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Chapter 1880: Hell March

The expedition force continued to push into the depths of Godgrave.

The First Rib had a bending shape, so for the first week, they were facing a literal uphill battle. Sometimes, the treacherous slope under their feet was so steep that the fallen soldiers rolled down the bloody ground, crashing into the second row of the battle formation. The unforgiving pace of the offensive was only made more cruel by the difficult terrain and the battering heat.

With each passing day, the scarlet infestation was growing. The jungle was turning more nightmarish, and the abominations populating it were becoming more powerful. However, the soldiers were also growing stronger — those of them who had yet to saturate their cores were absorbing the scavenged soul shards, and many were receiving powerful Memories during the long days of slaughter.

All were gaining valuable experience and growing more used to the dreadful peril of Godgrave.

The main reason why the progress of the expedition force was so swift, though, and why the casualties among the soldiers were not nearly as terrible as they could have been, were the three leaders of the expedition — Changing Star, Summer Knight, and the Lord of Shadows.

Changing Star was like a ruinous herald of annihilation. The battlefield transformed into a radiant, fiery hell when she entered it. Her cleansing flame, her incandescent sword, and her brilliant resolve were both a solace and an inspiration to the warriors of the Sword Army.

Those who saw her fight found strength that they had not known they possessed and raised their swords to follow her without hesitation. More than that, the Memories of those who fought by her side would be imbued with a newfound power, and all but the most fatal wounds her followers received were quickly healed by her soothing flame.

The first war party was the fiercest, and pushed the jungle back the furthest.

Summer Knight was no less radiant. Woven from light, he was like a beacon that dispelled the darkness of the abominable jungle. Seemingly knowing no fear or hesitation, he barred the path of the most harrowing Nightmare Creatures and cut them down both nobly and valiantly, showing the soldiers what a true knight was meant to be with his own example.

His personal power might not have been as devastating as that of Lady Nephis, but his valor and martial prowess were beyond reproach. He was the most seasoned commander among the three,and led his fellow Saints with the greatest measure of understanding of how to use their powers. Even though there were more Transcendents in his war party than in the other two, their coordination was just as seamless, if not more so.

The second war party was the most steady and stable, moving forward at a measured pace.

And lastly, there was the Lord of Shadows.

The mysterious Saint of Godgrave was like a dark revelation for the soldiers of the Sword Army. No one had expected him to be this deadly, this ruthless, and this insidious as he rampaged on the battlefield, shifting from shadow to shadow and slaughtering the Nightmare Creatures of the scarlet jungle. His silent ferocity was both chilling and astounding, making his soldiers feel a sense of wary awe.

He did not seem to possess a great affinity for combat, as far as his Aspect went, but seemed like a personification of death despite that — simply due to his lethal skill, devious intelligence, and merciless killing intent. With his three powerful Echoes and unfathomable awareness of every peril facing the battle formation, the sinister Saint was in no way inferior to the most renowned champions of the Sword Domain.

The third war party was not the fastest, but it suffered the fewest casualties during the gruesome march.

The expedition force slowly conquered the Eastern First Rib, moving from one fissure to another and cutting off the sources of the scarlet infestation one by one.

By the time the great elevation of the Breastbone Reach drew near, a small team of the strongest Saints split off from the main force to escort Sky Tide of the White Feather clan to its slopes.

The Cloudveil parted, revealing the boundless white abyss beyond. Torrents of blinding light poured down, and the soldiers of the expedition force witnessed the unforgettable spectacle of the vast expanse of the Reach being devoured by flames in terrified silence.

They were far enough away from the breach in the clouds to be safe from the white abyss, but not far enough to be spared the fear of watching half of the world burn.

After that, the progress of the expedition force slowed down considerably, and grew much more perilous.

That was because Saint Tyris had finally exhausted her essence after protecting the soldiers for more than a week. Without the aegis of her power, nothing could save them from the merciless heavens anymore.

They suffered the first breach three days later,while scaling the slopes of the dead god's breastbone. It was a short one, only lasting a few hours, but many soldiers still lost their lives and became ash, their bodies scattered by the wind.

If there was one small consolation, it was that the abominable jungle and the vile creatures populating it burned with them.

The Cloudveil broke one more time before Saint Tyris regained her powers, to the same result.

The expedition force pushed south, slowly carving a path across the vast expanse of the enormous breastbone.

