of them but it's cut out so you don't know.

Character design is rather simplistic and bland, leaning more towards immature or idiotic. MC's first life woes are retarded, and very forced. Itemization is bad in the game, so no real thrill for "the loot". The skills also suck hard. Overlord Arrow...really.

Lastly, the ending is......obviously rushed. It's an alright ending I guess.....but I dunno, this like many other web novels out there leave you with that feeling of, something with potential but failing to achieve it.

my first novel. when I first read i thought it was the peak of literature but coming back to it after reading some of the big novels (LOTR, legendary mechanic, CO, etc.) its honestly quite average...maybe above average. although I have good memories of it, it simply isn't that great. 6/10

My pole pierces the heavens

You should read this just for this line """like saving a woman in distress then making love to her seven times in a row while her child slept in the next room"""

The most impressive thing about this novel is when the MC can get more than one achievement with just one plan. shoot two birds with one stone
8/10

what was the line that feng xi say - you are the master of the universe or fate something

I had hopes for this but everything of what little seemed to happen was so lackluster. The order of things seemed random plus with the repeated chapters and skipped content the continuity was poor. Each character was either a normal person or a -100 Iq retard. Retard isnt a word I use often, I just say stupid or idiotic, but they were seriously retarded here. For example anyone that interacts with scumbag Wang. The harem was bad as usual, with the girls just liking him because he annoyed them to death and the girls were annoying too. I liked jiaojiao at first as a fiery dark skin tomboy but she was bitchy the whole time and it could've been toned down. I dropped at 650 ish and was already skimming at that point and I can't in good mind recommend this unless you have nothing better and love harem and vr novels just that much. 5.7/10