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Divine Path System by _Transcendent

Divine Path System
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Varian only wanted to end the war with the Abyssals and bring peace so that no one would lose their... Read more
Varian only wanted to end the war with the Abyssals and bring peace so that no one would lose their dad like he did.

So he vowed to be the strongest Awakener and reach the peak of Divine Paths:

Body Awakeners blasted mountains with a punch.
Telepaths controlled enemies from a different continent.
Morphers transformed into mythical beasts and plants.
Elementals controlled the Four Elements.
Space and Time Awakeners ruled the dimensions.

But those dreams crumbled the day his Mom died. A year passed and his dreams faded.

He thought life would stay the same until…

Divine Path System revealed his mother’s last wish — Save the mysterious girl that haunted his dreams.

Armed with a mysterious system and determination to fulfill his mother’s last wish, will Varian be able to save the girl and find out why his mother wanted to save her?

Join Varian on his journey as he writes his own destiny.

TLDR: A young man’s journey to fulfill his mother’s last wish to find the mysterious girl that haunts his dreams in a futuristic world with super powers.

Note:
1. The ending of this story, including the entire story, is decided. If you are worrying about whether the story has a proper ending, I can say with certainty the ending is beautiful.

2. If there is more response, I’ll be motivated to write more every day.

3. When you give a review, try to be constructive. Criticism is accepted and welcome, but no hate reviews. Collapse
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    Nobelnerd
    + 12 ⋅ 4 -
    Flashback ruined it for me.. I know what's gonna happen in first chapter... Now skip all the chapters until come back to present
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      ijshorn
      + 2 ⋅ 0 -
      In the latest chapter he still is not the strongest human and what we find out is that it is only the first 'realm' out of many.
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    UNBEATABLE
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    For me this is a good novel
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    equilibrium
    + 4 ⋅ 2 -
    I don't know. Meh.. tiho
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    NxtUnleqit
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    It's a good novel, however I always skip 2-3 chapters which happen every few days when I read about these hidden memories from Sia, like, who actually gives a **** about some information that is absolute irrelevant to the story. These chapters are just rdm memories/intercations of Sia with Varian and they are so annoying
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      Krucknks
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      NxtUnleqit
      + 4 ⋅ 1 -
      I'm sorry but I have to update this Review, it turned from good to one of the most unsatisfying novels I have ever read. The author tries to keep the balance in the war so that he can keep creating conflicts and chapters. After every victory there is either a crushing defeat and millions die or another opponent/trumpcard just spawns in.(
      ) And the more we learn about the situation on the other side of the Abyssals the more it makes no sense, they couldn't even send one Sovereign to the Other side and finish them fast?? Even though there is a war,
      . But well, I will keep reading.
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    shurawrath1
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    Essa margem de error dos capítulos ai kkk do 470 foi para o 500 lol
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    Apollo
    + 20 ⋅ 1 -
    just before I start the story, is the girl he is going to save useless? Does she always cause trouble for the MC and makes him save her? If so, I will not start reading the story because that is not my preferred style. Anyways, I really enjoyed how the author is humble and always seeks ways to improve himself as that shows hat he has the potential to be greater and aspire to reach greater height in the art of writing. Wish you all the best!
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      Faustus
      + 26 ⋅ 8 -
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      Ren_Shi
      + 0 ⋅ 27 -
      have u seen Back For My Daughter on this site, I want to read it :(
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      Ren_Shi
      + 0 ⋅ 32 -
      have u seen Back For My Daughter on this site, I want to read it :(
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        xynthesis
        + 1 ⋅ 0 -
        Tf? Is it that good, all your comment about that novel, go search pandanovel or the original source
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    SHADOW_EMPEROR--482
    + 4 ⋅ 2 -
    It becomes better in the later chapters but develop the mc charachter to become more independent and not what others tell him to do. Set proper conditions for acquisition of power and not just power level it in succesion .
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      Ren_Shi
      + 0 ⋅ 26 -
      have u seen Back For My Daughter on this site, I want to read it :(
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        SHADOW_EMPEROR--482
        + 0 ⋅ 0 -
        No,you wont be able to find it on any other site than Webnovel(according to what I know)or maybe some websites have 20 chapters

        NovelHD has 20 chapters
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          Ren_Shi
          + 0 ⋅ 13 -
          Sigh what a bad thing, I really liked it have u tried it I think, I should request for it
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    Transcendent
    + 173 ⋅ 3 -
    Hello, this is the author of the novel. Thank you for the feedback so far.

    Since you're reading the novel anyway, I hope you can give criticism. I know this story has its flaws, but I do not know what they are. My writing skills also need practice.