The soldiers were tired. The sixteen hours of rest they received between having to go to battle were nowhere near enough for them to regain their vitality. The battles themselves were long and harrowing, reaping too many lives each time. The tide of Nightmare Creatures seemed endless, and the suffocating heat was hard to endure.

Worst of all, the geography of the Breastbone Reach prevented them from permanently cleansing its surface from the scarlet infestation — at least now that they were pursuing a different objective. Even if an extermination outpost was established around a fissure, the jungle would sooner or later spread to it from another direction.

Therefore, the expedition force moved south without leaving itself a path of retreat. A few days after they moved on, the infestation reclaimed the cleansed portions of the bone plain, enclosing the human army from all sides.

It would only be banished from these lands permanently if the Citadel in the Hollows was conquered, and the authority of the King of Swords spread to the Breastbone Reach.

Advancing forward was getting harder with each day…

And yet, after three weeks of the nightmarish marathon, the battered army finally reached its target.

In front of them, an enormous crack split the white surface of the ancient bone, and in the darkness below, unknown horrors awaited.

From here, the best warriors of the expedition force would attempt to brave the Hollows to reach and conquer the Citadel that lay in the dark depths.

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    Dummybaron
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    I get a feeling that I really need to re read SS cus I'm starting to forget a lot of stuff, maybe I'll do it after next two cahpters.
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      EVOLT
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      lol that’s what I recently did, so every character I can vividly remember. Hopefully you’ll enjoy the reread
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    Deathseeker
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    Hoping to see some cursed or unholy titans for mc to fight hokage
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      Dummybaron
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      If you talking about Sovereigns vs Cursed abomination then we need to wait when Sunny plan starts. If you talking about Cohort vs Cursed abomination than this is coughing baby vs nuclear bomb situation especially agaisnt Titans.

      And Unholy creature will just simply shatter both Sovereign's and Cohort's minds by simply existing.
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        Kdmill
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        Lmao tell me why I’ve head that saying before I was arguing with this guy about the power gap between ranks on a different site lmao it would be crazy if it was you
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          Dummybaron
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          If it was on another website it probably wasn't me, since I remember reading SS only on this website, and this is the only website on which I have account, so I don't think it was me.
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    Elrenegat
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    Yeah and jest is already ten times more funny than effie ever was
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      Dummybaron
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      Honestly his humor feels way more forced compered to Effie's one
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        Elrenegat
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        To me it's the opposite
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          Dummybaron
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          Actualy I don't remember much from Effie, like I didn't read her joke around what? 100 chapter or more? So you might be right idk.
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            Elrenegat
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            Here are a few exemples
            Omg you wear dresses, you're a girl
            Are you having naughty thought about me ? How bad, I Guess that's because of how hot I am
            So do you guys know how to have sex ? Do you know how to use a candom
            And so on ...
            it's very advanced
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              Dummybaron
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              mmmm, if it's like that then it's a tie for me.
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                Elrenegat
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                I mean the sex and condom joke was me putting it nicely, in truth it wasn't even that good, the sex joke was the bees story and the condom part was about the babies
                But she didn't even bother to say it straight
                And that's why I find her "humor" trash
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                  Dummybaron
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                  So this
                  The old man remained silent for a few moments, then said hesitantly:

                  "Entering, crack, humidity… bone… there had to be a joke here somewhere, right? Right?"

                  The same woman who had rebuked him earlier glowered.

                  "Sir Jest!"

                  The old man grinned.

                  "I bet Lord Shadow knows what I mean."

                  Is what you call "telling straight"? I think they just equally teasing and dirty minded, and make fun of others in same ways.
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                  Elrenegat
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                  He is insinuating things, while she is making metaphors at best
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    Dummybaron
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    Let me guess Lightslayer will attack Lord of Shadows when it's going to be next "1 chapter today three tomorrow"?
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    Chapter 1881: Leaving the Camp

    For the last few days of the dreadful march across the bones of the dead deity, Godgrave had been different from before. That was because the stormy clouds that always obscured the sky, suffused with blinding radiance, had finally given birth to an actual storm.

    Strong winds assaulted the bone plain, and a torrential downpour fell like a flood. The scarlet jungle had turned marron in the desaturated twilight, pressed down by the heavy rain.

