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Naruto: The Wind Calamity by Devil_Hex

The MC transmigrates into Narutoverse in the body of a civilian orphan. Luckily for him, the... Read more
The MC transmigrates into Narutoverse in the body of a civilian orphan. Luckily for him, the transmigration results in chakra being unlocked. Follow the story of the MC as he grows in power and stabilizes himself into the world of ninjas and trains to be the strongest.

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Warning:

1. The MC won't be op for a long time. All his power would be gained via hard work and training over years (so if u want an op mc right from the word go, this one ain't for you)

2. No harem (probably no romance either)

3. There will be a lot of killing (maybe gore too, not sure if I can do gore right though)

4. The story will start slow. Quite a few of initial chapters will be around training, orphanage and academy life, instead of directly becoming a Genin.

5. MC is a careful person, he won't put his life at risk unless there is no other choice.

6. I haven't read (nor will be reading) Baruto. So Baruto plotline won't be considered much in here.

What to expect:

1. Smart and consistent MC

2. Lots of training

3. MC manipulating the plot to his advantage

4. A lot of original arcs.

5. Plot will mostly stay the same (at least till Shippuden), but I won't repeat any scenes/dialogues that took place in the manga (as I'm assuming you've already read it).

Disclaimer: I don't own Naruto or it's characters (except the original characters I create). The image used in the cover isn't mine and belongs to R. J

P.S. It's my first fanfic, I'm hoping it turns out good. All reviews and constructive criticisms are welcome. Grammar and English should be fine, but I'm not sure how good the dialogues and scenarios will be. Hopefully I'll improve as this fanfic progresses forward. Collapse
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    Dude, the author is milking this novel dry!
    In 9 months, he has only released 30 chapters... That's an average of 1 chapter every 10 or so days!
    Keep in mind that he used to release daily for over two years.
    What is even crazier is that I've read up to chapter 960 on Patreon, and I think it is going to take a full f#cking year for the normal updates to catch up... CRAZY!
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      How close would you say we are to the end of the novel?
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        Not close at all!
        Unless, of course, the author does the classic move... Rushed ending 💀
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    This novel is pretty trash, it's not detailed enough to be good and exciting but also not short enough to not get boring. The fight scenes are trash but the training is overly detailed, the payoff is abysmal. Also the original jutsus author comes up are very boring, he has the most boring nature transformation wind, author could have picked literally anything else and it would have been more exciting.no matter how good you write in the end it's just blowing wind at enemies, even in end stage it's just blowing bigger winds. With fire he could scorched enemies and with earth he could have made earth spikes,earth armour, earth wall etc. lightning,ying and Yang are self explanatory. I don't know why this novel has such high ratings, I guess people's standards for fanfiction are massively lower.

    Why the fk would you spend your time learning dozens of Justus when you could have just developed Rasengan to its limit? Author has mastered the art of filler, MC is constantly learning useless Justus when he could have just developed a few op Justus that he KNEW to its full potential.
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      TPH
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      Nice bait but your comment is retarded. Your comments about the fight scenes, detail, boring nature etc., are subjective, but still overly critical. The fights scenes are very intricately designed and the author has gotten better at the story went on. The main critique of them I understand is that the fight itself is needless, rather than it being poorly written. I believe these cases are pretty rare though. Secondly, how is wind more boring than fire and earth? Maybe you only read 80 chapters or something, but not even before chapter 200, he gets a canon wind jutsu that is objectively more mechanically deep and lethal than just earth spikes. This isn't to say fire and earth suck, but to say wind jutsus are the worst is crazy to me. I'm not mentioning lightning because he does pursue lightning jutsus. You describe his endgame power (so I guess you have read farther??) as just "blowing wind at enemies". I don't know how you can say this with a straight face. He uses wind to cut down entire hordes of people. The entire reason wind jutsu is so formidable is because it cuts you. Think of Rasenshuriken shredding you to a cellular level. Most people in canon are just shit with it. You sound like you're describing Temari rather than MC. People who are good with it are people like Danzo, or the second kazekage. Speaking of Rasenshuriken, please tell me how any Rasengan variant (on its own, without some god character holding it like KCM2 Naruto) is superior to
      ? No Rasengan variant, unless you have endless chakra to lob dozens of them, is doing anything comparable to MC's wind jutsus when it comes to dealing with groups of enemies. For single target, he does possess Rasenshuriken, by the way, but he also has his Vacuum jutsus, which are just as good and use substantially less chakra. Rasengan on its own is not all that, and most of the variants are things MC is completely locked out of doing since they require Kekkai Genkai, or involve nature transformation. Wind is his most powerful nature affinity, hence Rasenshuriken. By the way, for any potential new readers, Rasengan training is one of the first thing MC does, it just never becomes his main focus. Plus, what is a more OP canon jutsu to learn than
      ? To act like he doesn't go after broken stuff like this is silly.
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        Really? "Vacuum jutsu"? It doesn't deserve it's name in the end it's all wind bs. Rasengan is blue and cool but wind is just bigger wind blowing and cuts wow so cool and creative