    I want to improve. So when you criticize, be specific and help me out. A detailed 1 star constructive review is much welcome than a useless 5 star review.

    Thanks in advance.

    PS: If you have the means, please support the book on webnovel.com. A small gift goes a long way.
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      SnazTheDino
      + 105 ⋅ 1 -
      Finally an author that isn't crying about their novel being here...just for that imma read the book to give criticism and/or compliments
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        - - A k i r a - -
        + 1 ⋅ 2 -
        una pregunta si escribo una novela en mi idioma natal (español) crees que la lean?

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        PD: o la escribo en español y utilizo algun traductor de internet para publicar en ingles?
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          goldens
          + 1 ⋅ 0 -
          akira this site has a translator for that... and since this site is free world wide there are people who can read spanish...
          me for example can scratch since i am portugues

          if you dont try you will never know
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        kumb
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        Why wouldn't they be crying about being in a pirated site?
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          CobraClaw
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          Some people are polite enough to at least ignore it, because not everyone wants to pay the ridiculous prices on webnovel.

          I haven't even read the book yet, and I still respect Transcendent more than authors like invayne.
          https://ranobes.net/novels/912043-reborn-as-a-dragon-girl-with-a-system-v270283.html

          Check the comments for the link and see how it differs.

          I'm not saying that pirating is okay; but it's not going to stop happening just because of a few complaints. I respect Transcendent for being able to realize that, and for prioritizing his improvement over his funds.
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        IEmberI
        + 0 ⋅ 0 -
        Да большинство из них не плачут , потому что для них это скорее + , чем - . Просто находятся иногда "великие" писатели , которые претендуют на мировую известность ( сарказм ) , о которых никто даже бы не узнал если бы не подобные сайты .
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      Death panda
      + 7 ⋅ 0 -
      Question: why did you start with a one year flashback it’s not bad but you know it’s was weird, one year and already the strongest is this gonna be fast paced or slow since those types of flashbacks usually mean endgame content. well might be just me I’l give it a try but I feel weird so maybe later
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        Transcendent
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        The fight with Abyss Emperor is not the end of the story. It is the endgame of Human-Abyssal conflict. Solar System is just a corner of the world.

        Hope that answers your question.

        If you have the means, please support me on Webnovel.com

        I wish you a good read.
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          Death panda
          + 12 ⋅ 0 -
          Thank you for explaining I’m sorry I cannot support but I’ll mark it since I’ve enjoyed it so far
          .
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      - - A k i r a - -
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      una pregunta si escribo una novela en mi idioma natal (español) crees que la lean?

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      PD: o la escribo en español y utilizo algun traductor de internet para publicar en ingles?
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        Edison_Silva
        + 1 ⋅ 0 -
        Soy de latam, por lo que le podría dar un vistaso, pero, las vistas serían muy limitadas, ya que estas en una pagina de lectura enfocada para los gringos por lo que si quieres tener mas enfoque en ellos sería traducirlos, aunque eso tampoco asegura ya que la traducción seria muy pobre. (Dependiendo)
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          Edison_Silva
          + 2 ⋅ 0 -
          Todo esto claro, tomando en cuenta que tu novela sea buena.
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          Mæxîmœ
          + 0 ⋅ 0 -
          Mira no es así en hoy día gracias a traductores de páginas y el más o menos servible de Google traductor, si la gente no encuentra una novela en su idioma a la primera son capaces de irse hasta las panias originales de las mismas ya sea chino o japonés(etc). Lo que yo recordaría es escribirla en el idioma inicial de uno y luego traducirla en inglés para subir ambas escrituras al mismo tiempo.
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      AManWithoutMoney
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      Around how many chapters are you planning.
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      IRetaliationz
      + 5 ⋅ 0 -
      Author honestly you have my respect. Most authors would complain that their novels are being pirated and critizied and would immediately try to get the pirate website taken down. Btw you're novel is good imo, the Mc started off rocky and dense and later on received good character development.
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    The F00L
    + 7 ⋅ 0 -
    pretty average I guess...There are some parts that are very cringe and abit difficult to bear with...but I see abit of light at the end of the tunnel or is it just my imagination...I will wait and see Author.
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    Hansbk
    + 2 ⋅ 4 -
    IS this even good? or people just reading it for the R-18?? constraint
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      Crzchoochoo11
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      an average job that you can read, but do not expect anything new (well, or at least for now, there are few simple chapters).At the expense of r18, there is no romance yet, as in principle, even fmc has not yet met with mc (talk in a dream).
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