White Online by Alekzi

I miss this novel I came back to reread

i have just started reading this and before going further i wanted to know if there was incest in this or not

I agree with all comments. Literally basically I loved Simo Hayha and that's like it. But solid 3/5 like said below. Have a good day!

A 3/5 rating looks right for this.

The writing is just lacking. Many broken sentences, weird choice of words at times. Author just sucks at writing combat, the earlier simple ones were okay but as characters get stronger with more skills, the writing gets worse like author is unable to depict a fast paced real-time fight with his words (I completely agree with what SeriousReal said about it below).

Another annoying thing is MC being hailed as a genius. He is NOT a genius, he is plain stupid 9 out of 10 times, and gets saved with plot armor even when he's being not stupid

As for plot, it feels like a simple plotline of "gods vs humans(+ other gods)" is unnecessarily made convoluted to add in the mystery, like omitting explanations. Author also keeps adding random shit every now and then with no context, and sometimes irrelevant. I really don't think author planned the plot at all, and just went with whatever came to his mind, there are a few retcons, but those few are very significant to the plot.

The world is also bizarre, we have mythologies and history of our real world inside the novel's fantasy world that is not similar to our real world at all. I don't know how author thinks that even make sense.

Dropped at 391 because MC's stupidity was getting unbearable.

Me lo acabo de termir, el final esta de llorar o reír, pues queda la duda de como logra obtener su poder si fue por la muerte blanca o por la diosa primordial, aun que yo creo que fue por la subclase novelista. NO LO SE 🤣😭🤣😭🤣😭🤣😭🤣😭🤣😭

boring read
mc is very bland
first 50 chapter have no direction
the side characters keeps repeating how mc is a genius, but the mc hasn't really done anything. if you're not into mc that does things half ass. i suggest not to read it
you will only get annoyed

just reposting ny review for comparing the massive contrasting ratings. did it get amazing out of the world becomi g a godly scripture later on or ratings are being manipulated again?
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no direct spoiler review but there are subtle hints and the obvious were said.

it takes about 300 chapters to fully setup the characters and positions, settings and factions. every few chapters mc needs to mention his tragic trauma which in ways was self harmed again. every mention of fml they end up talking about her toes for reason unknown. Every enemy acts exactly the same, crude tasteless swearing and guarantee publicly unacceptable behaviour.

Then it hits through rock bottom, leaving enemy alive while mc is still vulnerable, got publicly praised for getting beat up by a grunt he slain before in public while revealing a nvr to be revealed trump card with no gains for doing so[ btw mc took a gun to a swordfight for that one]. He does the same thing by revealing his fathers major secret which can effect humanity for the worst, while providing the media himself via cops.

mcs every step is an exercise to shoot himself and everyone around him in their proverbial foot. The antagonist in the novel are just thugs made stronger by mc, after that its the typical genre enemy in fantasy.

combat was written poorly usually its written per tempo and if needed a perspective change it will change with the conflicts morale.
This novel outright skips range when convenient and at time reduced to turn based descriptions with mc having more turns and enemy moves would assume mc is just there to show if he recieve a hit or not. Not as jarring if its melee but mc uses a rifle so range and tempo is paramount.

I read a ton of bad novels but never had one butcher my tolerance as efficiently as this one. Even the display pic, his face shows be creamed himself.

what is tha r18 chapter?

I need a spoiler

Rush Ending. overall 4.2/5