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    Randidly Ghosthound
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    I couldn’t read the author’s note…..it just went on and on and on. Yeah, it definitely longer than the chapter itself.

    Seriously?

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    But on a good note, I was definitely surprised that he altered Hiruzen’s fate. And the method, timing and effects were actually quite decently executed and explained.

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    YeaTea
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    Guys in the comments are too dramatic. Even if author takes some liberty in changing power balance and inner workings of the jutsus, I like it so far. Consistent and makes the story fresh. All in all, too much bitching, really. I like the narrative. If you want 100% authenticity, go read the original
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    Yoriichi
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    Wtf was that author note bruh
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    TheLastSpearman
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    Crazy that the authors note is longer than the chapter, but at least he gave a twist to the story
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    MTL Denier
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    The author made the mc op, and the only way he found to balance it out was....to make everyone else op. pretty f#cking ridiculous. As for Hiruzen surviving, it doesn't really matter since he's probably going to be close to braindead.
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    Karl Max
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    Bruh the author note is longer than the chapter smh...
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    Seilizine
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    I don't give a f*ck about him being alive! I care about now f*cked balance of strength, seriously what was that jutsus? Do you have any idea how can it be done? Do you think it is very easy to do an jutsu sealless? Do you think it is easy to release chakra from any part of your body? Do you think it is easy to use ying and yang release or chakra? Do you think it is easy to use create new ninjutsu? Do you even think people can control chakra in their body freely?

    -Bullshit ninjutsu
    -Near impossible (Yeah just be Otsutsuki Hogoromo or his son)
    -Near impossible (Have you ever seen someone use sealless jutsu? It can only be reduced to the 1. Other cases are either skipped panels or extreme exceptions like flying thunder god as it is summoning to the reverse with complete formula being there and its higher applications still require seals.)
    -Near impossible (Except using byakugan as you can physically see and train yourself to do to an certain extent)
    -Near impossible (Can you even feel physical energy in your body (as an energy) or can you feel and manipulate your own soul, no? Then f*ck off)
    -There is a reason ninjutsu is stuck at some point!
    -Of course everybody can use their chakra freely, right? And that's way even the f*cking son of the Hogoromo needs do hand seals, makes sense. Do you think it is easy to do rasengan? Then why don't many people do it? It is so hard to CONTROL CHAKRA! Do you think it is easy learn and do strange strength? It is just chakra control, right? Easy.

    Feel free to add! I usually do not care for most fanfictions but I hate seeing characters being smart and 3-dimesional when they come to the panels. "Oh, I can freely control chakra and do some insane shit and that's why I am unknown." "There could be an ambush! Oh, how do I know? Authar-san told me." "Of course I prepared for the most unlikely and retarded scenario of entire history, isn't it common sense?"

    If it isn't happening there is a reason for it to not happen, simple as that.
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      Shurara
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      This is true, but the author writes a story about Marty Sue, who is all-powerful and invincible, he is already on the threshold of the Cage level and is ready to fight Ei, and the balance of power is already under the roller of an invisible "conspiracy". Poor Nagato, he's going to be trampled on in disgrace, because Rinegan's power is considered one of the strongest in Narutoverse. Only Naruto had been able to talk him into it, but what kind of circus would it all look like now?
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    Lythande
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    I couldn’t read the author’s note…..it just went on and on and on. Yeah, it definitely longer than the chapter itself.

    Seriously?

    3

    But on a good note, I was definitely surprised that he altered Hiruzen’s fate. And the method, timing and effects were actually quite decently executed and explained.

    welldone
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    daoist_sloth
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    Tfw author's note is longer than the chapter
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    MrError
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    I'd like for fujin to remain as a councilor and tsunade still the next hokage
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