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The Adventurous Gamer Ninja - Daichi Hekima by MonkWithAPen

The universe gave me another chance after life screwed me over.

My second life brought... Read more
The universe gave me another chance after life screwed me over.

My second life brought me to a world where people breath fire, walk on water and some people with special eyes that give them bullsh#t powers.

Well, I got the gamer ability. And I’m gonna use it to stand at the peak. But it's gonna be a long journey before I reach that summit.

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SI - MC.

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    I get this feeling once in a while where I lose interest in reading novels, so I sometimes switch to movies or fanfics. I got really into this one; it had a great start, a solid story, and real potential. But, as with many good stories, it was ruined by greed.

    The author kept milking the shit out of it and eventually stopped posting altogether, trying to force people onto his Patreon to pay for chapters (which is illegal under copyright law, by the way, though most people ignore that). Pretty much holding fans hostage; either you pay, or you get one chapter whenever he feels like it.

    So yeah… like many good novels, this one went to shit because of money.
    Overall, I’m pretty disappointed.

    Note: The fanfic has plenty of flaws, like the way the system is used and some unreasonable shit, but that was fine with me since it was still readable. The issues I mentioned above are the real concern, for me at least..
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    lemme give you some recommendations:
    The empty cage,
    Swapping the cage,
    the scorpion disciple,
    Legacy Undone,
    the sealed kunai,
    the chunin exam.

    Have fun!
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    chapter 55
    not engaging enough
    the stats system numbers like strength, agi, int, wisdom, etc
    they are just that "numbers" we never knew how much 10 points are, just that the mc is more powerful,
    the wisdom stat was supposed to help the mc make better decisions, but he still quite stupid.
    the int stat was supposed to make the mc recall things better but the author makes it that the mc forgets the chapters where Naruto makes friends with the guys but later they get their memories wiped (it has been years and i still remember)

    now we have the mc, a kid, a KID, that wants to make everything. He does not wants to change the history but he intervenes in things that he should not when he is weak.

    and the most annoying thing of all: THE PENALTIES FOR QUEST FAILURE and the mc that accepts every quest without him taking consideration for the penalization for failure

    there has been a few inconsistencies with the personality of the mc, like one chapters he saying thatt he will be more selfish in his new life, but later he is now a hero and makes rash decisions that will affect negatively to him (all was good cause the author said it)
    another it was supposed that the mc enjoyed playing chess the most after watching anime etc, but in 55 chapters never once was he interested in playing chess when it would have been a good way for him to increase the wisdom stat

    treat treat

    this is not for me
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      Do you know any good naruto fanfic,
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        naruto: the wind calamity
        just let the author cook, it becomes really good, the author put in soo much detail that is the best ff i´ve read of naruto

        the other one i liked is goddess of ice: reborn as naruto twin sister
        this one is just comedy and yuri, but you need to have read xianxia novels to get the jokes
        the first chapters are a pain to read but it gets better
        but if you don´t like yuri better not read it
        (i don´t remember much cause i read this like a year ago)
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    Does anyone know why this isn't updating anymore?
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    + 41 -
    Well, the good Naruto fanfics I've found so far,
    Good - Wind calamity, Reborn with Tenseigan, and this one
    Average - Strongest Kakashi, Kisame (nah this one is below, maybe top among trashes)
    Trash - all of the ecchi/harem/r18 ones... it's pretty much MC OP af and doing whatever shit he feels like doing with no fks given to anything Naruto
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      + 33 -
      Medium Meld: Revised Edition (Naruto/Gamer, OC)
      by Elbowsnapper
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        Esse aí é maldade, já que a parte 1 terminou a 2 anos e ainda não teve continuação e nem sabemos se terá butwhy what
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      Ive read like 3-4 sofar.
      1.Ero ninja: you know what it is about.mc:naruto
      2.Darkenjng of naruto. Best ending ever. Mc: some reincarnated dude
      3.Forgot the name. But transmigated mc got 3 perks and no system (but future events knowledge till butterfly effect). During 2nd ninja war. Good ending 👏.
      4. Some dude who got transmigated and got a progression system. Badass. Ongoing.
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        I think I've read the 3rd one, should be "reborn with talent" iirc.
        Well.. it's just my opinion but it falls into my trash category monk to each his own ig yyyy
        To me that looked like a generic wish fulfilment, insanely OP af MC, females all want his d and just exist for it, other men have no morals and their characters are shit.

        I've heard of the first one, didn't look like I'd enjoy it from the summary whoknows

        2nd and 4th I don't recall seeing...
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          Any good naruto fanfic?
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            Try Part Time Employee in Konoha... peepo049
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            Medium meld (naruto/oc)
            Outsider veiw... something naruthing
            Those are the best naruto fanfic
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        Como é o nome da quarta fic?
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    Всё хорошо до 200 глав, дальше идёт херня с наукой технологий тупыми решением которые максимально растягивают сюжет, чтоб вы знали канон ещё не начался, и если честно потерялась эта романтика шиноби, какая технология? Какие путешествия во времени это абсурд, если хочется работать с технологиями то делайте фанфик по боруто, крч фанфик хороший но автор...

    Почему нету фанфика где Кагуя положительный персонаж и она борется с МК против других оцоцуки , или чтоб Кагуя была например как дедушка в кольце, было бы интересно
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    • 4.0
    4.0
    Rank B
    This is in all categories from story, character development, plot development and consistency renders it a rank of B as of 05/23/2023 chapter 215.
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    • 1.0
    1.0
    Gave it a second chance and my god it is boring, the mc is a soulless puppet
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    I have a quetion for people who like this novel; Don't you feel annoyed with chapter long status notifications? I feel like 80% word space is wasted on system instead story progress, It wont be a problem for me if the chapters were long but they are so short yet author waste so much on reapeating the same info. I just couldn't deal with it and had to drop this novel. How are you'll dealing with it?
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      He realized that he was wasting word count and problonging dungeon runs so now there shorter and the author rarely shows the full staus page anymore and keeps dungeons to 2-3 chapters. So rn its pretty nice since I like the story.
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