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The Discarded, Half-Eaten Apple Core New Life by MDW

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The world ended. Bam! The Apocalypse opened the gates of Hell, demons killed everyone. Including me. But I got a second chance of life. Though it was as an apple. Which was eaten by a starving survivor, not that I fault them. But to toss my half-eaten core into a landfill?

To add insult to injury, an earthquake brought the landfill and everything in it a mile underneath the earth. I guess I'm not in uncharted waters, because good luck finding any nearby.

Not that it would matter. I am pretty sure the apple I was reincarnated as was a GMO hybrid whose potential to germinate was as stunted as the empathy of a corporation CEO. So there's that. Also, no sunlight.

** DING **

SYSTEM INITIATION!


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    Fun read with lots of memes, novel doesn't take itself too seriously and it shows.

    Unfortunately some dialogue in early parts does get cut out due to formatting, recommend going to source to read fully.

    Another unfortunate victim of "Rushed Endings".
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    3/5

    It's a fun read, lighthearted a lot of memes, main character is very likable and funny, but other than that it's very lacking, the world building is ehh, not a lot gets introduced and the MC doesn't stray too far from one place after a few chapters.

    Aside from that my main reason in giving him a mediocre score is related to his actions and the character itself along with the plot, first this half eaten apple core was actually a human, but a lot of his memories seem to be missing and while that doesn't necessarily hinder his actions, he lacks that oomph so to say, that humans have, he completely sucks in leading and managing, for being 50 times smarter than most people, he has no imagination to create anything other than what he remembers from his past life.

    What i mean to say, he acts exactly like an authentic apple core becoming sentient would, he himself sometimes doesn't see himself as a person or human, he is quite literally a war machine bred and controlled by the system.
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    I recommend to read on RR (only novel I know of where its better to) because mc's dialogue is missing a lot of the time.

    I just found out that the stats are much more easier to read, its in a table now instead of a mess of a paragraph.
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      What is RR
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        Royal road
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    Eon
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    This is pretty good
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    Bruh Kardashev Type 1 Civ???
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    Can someone explain me the gender bender tag in this ?
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      From human to apple nothing more
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        I thought it was because
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    Now an apple as a MC? And on top of that it’s half eaten? This is getting a little out of hand… I wonder how far it can go
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      random chinese dude see iphone logo and thinks "I should write a book about it" cheerful
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        Fun fact: not every novel on this website was written by a Chinese dude.
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          Honestly surprising how often people assume almost every English original is Chinese
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    you have long chapters, funny characters, but most important of all, its a dungeon core novel that actually has an ending instead of dragging on forever
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      its a dungeon core novel that actually has an ending instead of dragging on forever

      it's a shock for sure thx boast
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      That comment really made me want to read it. I never thought this day would come when dungeon romance would end without dragging on lol
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      Esse comentário realmente me fez ter vontade de ler. Nunca pensei que chegaria esse dia que o romance de masmorra terminaria sem se arrastar lol
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    Just an annoying fan

    Go to royal road and support the author, it’s free to read.

    I’m not saying to abandon this site, but if you enjoy the hard work they put go and just show your support.
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      Can you shed some light why is there a Gender Bender tag?
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        I’ve read up to the epilogue and from what I remember there was no gender bender. If you count the mc turning into a dungeon core then yeah.
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          Indeed, the gender of the dungeon core can be considered uncertain. (My auto translator translated this tag as "gender uncertainty" lol)
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    Hilarious, little bit of a slow start and you might not enjoy the mechanics of the story, it’s a little bit crack but it’s funny, enjoyable, and completed.
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