    The dark chasm of the great fissure was drinking the torrents of water like a hungry maw. Standing at its edge, fourteen Saints were looking down with somber expressions.

    The expedition force had just claimed the area around the vast crack that split the plain. The soldiers were busy building a fortified encampment — this time, they would be remaining in one place for some time, besieged from all sides by the hungry jungle, so it had to resemble a fortress.

    All Awakened warriors and Masters were remaining on the surface. So were Summer Knight and about half of the Transcendent champions that had participated in the expedition — their task was to defend the camp and make sure that the soldiers survived.

    The fourteen Saints facing the fissure were those who would be venturing into the Hollows to conquer the Citadel.

    Nephis and Sunny were among them. So were Saint Jest of Dagonet, Rivalen of Aegis Rose… and Roan of White Feather, as well. The rest were all exalted warriors that Sunny had come to know over the past few weeks.

    Not too long ago, this many Transcendent champions would have been seen as a dire force capable of rivaling a Great Clan. Here in Godgrave, however, they were grim and uneasy, looking into the dark fissure with wary eyes.

    Saint Jest suddenly let out a soft chuckle.

    "I just know there's a good joke somewhere here. Let's see… there's a deep, dark crack in front of us, and we're supposed to enter it… entering, crack… damn, what can it be? It's on the tip of my tongue!"

    The rest of the Saints stared at him with silent reproach. Eventually, a beautiful woman with auburn hair, the matriarch of one of Valor's vassal clans, said evenly:

    "Please abstain from trying to joke, Sir Jest."

    The older man glanced at her dully, then looked away with a dejected mumble.

    "Really, now… you were much more fun as a little girl…"

    The beautiful Saint did not respond, but her glare intensified.

    After that, Rivalen of Aegis Rose broke the silence by addressing Sunny in his usual gallant manner:

    "Lord Shadow,you know the Hollows better than any of us. What should we expect?"

    The obnoxiously dashing man had not changed at all since the first day of the expedition. The rest of them looked ragged and worn-down, covered in sweat and soot — but he was clean and freshly shaven, with not a scratch on his resplendent golden armor. Even though his hair was messy and wet because of the rain, it somehow managed to look purposefully styled that way.

    The relationship between him and Sunny had somewhat changed, though. Saint Rivalen was much more friendly and respectful toward the Lord of Shadows now, while Sunny couldn't really dislike the pompous Legacy anymore… for a very silly reason.

    It was Rivalen's Transcendent form. When Sunny first saw it, he was a bit mesmerized. Shield Wall transformed into a towering beast with four stubby legs and hide so tough that it looked as if he was covered with plates of heavy armor. A single massive horn protruded from the beast's nose, longer than a ship's ram…

    It was the legendary rhino!

    As it turned out, Sunny had a soft spot for rhinos — for obvious reasons. He had never expected to see one in the flesh, but now that he did, disliking Saint Rivalen was harder than before.

    He stared at the dashing man coldly.

    The sight of his mask was quite unnerving, so Shield Wall's gallant smile grew a little forced.

    Sunny sighed.

    "...Imagine the surface of Godgrave, but ten times worse. The jungle never burns away, so it is much thicker. The Nightmare Creatures are older and more powerful. Fourteen of us are strong enough to handle Great abominations, but down there in the Hollows, there are Cursed beings as well. Those, we cannot provoke. So, you will follow me quietly, and I will make sure that we don't wander into their hunting grounds."

    Saint Rivalen nodded grimly.

    At that moment, Roan took a step closer to the edge of the fissure, then turned and looked at Nephis with a smile.

    "Then, Lady Nephis… shall we?"

    With that, two powerful wings appeared behind him.

    As the two Saints in the team who were capable of flight, Roan and Nephis were supposed to descend into the Hollows first — along with Sunny, who could turn into a crow.

    Roan's Transformation had surprised Sunny, as well. He had always assumed that the easygoing man would turn into a noble griffin, but in hindsight, there was no reason to think that.

    The griffin Echo Roan used to ride on the Chained Isles, as it turned out, was a gift from his wife — it was not an ordinary Echo,either, but rather her Aspect Legacy. By now, the noble beast had reached Transcendence, and served as a protector of their daughter, Awakened Telle.

    Saint Roan himself, meanwhile, could turn into a mighty winged lion. The giant creature was just as handsome as his human form was, with gorgeous white fur and enormous amber eyes.

