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Chapter 37: Hello. just a to get opinions
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Firstly sorry it isn't a chapter but no worries. Chapter will come out at the usual times. This was just to get your opinion on this story since we finished are near the end of a rather major arc. I call it Camelia arc. After her sexy chapters there will be interlude chapters like for Edea that will show her past.

Anyway. So as I was saying, we are near the end of an important arc and I wanted to gather the opinions of you guys about the story and how I could make it better.

1)What do you think of the story overall?

2)Who is your favorite character and why?

3)Who is your less liked character and why?

4)What do you think of the pace of the story?

5)Would you like more characters development? More fight scenes? More smut scenes?

6)What do you think the story lack? And what do you think is the greatest strengths of this story?

Those are the things I am curious about. I hope I will receive many answers

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    Skyguy
    + 32 ⋅ 1 -
    1.I love it, I expected random fanservice, I started this book because I was tired but wanted to do something. I continued because the world was oddly detailed for a fanservice book. But when Sol was willing to give up EVERYTHING for Camellia I was hooked.
    2.Favorite character so far is Sol himself, he is a fascinating character. He's selfish, he would burn Lustberg to the ground if he thought it would save the people he cares about, I love it.
    3.My least liked character is Lilith, because she seems to be obsessed with Mars and may even only care about Sol because he's Mars's son.
    4.It's got a pretty good pace so far, there are little breaks in the story for the ** but other than that it's got a great pace.
    5.I love the character development, fight scenes are pretty good too. In order of priority, character, fight, smut.
    6. Greatest strength is by far the emotion to it. I could feel how pissed off Sol was in both Edea's scene and Camelia's. Greatest weakness would be how the smut seems kinda disconnected from the story, you could remove it and lose none of the plot. The smut piece is understandable though, it's hard to connect smut to the plot without it seeming contrived, and the smut will bring in more of an audience so you should probably keep it.
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      Bloodrina
      + 11 ⋅ 0 -
      Took the words right out of my mouth welldone
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      Truck_kun_fan
      + 7 ⋅ 1 -
      the smut seems kinda disconnected from the story, you could remove it and lose none of the plot. The smut piece is understandable though, it's hard to connect smut to the plot without it seeming contrived, and the smut will bring in more of an audience so you should probably keep it.


      Yeah that's true but there are also people who would rather skip the smut and not lose any understanding
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