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Patriarch is Taking Concubines Again!夭寿啦,老祖又双叒叕纳妾了!

Traveling through the Cultivation World, where Immortal and God exist, Li Su’s Spiritual Roots are... Read more
Traveling through the Cultivation World, where Immortal and God exist, Li Su’s Spiritual Roots are tr*sh and when he thought everything is over, He obtained a System!

The System of Many Children-Many Blessings!

With each additional descendant he has, his lifespan extends and Cultivation increases!

Even the Cultivation of his Descendants feedback to him!

Therefore in order to achieve his goal of becoming an Immortal, he takes Concubine and makes babies crazily!

While Others beat other people to death on Cultivation Resources, Li Su is making babies.

While Others Cultivate in Seclusion for Hundred Years, Li Su is making babies for Hundred of Years!

That’s why when an Immortal Appeared and wanted to Destroy the Li Clan, Li Su appeared and killed him with one Finger everyone was stunned mute. Collapse
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    alfred68
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    why the f#ck mc look like 18yrs old? Its simple.

    Author doesn't have the ability of the brain to create a middle age or old looking mc which would have been more appropriate setting here coz it was explained that since only last 20yrs i.e. when mc was 80y.o. his concubine taking has gathered momentum.

    But if the author did that many of the females would be unwilling to throw themselves at him or marry him. The author would then have to come up with some deep setting etc to make the marriage happy or it would just have an unhappy abusive marriage where the mc just forces the females to have his children after marriage.

    So to not create hypertension for himself, the author just create a young looking hunk which causes all females to go weak in their legs & bear him children after marriage and that's the end of their one line appearance.

    And the mc looking young is like main pivot of conversation in many chapters.

    This is only for some high school boys who got nothing better to do coz they can't afford to play new pc games (due to hardware) and want to waste time in their fantasies.
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      is this your first time reading cultivation novel? No way in hell you just complained about the MC's young face in a cultivation novel lshock

      there are many bad things to point out in this novel i agree but... Mc's face is the least one on that warmly
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        В романах про культивацию всегда обращаю внимание на красоту, хотя это просто мясо, кожа да кости. Один удар и труп. Красота самая бесполезная вещь в мире культивации. У авторов как будто комплексы о своей внешности, что они делают гг грасавчиком на все 100. Может я плохо, выразился, но посыл мой понятен.))) Тем более, что это постоянное бессмысленное описание красоты женщин и мужчин раздражает
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      Talk about reading without paying attention. Your point isn't even a problem and the facts of the novel contradict your complaints.
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      Sigh,some people should just shut the fuk up,like why can't just u shut the fk up4
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  2. Offline
    + 27 -
    I've read the ending MC has become immortal
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  3. Offline
    + 131 -
    Author had a wet dream and turned it into a novel
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      Bro just revealed where thus horny writers generally get their inspiration from
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    • 4.8
    4.8
    It starts okey, however at chapter 70+ it starts going downhill, the mc starts acting a bit heroic, meaning that he gets limelight. That is not good since he still has not gone above everyone in cultivation base, and some demonic cultivators are running rampant. Do not waste time, as I said it is only good in the beginning.
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    it is abandoned?
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    1. Offline
      + 40 -
      59 chapters in raw so it’s not the author, but maybe the translator dropped or is too busy.

      Edit- Just checked his patreon and the last post was 28th of Feb.
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      Sleeping stone
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      Mtl link yyyy
      https://mtlnation.com/novel/long-live-the-patriarch-is-taking-concubines-again
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        How many ch bro
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    Hahahaha... The concept is good.. This can become a good read, if only the execution is also good
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    A brilliant concept but has worse execution.
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    • 4.8
    4.8
    there is only 10 chapters and it is a nice read. The MC is fine and the premise of the story is interesting. Trying to review only 10 chapters where mostly he just started would only leave you disappointment. His cultivation depend on his system where the system would give him x amount of years of cultivation depending on number of children and their spiritual root. The story already start when he have more than 9k descendant of only mortal women.
    Honestly a fun read hope we get more chapters
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    It's not even an R-18, what the hell, dude?? eyetwit
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    Theoretically, this could be hilarious - this could be a very silly exploration-type xianxia with self-contained arcs focused on certain areas or certain women, with each arc culminating in, well, y'know. And then, as his cultivation increases in tandem with his descendants, the story could very naturally move on to bigger ventures; higher realms if you wanna be cliche', but most of these books kinda suck at portraying what a higher realm ought to be.

    Personally, I think a nice veneer into sect-building would be a nice touch for the middle-segment of a book like this, focusing less on his individual adventures and the women he meets, and focusing largely on the fruit of the first half; his kids. Not perspective-shifting, but gathering them all in one place and watching over them, and helping them handle their problems and their troubles and dealing with all that would be an amazing way to tie together two different halves of the whole. Also, if the personalities are well-written, could be dumb af and funny to watch that mess come together.

    A third-half to wrap the whole thing up could be anything, there's potential, though a book like this doesn't really need a big boom of an ending so much as a quiet, satisfying fizzle of a firework. I'd say this is 400 to 500 chapters of potential.

    Unfortunately, this will likely be utter horny harem trash, with a hundred grams of face-slapping, two hundred grams of jade beauties, one hundred grams of arrogant MC, and the rest diluted with water.

    I'll pioneer regardless.
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    1. Offline
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      After writing all that and reading this novel, I feel like a man who's wasted his life away. gloom
      Stay away, friends. There is nothing but misery here.

      This reads like a summary of a novel. Was the point to display the premise of the system? I've read powerpoints from 6th graders with more detail than this. I've written math exams with more narrative. This isn't a hundred grams of anything, it's just water with a sprinkle of salt. frost

      Good on the author for trying, though. It takes guts to publish something, and while this isn't all that great, the main idea behind it does carry potential, and everyone starts somewhere. It's not completely horrible - kind of an OP MC thing so far! I can see where he's going with it, so maybe it improves down the line as he hones his craft. I won't recommend it, duh, but meh, not the worst webnovel I've read by far. It's kinda like knock-off Lays. reader
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        I pity you, my friend
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      2. Offline
        Eon
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        I feel the upmost pity for you
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      3. Offline
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        We will remember your bravery, O' great one ..
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        Your sacrifice won't be in vain 30
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      5. Offline
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        Truly, the worst part of delving web novels is the potential a story had
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      Dude just write you’re own novel using this idea, it not blatant plagiarism, more like inspiration from the synopses/title. It’s a great idea, go for it. Anyways the book is trash it not like anyone is going to say you stole it unless they have a brain deficiency.
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      This is basically what this novel would be if it was written on TTP's level
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