    And since Sunny had designed the [Belated Apology] with the purpose of being able to accommodate a Saint's Transformation, the giant lion's body was usually encased in intricate armor.

    Saint Tyris and Roan must have been quite a sight, soaring high in the sky together…

    Nephis summoned her own wings and nodded.

    "Let's go."

    With that, she jumped over the edge and plunged into the darkness.

    Sunny and Roan followed, and soon, they saw the Great Hollows sprawling beneath them.
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      Максим Довбняк
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      Chapter 1882: Entering the Hollows

      The Hollows had undergone a striking transformation, looking very different from how they usually did.

      There was still a vast and hollow expanse hidden inside the breastbone of the dead deity, drowning in darkness and overgrown with vermilion jungle. Monstrous trees and ferns towered like towers, the thick canopy of scarlet leaves fusing into a tumultuous red sea. Great pillars of light were falling from the immense dome of white bone here and there, plunging some areas of the jungle into a dim twilight.

      However, there was a rainstorm raging on the surface today. So, the light was not the only thing pouring through the cracks in the bone — grandiose waterfalls flowed down into the jungle, as well, plunging into the vermilion canopy as they connected the floor of the Hollow to its dome akin to foaming pillars.

      The jungle seemed to have come alive, quenching its boundless thirst. However, there was more water than it could swallow — vast lakes and deep, raging rivers had formed throughout Hollows, turning them into a world of powerful currents.

      Some of the furious rivers were wider and more abundant than most rivers in the Sword Domain.

      In fact, when the Hollows were flooded, a network of them connected the interior of the titanic skeleton like a great waterway — if one dared to sail the currents, they could slip through the cracks in the walls of the breastbone, be carried by water down one of the ribs, and dive into the colossal sea that collected in the endless spine of the dead god.

      Luckily, that was not Sunny's goal today. He preferred to stay away from water on usual days, and he definitely did not want to have anything to do with the dark subterranean ocean resting in the gargantuan skeleton's spine.

      Roan and Nephis were the first to reach ground. They landed on the shore of the deep lake that had formed below the fissure and dismissed their wings, preparing for battle. Sunny joined them a few moments later — assuming his human form, he commanded Serpent into the shape of an odachi and unleashed his shadow sense, scanning the chaotic world around him.

      There were Nightmare Creatures nearby, hiding in the jungle. Some were drinking water, some were ravaging each other, some were brutally devouring struggling prey.

      There were Nightmare Creatures in the water, as well. A few of them were already moving toward the surface, attracted by the smell of human souls.

      He pointed to the lake.

      "Get ready."

      The three of them had already dealt with a score of reptilian horrors by the time the rest of the Saints arrived from above, using Memories to slow down their descent.

      The strike force regrouped on the shore of the lake and prepared to move forward. Looking around, Saint Jest let out a heavy sigh.

      "...And I thought that the humidity above was terrible. No, wait!"

      His expression suddenly turned tense.

      The rest of them looked at him with alarm.

      "What is it, Sir Jest?"

      The old man remained silent for a few moments, then said hesitantly:

      "Entering, crack, humidity… bone… there had to be a joke here somewhere, right? Right?"

      The same woman who had rebuked him earlier glowered.

      "Sir Jest!"

      The old man grinned.

      "I bet Lord Shadow knows what I mean."

      Sunny felt happy that his face was hidden behind a mask.

      He was starting to understand how the old man had received his peculiar True Name.

      '...I think I miss Effie.'

      Suppressing the desire to shake his head, he turned south and took in the movements of the shadows in the surrounding jungle.

      Initially, the expedition force had been meant to push all the way to the Third Rib, and enter the Hollows very close to the supposed location of the Citadel. However, Nephis had changed the plan to save time — now, they were much further north, near the Second Rib, which meant that the Saints had to cover a lot of distance to reach their goal.

      It was not going to be easy.

      Sunny was quite confident in the power of the Transcendent Team. He and Nephis alone were enough to deal with the Great abominations that dwelled in the Hollows, as long as they proceeded carefully. With a dozen Saints accompanying them, reaching the Citadel should not pose a problem.

      The Cursed Nightmare Creatures, however, were entirely different.

      Luckily, most of them were easy to avoid. With how far his shadow sense reached, Sunny could usually discover where the true horrors of Godgrave dwelled — mostly because Cursed abominations were so powerful that their mere existence exerted pressure on the world.

