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Harry Potter: The Ring Maker by Loskro1

Nicholas Iron died under mysterious circumstances on Earth, and was reborn in the world of Harry... Read more
Nicholas Iron died under mysterious circumstances on Earth, and was reborn in the world of Harry Potter as an orphan with a mysterious ring creation system.

He doesn't know why he's here and why he needs this system, but he intends to make the most of his new life, and damn all these curious freaks. Collapse
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    I’ll be honest first ~50 or so chapters are barely passable 3.5 star (70%) work. It’s awkward, has pacing issues, and quality is all over the place. Some early chapters make me want to throw a 1 or 2 star at them. Yet it does get better.

    Past ch50 and after the author’s rant it gets that little spark of magic and past ch100 it starts to open its wings and a does more of it’s own thing in interesting ways while the chapters get more substance. Almost all the awkward shit is worked out, the author gets their shit together, and the world building starts getting good. I’d definitely bump the quality up to 4 stars or even a bit more where I’m at at ch 200(I have caught up to 396, quality is still slowly rising). Past that we get introduced to a lot of new original content with some themes we will all find familiar but rarely applied to the HP world.

    It’s no legendary novel, but after MC gets to hogwarts and settles in it becomes evident why the novel is still alive and getting to ch400 soon, if it stayed as bad as it started or got worse it would have died long ago. If you get past the author’s noob starting phase it is a decent novel to pass the time.
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    I’m 130 chapters in and the mc has used his system twice. He has a system shop which he can use to buy pretty much anything he’d ever need not even exclusive to the HP world but he’s only used it once and it was to gamble. If u ignore that one glaring issue this is a pretty solid fanfic. I just wish the author at least put a limit on how much he can use the system as an excuse in the beginning instead of having him just not use it.
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      I’m all caught up and honestly I got over the issues I had with the first 100 chaps. The author does love drawing things out tho. Overall pretty solid hp fanfic
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    Sheeeeeeeeeesh 😎

    Bro in the cover got that drip🤑🤑
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    Sigh Course It Harry Potter Fanfic.....When You Go To Fanfictions And Crossovers This Genre Of Harry Potter Has More Stories Than Actual Original Animes And Novels💀
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      That's just accumulation because HP was popular when the Internet and fanfiction became a thing 15-20 years ago
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        Yeah But It Suck Now....I Used To Read Them 2012 But Now....When I See Harry Potter Fics I Turn Another Way
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    Is it worth reading? And is the grammar and english readible?
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      I would say so, I quite liked it. It's essentially the MC is placed into an Orphanage in the HP world with a "gacha" system that after used the first time, he got Celebrimbors memories on how to make powerful magical rings. He also has essentially the spirit of Celebrimbor guiding him inside his mindscape. It's pretty "slow" paced though with it being I believe second year still, but it is made up with there being I think 2 chapters a day. He also get's more methods on making items. The system eventually gave him another way to create items besides Celebrimbors style later on but it hasn't been too explored as far as I know.
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        it may sound crazy, but since I have posted my previous statement I have read the entire book down to the last chapter.
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          Bro don’t leave us hanging, what wisdom have you acquired? Should we follow you or evacuate?
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            It's decent. Not the best. But definitely not the worst harrry potter fanfic I have read, so 3 1/2 stars out a 5
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              70% is passing, thank you comrade
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    The Mandarin
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    Ollivander about to get some serious competition

    (This novel doesn't excite me but it's a hp fanfiction and a system novel
    So I have to read it by law)

    Ranobe fan made discord server-
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    why would you need a ring creation skill in a magic world?
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      Buffs, maybe replace wands
      I mean it's a f#cking system
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      Well... it's Celebrimbors way of making rings so it's pretty OP. Plus, with some of the ideas used for the rings
      it's pretty interesting. I doubt he will only do ring making, that's just the main system focus.
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    What’s the difference between Paul Walker and Betty White? Paul Walker got to 100 before he's gone
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      I've seen videos of her driving I'm sure she got to 100
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      Considering the car he drove and the shape the car was in, I have to say I was probably a lot more than 100.
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      Explanation: His car was going over 100 miles/kilometers per hour
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    Harry Potter fanfic again but idea seems interesting 🤔... Will see in future

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