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Soul of Negary奈格里之魂

Heed my call! O’ Dragon of Eternal Sin, the Progressive Disaster, the Forerunner, the Land of... Read more
Heed my call! O’ Dragon of Eternal Sin, the Progressive Disaster, the Forerunner, the Land of Eternal Peace, the Flames of Soul Burning, He Who Owns The Deep Soul, the Sound of Origin, the First Cause of All Things, the Principle of Circles… o’ great Negary, your servant calls for your return!

Within the darkness, someone was harmoniously chanting, he was smiling, as he knew he would finally become one with his God.

And all of this, came from the remnant soul that was deceived to travelling to a different world and had his Protagonist Aura stolen. Collapse
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    SON is a novel written with one of the most interesting concepts I've ever read. The story of a vengeful ghost redefining themself while also creating their own unorthodox method to power. It is the good old story of a cultivator defying the heavens but this cultivator is an intelligent and ambitious ghost whereas the heavens is everything else. All the characters especially the leaders of the powers are intelligent in their own right. They can hatch plots upon plots and are scheming bastards to the core.
    The first few arcs are very well crafted and written with the sub-plots capable of being their own stories. Because this story can be said to also be a semi-anthology with Negary being the thread that joins them. In fact most of the story, Negary does not appear only manipulating things from the shadows like the true players of the game.
    But then it goes a bit downhill. The story after the translated chapters focus too much on the other characters and for a moment a person may even forget what the story is. Also the writing for these few parts until the final arc really weakens. The worlds don't feel as unique though the characters feel alive. In the latter half of the novel, Negary becomes a side character with the sub plots being the focus. This may be because the more powerful Negary gets the more broad the meaning is
    In truth, even the sub plots feature Negary for he is ambition and the fire of the will itself. It is the part of us that strive towards improvement and making ourselves greater. Unfortunately, the stories themself are unable to hold their own against this grand ideal with a few exceptions.

    In the end, Soul of Negary is a story of advancement and progression of a remnant of a dead man who becomes the reason for the life of others. 4/5
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    The novel had been good until the 4th arc, then it became really quite bad. Rating is severely affected, 4.25 -> 3.5, taking into account the good and the bad — this arc alone is ~2 stars.

    Expect the first arc to be the best among the first four, with a slight decrease in quality as the novel progresses, but all very good except for the last.

    Temporarily dropped at chapter 340.
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    Quote: ManOfTheBeans
    I can't be the only person who horrifically misread the title...

    me too
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    #panic# MTL starts at chapter 498 instead of 1
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    DATE: 【PURGE】
    VISION NO.: 【RECTIFIED】
    CLEARANCE LEVEL: [CLASSIFIED] and TIER-Ω Authority level.

    AUTHOR: Dr. 【RECTIFIED】
    DEPARTMENT: Trans-Dimensional Cognition & Soul Mechanics

    FIELD REPORT:
    While reviewing 【RECTIFIED】 fragments concerning FORBIDDEN VISION: “Soul of Negary” — true designation 【RECTIFIED】 — I recovered the following notice, authored by Miss 【RECTIFIED】, a certified specialist in multiversal theory and soul transference.


    RECOVERED NOTICE:
    This story was somewhat of an antithesis to Lord of the Mysteries.
    LOTM was about Klein trying to keep his humanity despite his incipient Godhood. He was a crippled god trying to be human.
    Soul of Negary is about a crippled human soul trying to be God.


    Though it stands apart from the class of LOTM, it surpasses much of the diluted fiction parading as fantasy within the web archives.


    END OF TRANSMISSION
    NOTE: Unauthorized attempts to cross-compare narrative archetypes may induce cognitive dissonance or theological instability. Clearance Level-III or Tier-Ω Authority level required for deeper literary analysis.
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      What is this
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        Review
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        Clearly you have no clearance to see. For if you knew what it is that you are looking at, you wouldn't be asking. To explain it is as futile as describing colours to a blind man. Anything redacted is for your own good, trust me.
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    great read, finished the rest of the novel on novelhi -- the translation was good at the begging, started to taper of near the end of what is available here and after chapter 400 I started reading at novelhi.

    The story as a whole is great. Bit sad you lose the viewpoint of the MC negary after he starts to world jump. Although the other characters the author uses to show and progress negary's plans are well written so the multiple pov is still really interesting.

    The ending was a confusing as heck though. But the author had the good conscious to end the story without dragging it on.
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    #panic# I don't think the mtl for this novel uploaded properly. Only 6 random chapters are actually available.
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      Fixed.
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      only we
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        Thank you :).
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    4.8
    Peak
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      Isn't it dropped?
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        Nah the original is complete don't know why they stopped translating
        I'm reading at wtr the ai there is pretty good
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          Wtr? Please what's that
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            Wtr lab for getting the raws
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    #Panic# Oh lord Oh lord have you imagined a world where Soul of Negary has Ai MTL either Gemini or Deepseek? I foresee with the help of Baba Vanga if I beg enough you shall help this pitiful mortal to bless this novel with Ai Translation welldone cutie bow yeah
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      At this point, I was actually thinking about MTL(AI) editing this novel myself.
      I would first need to re-read the novel for accuracy, though.
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    a good novel, but not without its flaws:

    1. negary pretends to be god, but this pretense is dropped later on with no explanation. this makes it feel like his followers are putting on a show of treating him like he's a god despite the fact that everyone knows he's just an evil spirit (to which he never denies or tries to hide).

    2. there are parts of the novel that focus on the side characters. these can give a "filler" feel, making everything appear slow and off putting. if anyone has read or watched the anime for "so i'm a spider, so what" you'll understand what i mean. the spider's POV is exciting, and while the human classmates POV is just as important, the feeling is similar.

    if you can look past or skip these characteristics, then this novel is high quality. but i feel that little imperfections like this is what sets apart a true masterpiece like LOTM. people might not be able to put it in words, but they will definitely be able to compare and feel.

    TLDR; so if you're expecting something stunning, look elsewhere. but for the casual enjoyer, this novel is safe to read. quality assured :)
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