      However, there was always an exception to the rule. More than that, he was worried that these dreadful beings would abandon their usual hunting grounds, lured by the presence of so many powerful human souls.

      So, there was a choice to be made.

      The strike team could move toward their goal with utmost speed by assuming their Transcendent forms, or they could take it slow and proceed forward as humans, spending several days to brave the jungle.Both options presented their own risks, and the final decision was entrusted to him, since he was supposed to be the guide.

      Sunny hesitated.

      He was tempted to go with the fastest approach because staying in the Hollows a minute longer than necessary was a gamble.

      However… after three weeks of the never-ending battle, even the Saints were exhausted. Worse than that, they were all running low on essence, and not everyone was like him, who could sustain his Transcendent form indefinitely — or at least most of it, since keeping all of his incarnations manifested still consumed his essence.

      Most Saints burned a considerable amount of it to maintain a Transformation, though. They weren't so drained that reaching the Citadel was impossible, but if they did go as fast as possible, everyone would be nearly spent by the time they reached it.

      And Sunny had a feeling that slaying the guardian of the Gateway would demand more than a little effort, even from a team as powerful as this one.

      So, going slowly and spending a few days restoring their reserves seemed like a more prudent decision.

      '...Let's go with this plan, then.'

      In any case, their advance could only be called slow when compared to the speed of their Transcendent forms. It was not like Saints actually lacked speed as humans.

      Beckoning for the team to follow, Sunny chose a path and broke into a moderate sprint.

      Soon, the lake on the shore disappeared behind the scarlet foliage, and the jungle enveloped them like a hungry veil.
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        Максим Довбняк
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        I hope Effie and sir Jest will meet someday, it will be a legendary duel
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          ArMiks
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          I can see them one upping each other, their jokes becoming more crass and crude by the second, and everyone around them losing faith in humanity with each passing moment.
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          Lazy Lion
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          Agreed wiseacre 🤝🏾
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          Baezhij
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          Or the legendary duo might be born.
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        Lalala
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        Not So Funny Anymore Not Funny At All

        One Effie is enough.
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    6pain
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    Just finished watching Madme web movie on Netflix the blind girl who can see the future is called cassie
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      Elrenegat
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      How are you holding up, are you still breathing after watching this masterpiece ?
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      Wraithsong
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      Both take naming inspiration from Cassandra, from the Odyssey, a prophetess cursed by the gods to never be have her prophecies to be believed and thus unable to ch age the course of events to avoid disasters.
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    Dummybaron
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    Imagine if after all this theories and everything we come up with for Sunny's Domain, it's not going to be Death💀
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      Zrilla
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      Ахахаха, а что если g3 читает коментарии и обсуждения где мы додумываем и специально пишет по-другому
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    Nucleus
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    Quote: ropero
    Laziness and/or strategy are just semantics for the fact that G3 set an unrealistic goal of two chapters per day and lies to audience and mostly himself that it's possible by putting chatgpt-like summaries instead of actual writing.
    And I think it's bad. I'm in favor of one chapter per day, hell, one chapter per two days if it means that the chapter is meaningful and impactful through and through. The currect approach actively ruins the overall quality of the work. At least that is the conclusion i came to after reading 20 chapters from stacking in one go and realising just how much of the same perephrased paragraphs I've been spoonfed over and over again.
    I love g3 and I know that he can do better than this, so I don't mind him taking as much time as he needs to for us not see chapters like this again.


    To be successful on the Webnovel platform, quantity is far more important than quality. No work can be truly polished to it's full potential, the algorithm favours rapid release. You can have the best written work, but if you can't consistently pump out chapters, you won't make any traction on the platform. Considering how strongly Webnovel disincentivies quality, it's already impressive that SS has the quality it has.

