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    Ooh wow. I’m happy to see the author take some risk to change some of the plot of the story. Although I do think hiruzen would probably retire after this still. Still it’s a good direction.
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      Oooh you poor soul , you will understand how shameless the author is...

      This guy will manipulate you into believing , because this happend and that happened , canon even still gonna happen.
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        Changing things early on and then having to implement these changes to future plots increases the difficulty and effort for the author. It’s not worth it for a fanfiction.
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