Meta Essence Gacha in Marvel by EvansKannon

I'm a perv- *cough* curious ancestor, I saw the cover I clicked on it.

So I just gave an all five review for the simple fact that the author is quite good with the writing and if I'm not wrong first one👍.Gramar mistakes (not that bad) so what is not that we can't understand and like the author said English not his mother tongue(and is free to read)👍o and the interview part OMG EPIC!!!.The MC monologues a lot(read some comments) again so what this is the tipe of caracter that he is,and it give the reader a better understanding of the MC mentality.In all honesty I enjoy your work.
Thank you!
Keep up the good work

Shego ...

It's great 4.2/5

Spider girl cover? 🤔

First place you looked at after seeing the cover?

For me it’s downstairs

My thoughts:

1. As fanfiction it’s not bad to pass the time. I somewhat enjoyed the idea of the gacha power lottery, but then it lost its purpose when he got the power theft ability. Now it’s just OP wish fulfillment.

2. He monologues. It really detracts from the story having the character go on and on about choices, decisions, and justification’s. The character development is all over the place as well. One moment he is a teenage weeb gushing over females and powers, then he’s a megomaniacal hero, and the next he’s a sinister villain throwing shade at all the others. And then he’s a weeb again.

3. And then the author monologues. The biggest complaint about this whole story is that as it progresses, the longer the author’s monologues about the story development become in each chapter. And eventually the monologues are at the beginning and the end of the chapters. Come on! If you have something to say, tell it in the story! Don’t make this Mystery Science Theater 3000. We don’t care about your thoughts, we just want to be entertained!

I found it hard to follow since mc have too many powers/props and he gets more every few days.

If this is the Author's first try at a novel, it's good for a starter. I feel that when the Author's done he should do a rewrite to make a decent novel with good potential into something that people go back to re-read