    Its not perfect and it's not going to be, but if it were perfect, we would probably never have even heard of it.
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      ropero
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      Huh, never considered webnovel as a factor, but if what you're saying is true than this piece of platform is even worse than I though (which I never thought was even possible).
      It reminds me of shonen anime like naruto which are impossible to watch without skipping dozens of filler arcs, recaps and unnecessary inner monologues.
      That being said, I wish we'd at least get a director's cut of Shadow Slave with all the slop removed for a better reading experience. Maybe even as a physical books that I'd gladly purchase, but that's just my dreams.
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      Elrenegat
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      He is just milking it, there isn't much more to it
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        Nucleus
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        Take a look at the Webnovel author guide: https://m.webnovel.com/book/book-of-authors_10589139205070105

        "Based on webnovel readers' typical reading habits, only stories that have consistent updates will be able to obtain and maintain popularity. For a super consistent release, the lowest requirement is to update at least two chapters per day."
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          Elrenegat
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          You need it to start off, once it's set you don't need it anymore
          Do you really believe that SS would just dissapear out of webnovel if he was going back to one chapter a day ?
          I don't think so, I mean it's not like there are billions of good novels out there
          The competition is not exaclty "good" you know
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            Nucleus
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            Ss would certainly take a hit if it went back to 1 chapter a day or less. Furthermore, it would no longer be eligible for certain promotions and pay set by Webnovel. I used to write for Webnovel. I cannot overstate how intensely they incentives quantity over quality, especially for their contracted authors.
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              Elrenegat
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              Counter argument, you were probably not very famous and if you were it's probably nothing in comparaison to SS, meaning that what is applied to you or the majority of people does not necesarilly applies to the one in the top 10
              I'm not discrediting your work or anything btw, it's just how webnovel is, most novel stays in the shadows you know
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                Nucleus
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                I never cracked the top 10. My writing was far too lovingly crafted to achieve that. I am familiar with those who did, sort advice from them on the Webnovel author discord, that advice was basically what I'm telling you now. Consistently pump out chapters and don't worry too much about quality. One guy I know broke his fingers with how fast he was writing.

                I've also had the Webnovel contract, it is extremely exploitative. It even allows Webnovel to fire the author from their own work and replace them with someone who can write more consistently. If you want to get paid by Webnovel, you have to write fast, if you want to be promoted, you have to write fast. If you have a popular work but won't work to the speed that Webnovel sets, you can even be replaced.

                G3 can't publish elsewhere like RR where quality matters so much more, he can't stop writing without surrendering pay. He has to write and keep on writing to maintain with few breaks in between until he's finished his work.
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                  Elrenegat
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                  Copy pasting is milking no matter how you look at it, and quantity and quality are not opposite you know
                  Plus not only did he knew what he was signing for, but should also be hard to replace without detecting an even bigger drop in quality that we are actually witnessing
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                  Nucleus
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                  I have a law degree. I knew what I was signing because I understand the law. Most of the Webnovel authors don't. They don't understand that they sign over the IP to Webnovel. I've had to explain it to more than a few. Quite a lot of them were not happy to discover that retaining "the moral rights of the work" did not prevent Webnovel from replacing them if they choose to.

                  No one is irreplaceable, especially for a company with the reach of Webnovel and a million Chinese writers who would crawl over nails to take over a popular fiction.

                  Try writing a truly good piece of fiction. I have and I currently am (although not for Webnovel this time) you second guess every sentence, nothing is good enough. Artists are inherently sensitive and self-critical, it's how good art is made. Turning that off is difficult but necessary to succeed with Webnovel. It also produces lesser works.

                  Look, I get the frustration. You see something which could be so much better, but you're not living the life of an author, you haven't experienced the pitfalls and the pressure of the industry, especially when writing for Webnovel. To be truly great on Webnovel, you have to compromise. There is literally no other way.
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                  Elrenegat
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                  Honestly, do you know what piss me of ?
                  It's not even all the milking and whatnot, I mean it doesn't help the story in anyway, but what is are all of the inconsistencies
                  Like don't get me wrong, I'm not near g3 in term of story writting but I am way ahead of him in term of consistency, and so are many others probably, because it's not even hard, and the very fact that he fails on this is just sad
                  And time probably isn't even the factor here
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                  Nucleus
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                  That's fair. But I know for a fact that keeping a work free from inconsistency and plot holes is very difficult. I can't tell you how much editing it takes to not contradict yourself, and once published, you have to twist yourself in knots to explain those contradictions and plot holes. Even J.k Rowling couldn't do it well with all of her editors.

                  A traditionally published novel benefits from editors who specifically search the writing for inconsistencies and plot holes, and even then they fail. Webnovels don't have the benefit of traditional editors. Don't get me wrong, webnovel do have editors on hire, but most don't understand English as well as the authors and they mainly add pressure to write more.

