Blood Warlock: Succubus Partner in the Apocalypse by XIETIAN

from me, as extra
It has a nice starting hook, since the mc is likeable, op and has advantages but fights tooth and nail for it, mysterious system/record, secret succubi. However there are also flaws that you may or may not like. All of it can be explained by comment below
from #ricardo2#
This is a copy of my review on webnovel: Spoilers ahead

I just wanna start by saying that I've been following this novel since chapter 30 and I've read all the available chapters at this point in time (260+).

This novel started out great tbh. The entire first arc in the university was, overall, solid, but the big problems this novel has start later on during the next arcs where the story goes from the best apocalyptic novel I'd read to an okay/average (maybe above average) one.
I'll mention the good points 1st which include the update stability which is good at 2 chaps per day and the character design because most important characters have interesting thoughts and personalities tho it could be better. The world background is also not bad, but at the same time it is also nothing to crazy.

Now, when it comes to the flaws of the novel there is one that REALLY is annoying among all of them and that is the way the author writes. What I mean by this is that the author loves writing filler chaps just to make his novel bigger and sometimes u have like 3/4 chaps of enemies being cocky and killing his subordinates just to then be oneshot. For example there was also this one time where for an entire week (2 chaps a day) we only got equipment crafting chaps, like what???? How fuking much do u wanna stretch it. These novel suffers from the same thing as Cultivation online which is having a really good story that is butchered by its author in an attempt to make it last longer and milk it more which is understandable but sad. The chapters are also very small, which was also something that only started happening later on.
There are other things people might consider bad that don't bother me much like the kingdom building tag, as long as it is done well, and the constant description of sexy females.
This novel also suffers from the chinese novel syndrome and copies some of its "qualities". Like for example, everything the Mc makes, be it his base, weapons or even his strength it is always superior to the others and they are always monsters while he is always a saint/right.
Another thing that really bothers me is how lazy the author is with the titles. There were 10 chaps in a row titled: 3 vs 300 something (I forgot tbh). Of these 10 only the last 2/3 even mentioned the fight. If u read this author just know that i like ur story and i'll keep reading it, but if these "concerns" of mine, and other people, get worse and others appear I might just drop it tbh. It was such a good story at 1st.

Final rant: What was the fuking point of introducing his family and showing how much he cares for them if it has been weeks and he hasn't even gone to look for them. Especially after he saw how women and even children are being raped or selling themselves for food he still doesn't go look for them. I know he's got other shit to do but in that case why introduce his family in the 1st place. I know for sure his sister is fine, but i hope either his mom or dad, or both, are dead to show him he should have gone looking for them as soon as he could. Tho I bet when he finds them they'll have been mistreated and he'll murder destroy an entire base.

btw if there's one thing that i like is his relationship with lili which is quite well done. I kinda want this to be a harem cuz I like binxue too but I'm conflicted xD.

LOL of course he will
After all with so many pirate sites out there stealing money it's natural to stretch things to smooth things out
So, we can only read obediently or drop the story

According to author he has yet to decide. But for the first 300 chapters there is no harem yet. Bit of romance with single person, but only one.

it is harem.

it isn't a harem but I think that at some point it might become tbh. The authors other novel is a harem too.

Its only mentioned very vaguely. We dont ever actually see it, mc just once reminisced about it for like a paragraph.

This is more like a secondary goal, as the focus is mainly on the protagonist's evolution and kingdom creation, but I agree that this is too time-consuming.

Im a little scared writing here with the Lioner Bots upvoting lioner comments and downvoting everyone who disagree with him but i believe that the tag is for:

i believe it was more dark but for the love of all i dont remember