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Harry Potter: The Ring Maker by Loskro1

Harry Potter: The Ring Maker
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Nicholas Iron died under mysterious circumstances on Earth, and was reborn in the world of Harry... Read more
Nicholas Iron died under mysterious circumstances on Earth, and was reborn in the world of Harry Potter as an orphan with a mysterious ring creation system.

He doesn't know why he's here and why he needs this system, but he intends to make the most of his new life, and damn all these curious freaks. Collapse
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    captainplanet
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    • 1.5
    1.5
    Truly the most boring HP fanfic I've ever read, mainly because of author's writing style.
    Around 9 out of 10 chapters are written as summaries, like a daily report of MC's life, his lonely life.
    There are side characters but they don't have any presence at all in the novel, past like the first 100~200 chapters.
    MC faces no challenge or hardship at all, he gets whatever he needs easily, either with his system or some lucky encounter that happens at the right time. This also adds to the dullness of the novel.
    MC's character is bland as it can get from his second year onwards, he becomes a gigantic douchebag but other characters are all cool about it, it was so unnatural reading his interactions after that.
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    alshb
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    after MC found the
    book and found out about
    , the story is basically zeroed in on it and overshadowed everything. it should've been arcs of powerleveling, dungeoning, finding ancient wizards' secret abode, massive timeskip by accidental plane shift, awn, prepping for the inevitable, yet the story actually lost all of its tension in lieu. so many events, major plots, and historical moments got written down in a summary kind of way, which is a major turn off for me, i think it won't matter if this actually has hundred chapters more as those won't suddenly matters to the ending that's both not heart-pounding nor satisfying

    rating 3.9
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    SeriousReal
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    story is ok, chapters are as short as a bathroom run on tts.


    The ending was premature and rushed cant even describe it.
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    Almizcle
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    • 4.3
    4.3
    8/10
    I liked it, a quick read as the chapters are short but nice. The ending was a bit rushed but the author tried to patch it as good as he could.
    It reminds at times of HP: a magical journey, but I don't know if it's because of things that are common in all HP fanfics.
    As a bad point but bearable, the grammar is not the best and it lacks a lot of punctuation so you have to read twice sometimes to understand it; the author also combines first person POV and 3 person POV, which makes it kind of weird sometimes.
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    ShipSinker
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    • 3.5
    3.5
    Comfy read with steady power increase.

    Chapters are relatively short, and are generally in 4-6 chunks of paragraphs with sometimes awkward sentences.

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    SeriousReal
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    story is ok, chapters are as short as a bathroom run on tts.
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    hillsidejohn
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    • 4.3
    4.3
    Solid work. The fanfic is obviously set in HP world but takes elements of other fictions and introduces it here as well. The system is important but not prevalent, I personally like it but it might be something others might have a problem with. This is definitely something worth checking out. If there's a problem I have with it, it's that chapters are pretty short, that being said, it's not like it's filled with filler either.
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    Let me sign-up
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    Not actually a system novel, the author drops it after he redeems his first set of points as far as I can tell (im on chap 168). Disappointing way of retconning.
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      _Ain_
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      It does have system elements in it but unlike other system novels that are system heavy this one is very chill about it. To me its a nice change for the usual systems
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        Let me sign-up
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        After reading more it seems your right, there is a weird space of around 200 chapters in which the author avoids it heavily
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    Omnis Ra
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    Story was ok at first, but why bring in stuff from LOR and Oblivion, and other stuff. It got stupid really fast
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    LordLeo
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    Im a few chapters in, where's Hermione? Did Author not want her?
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      LordLeo
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      Nevermind I found her
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      DevilCosmos
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