        Wind is literally colourless and one of the least cool and creative to write nature affinity, like in it literally had no color it is by design less cool than other nature affinities. When I picture lighting it's blue,earth brownish, fire orange and red, ying black, Yang yellow. What about wind? white but not really? Like maybe you could say dispersed white that doesn't look good.
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          TPH
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          I personally visualize it as green. Think of the wind dragons, or wolves, or swords MC uses early on as green, that looks very cool to me. I’m also 90% sure that isn’t just my personal visualization, but instead what it’s stated to look like in the story. Fujin gets swords later on with a green hue for this very reason. Also the “doesn’t deserve its name” is funny as the name is just a literal description of the attack. It is a vacuum, plain and simple. Rasengan does indeed look cool, but it is purely chakra, nothing else. At least the vacuum jutsus have some underlying mechanic that’s cool on its own.
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            The story and mc is not really exciting or cool at all, the author would have done a better job at mc donalds
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    The MC is so stupid to not use rasengan even when he could, it's literally one of the most op and useful Justus in Naruto.
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      The author is intentionally limit him from using because he wants MC to be special and don't want MC to get op too soon.
      he should have at least made it so the MC couldn't learn Rasengan but learning it and never using it is so stupid. Rasengan has so much potential even at six path level it can still be used. Also why the fk does he need to learn so much jutsus when he could have just developed Rasengan and just spam that? MC is jack of all trash trades master of none, he wastes his potential and chakra amount.
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        Mc could’ve been the Rasengan Mini-Gun but he decided to use “wind jutsu” like a pathetic loser 😔 ✌️
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    Man, the work is already pretty far ahead on Patreon, almost at chapter 1000. I wish someone would update Kemono with the latest chapters. Unfortunately, I’m broke right now and can’t afford to subscribe to Devilhex’s Patreon.

    Looks like I’ll just have to wait and save up some money. When it hits chapter 1000, I’ll subscribe so I can binge as many new chapters as possible. That’s the plan for now lol.
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    RIP this masterpiece 🪦🥀
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      O Autor desistiu ??
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      yeah, the author did really good the first 400 chapters, he should just have followed the cannon after, but no, he decided that he will make the mc do a lot of shit between nruto and naruto shippuden (those 3 years they train), if the author just had a timeskip and later resumed what the mc did in those years it would have been better
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    Quote: coconutpirates
    The author has mastered the art of filler content he truly is devoted to the show.

    😂😂😂😂
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    Best naruto fan fic out (since they destroyed «Konoha Hypocrite») , plain and simple.

    💎✨9.5/10

    Little fact about «Konoha Hypocrite». Last original release was «CH 264, Kikyo war, who’s behind The scene”. Whatever Mtl was released after that might as well be deleted. Waste of byte tbh.
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    Shit has more chapters than the actual Naruto show
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    Good fanfic, it's a shame the author has run into writer's block and will apparently abandon the novel indefinitely. I recommend reading it, but for those who don't like following incomplete series, it might not be a good idea for you to read it.
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      the worst mistake of the author was trying to make so much more than necessary, he could have just skipped the 3 yrs of training before shippuden and it would be good, the author had the groundwork done already, he could have time-skipped months, summarize events, and repeat again until shipudden, but he decided to make so many unnecessary chapters that made the novel go down fast
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    • 4.0
    4.0
    The writing is weak at the beginning, improves around chapter 45, and becomes really good by chapter 170. It has good fights, stays faithful, and adapts the manga very well. There’s little description of the characters’ appearances though, also there’s little interaction between the characters at the beginning, but these aspects improve greatly as the story progresses. Overall, it’s very good and worth it if you’re a Naruto fan.
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