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Divine Path System by _Transcendent

Varian only wanted to end the war with the Abyssals and bring peace so that no one would lose their... Read more
Varian only wanted to end the war with the Abyssals and bring peace so that no one would lose their dad like he did.

So he vowed to be the strongest Awakener and reach the peak of Divine Paths:

Body Awakeners blasted mountains with a punch.
Telepaths controlled enemies from a different continent.
Morphers transformed into mythical beasts and plants.
Elementals controlled the Four Elements.
Space and Time Awakeners ruled the dimensions.

But those dreams crumbled the day his Mom died. A year passed and his dreams faded.

He thought life would stay the same until…

Divine Path System revealed his mother’s last wish — Save the mysterious girl that haunted his dreams.

Armed with a mysterious system and determination to fulfill his mother’s last wish, will Varian be able to save the girl and find out why his mother wanted to save her?

Join Varian on his journey as he writes his own destiny.

TLDR: A young man’s journey to fulfill his mother’s last wish to find the mysterious girl that haunts his dreams in a futuristic world with super powers.

Note:
1. The ending of this story, including the entire story, is decided. If you are worrying about whether the story has a proper ending, I can say with certainty the ending is beautiful.

2. If there is more response, I’ll be motivated to write more every day.

3. When you give a review, try to be constructive. Criticism is accepted and welcome, but no hate reviews. Collapse
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    Hmm.. I will wait my fellow readers to review this, im hesitating to read this, it's giving me a vibe that it's gonna be a bland or a bad one
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      I concur. I am also scared. From the synopsis, it sounds like a novel that has been done before many times and many times better. He wants to end a war because his father died. Usually, there is a grander purpose for the MC to work towards but IDK. I read some other reviews and it doesn't seem that good, nor that bad.
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