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MMO: Pierce Heaven Til' It Breaks网游之射破苍穹

Li Yi once lived the dream of every pro gamer. He was at the top of his game with the best... Read more
Li Yi once lived the dream of every pro gamer. He was at the top of his game with the best equipment, the highest stats, and everything a gamer could ever hope for. However, he soon realized that none of his ill-gotten gains for his to keep when he was branded Public Enemy Number One and killed in the biggest battle of the ages.

Now, he has the chance to turn back the clock and return to a time before his first mistake put him on the path of no return. This time, Li Yi will make different choices. With that, comes many interesting encounters — like saving a woman in distress then making love to her seven times in a row while her child slept in the next room. However, will he get back to what truly matters?

One thing is for sure, with the memories retained from his past, he will become King of this game. Collapse
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    I'll probably give this fic a 8 /10 max
    Story Is good , mc us comparatively consistent, knows tha5 even though he came from the future he's not the best player and needs to work hard to become one,
    Though one thing that bothers me is the way he acts around the guild master, he could have easily taken that spot, but he gave it to her, of she asked for equipment he will go out his way to help her doing hard quests
    I mean c'mon ......
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      Also can someone recommend some manga/manwha , novels where mc is strong from the start or will grow strong eventually and uses a bow as his weapon
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        Or where mc is solo from the start like ' one man army's or " Emperor of solo play"
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          One of my favorite strong-to-stronger is Swordsmeister of Rome. Nice plot, nice MC, nice side-chars, and nice waifu.

          As for bow users... there aren't many, at least not many good ones that I have read. The better one until now is the releasing The Primal Hunter but while the MC becomes a powerhouse in midst of his people, he is still VERY FAR from being really strong.

          Oh, recalled a few others with MC using bows! Tsuki ga Michibiku Isekai Douchuu and The Novel's Extra (gun/bow)
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    Ehh una historia de 7/10 si el autor se hubiera inspirado del renacido el guardián legendario pues hubiera sido mejor...
    Porque muchas lagunas hay en el juego..
    No hay historia fuera del juego...
    No hay desarrollo con de los personajes femeninos del Harem..
    Muchos detalles que hacen la historia sea corta y con lagunas...

    Si quiere ver una novela mejor ve a renacido guardián legendario...no hay lagunas pero el único que veo es el desarrollo de las escena con las mujeres...
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    There several parts that good about this story. Mainly, MC is relatively consistent, and, for the most part, mechanics of the game remains consistent. However, the story suffers from having several different translators throughout the story, so there is inconsistency in some terms, and descriptions. Overall, it was good pacing and flow up until Chapter 899. After that, its easy to see that the last 68 chapters were rushed, with very little connection between events, lack of description, and unexplained and unannounced time skips. For example, the I was not sure how long has passed between the last arc and the one before it. Additionally, the few chapters were just badly written, with several deux machina.

    The system is used is good, with many great segments that wonderfully blended what it is like to be in a MMO and rpg fantasy story (my favorite is the fire peak arcs). The harem in the story starts out great and only gets a little messy in the last 70 or so chapters (
    ). He doest sleep with women, but the author purposely keeps it vague and implied, which confusing at some points because it would take me several chapters of context afterword to realize what happened.

    Overall Rating: 6.5/10 Not a must read has its faults, but still enjoyable to read.

    Important note: Chapters 629 and 630 are swapped (that how it is in the source material). Read 630 first then 629.
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      terra
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      I'd even want to get spoilers about all of his relationships with women in that "harem" of his. Not really wanting to continue the reading in a usual pace.
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    • 4.3
    4.3
    Decent story, weird ending.
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    Начало было ещё нормально, но сколько бы гг не ебался у каждого противника была экипировка лучше его, но после 300 глав я бросил. За 8 лет игры только 1 человек смог снять с легендарного лука 2 печати(притом способ снятия печатей игрок должен понимать сам), а большинство его вообще проебало, хотя все, что надо для его сохранения, это убивать монстров или пк. А на легендарный скипетр и способ его апа известен и за 1 год ебанный ЧСВ 3 из 9 апов сделал, ах**ть баланс.
    + Я первый раз вижу, что бы в ВР играх уклонение и блок работали как в обычных ММОРПГ. Какой на**й скил, если для уклонения и блока, ты можешь как е**н на месте стоять
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    Эй, занятие сексом 7 раз подряд действительно важно, если гг этого не повторит, я тут же скипну ранобэ.(возможно замена женщины на другую, но 7 раз подряд обязательно)
    P.s. посмотрел жанры и теги: разочарован, ояши походу гг фору дадут.
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