                  My only thing is that I understand where G3 is coming from and so I have a lot of patience for the issues in his work. I don't want to go down the same path he's on, but I respect the hell out of what he's achieved considering the environment he's achieving it in.
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                  Elrenegat
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                  If you say so
                  Still, Jk rowling is probably no exemple for plotholes
                  I'm willing to bet that her story is even surrounded by that then
                  One that is almost free of it is tolkien if you put aside the eagles
                  And you know but plotholes can be big or small, but the bigger they get the more annoying it gets
                  Kind of like the guys in horror movies that decides to "Split up" to cover more ground while being chased down
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                  titor420
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                  the eagles isn't truly a plot hole tbf. before frodo and the gang even neared the dark fortress, they'd be sensed and blasted to death by nazguls riding the black wings. they wouldn't get close to mount doom
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                  Elrenegat
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                  Yeah well I was just guessing at this point
                  The eagles were the only thing coming to mind about it
                  But since I was using lotr as an exemple for a free plothole story, it pretty much illustrate my point
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    Baezhij
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    Shika noko noke noko koshi tan tan
    Shika noko noko noko koshi tan tan

    Shika noko noke noko koshi tan tan
    Shika noko noko noko koshi tan tan

    Shika noko noke noko koshi tan tan
    Shika noko noko noko koshi tan tan

    blushed blushed blushed blushed blushed blushed blushed
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      Lalala
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      Aren't you tired already?
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        Baezhij
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        I am tired of life.
        And this is how I cope.
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          Dummybaron
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          I hope you will find some rest and positivity bro
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            Baezhij
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            Thanks
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    ropero
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    I'm sorry, but this chapter is ridiculously lazy. The whole re-introduction of three pillars of sword army is painfully unnecessary as I believe every reader by now remembers all of their abilities by heart, and that whole sequence takes up 462 words out of 1166 total in the chapter, amounting to almost 40% of it.
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      Baezhij
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      Humans can't be hard working all the time.
      It's alright even if the author is lazy in between
      We are reading it for free anyways.

      A person who is hardworking all the time is crazy and has some screw loose.
      Or has just some problem that he or she might be trying to distract themselves from or that's the only thing in life left for them to do and continue living with.
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      DanielPlay
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      It's not laziness, it's just G3's strategy to extend the chapters and the volume. Repeating already known information, random thoughts, emphasizing the beauty of all the characters every time they appear and unnecessarily extending concepts. These are some of the techniques that G3 uses to end on a cliffhanger and extend the work, but let's face it, sometimes he exaggerates, like when he, in the middle of the duel, put 4 chapters to describe the art of transcendent Battle that could clearly be summarized in 500 words.
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        ropero
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        Laziness and/or strategy are just semantics for the fact that G3 set an unrealistic goal of two chapters per day and lies to audience and mostly himself that it's possible by putting chatgpt-like summaries instead of actual writing.
        And I think it's bad. I'm in favor of one chapter per day, hell, one chapter per two days if it means that the chapter is meaningful and impactful through and through. The currect approach actively ruins the overall quality of the work. At least that is the conclusion i came to after reading 20 chapters from stacking in one go and realising just how much of the same perephrased paragraphs I've been spoonfed over and over again.
        I love g3 and I know that he can do better than this, so I don't mind him taking as much time as he needs to for us not see chapters like this again.
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          Dummybaron
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          Yeah, G3 better just take a break or change chapter schedule, because this chapters are ok to read in on going, but after SS fully comes out it is going to be real pain to read.
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          Elrenegat
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          Wait was he spoonfeeding spoon, I didn't even notice before
          So that's what he has been doing all along, no wonder the story seemed so stuck
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          Shambler
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          One chapter per day means this book would take about 10 years from start to finish. I'll be in a nursing home drooling on myself and urinating into my adult diapers before the story's over.
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      ArMiks
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      That repetition isn't much of a repetition tho. Most of the contents repeat, true, but only because we readers are outside looking in, so we notice it. In the context of the story, the somewhat repetitive info shows the shift in perspective of the people in the story, change in how shadow lord is viewed and treated, the flow of the activities, etc. It's shows the subtle shift in how they think, and highlights how he is treated from an outcast to someone revered and respected, which is also ironically repeated throughout the story as well.
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