Once Human, Now a Parasite by TheCrow

That being who gave this a 5 star rating rating is on another level. I saw the 4 stars average and went in to read only to find that this sounded like something written by a 13 yo who just got to know big words like rape, trauma and shit without reasoning with the underlying concepts…

Considering Lucy's 'experience' with men, you'd think she'd need more than a few second hand embarrassment level cringe cheesy lines and a love at first sight proposal to get her to fall in love with Arthur.

If author was gonna give her a bad 'experience' with men, at least don't rush the romance as if her suppossed PTSD and hate for men didn't exist, considering she used to kill any random male on sight who were minding their own business.

Идея противная. Паразит, Паразитизм конечен, тогда как развитие бесконечно, Если не будет носителя он просто умрет, а это глупо, да опилка по копированию других навыков просто отвратительная, лучше создать что то свое чем брать что то чужое..

These book is very confusing, I'm around 400 chapter.. the author wasn't focus in 1 story I mean the story of other characters .. the problem is some of them are in other time line too far away too . Clisandra find a cave in astria with painting telling about far future battle of mc with the same timeline of mc ?? That not even happen, well can't say everything but it happens alot , its like the timeline was mess up or combine in some way, for example mc found group of people fighting a dragon well for precise their are people of earth whose playing a mmorpg and mc kill the dragon and gave a sword to a kid ... After that later chapter it was the younger version of the knight the strongest in the universe who exist with mc timeline .. very very confusing book but I already started it, so go all the way

3/5

Perhaps this is author's first writings .
It's a meh for me , barely readable because it's just bad..
In nearly every chapter i felt like leaving 2-3 comments to point out the mistakes , but I'm not your proof reader.

Mc is absolutely tortured in some of the most horrible ways a human could do to another human , including him becoming just a torso by the end , no it's not a spoiler , you'll understand if you do read this.
He then goes to an auction , nothing interesting for him , until the last item , a slave aaaand it's a women ofc , he buys her and yes you guessed it , the rich young noble sends assasins after being "humiliated" by the fact he didn't get to spend about 3 kingdoms worth on her( that's right 1 gold feeds a couple family's for about a year , and he spent 2mil ...) , I have more to say about that but i would never stop then .
It's also just another impossible to function/exist world . Skills make no sense , lvls make no sense , also why tf do you have a near death fight tournament to enter a f#cking academy , the place where you learn ? It's not an arena mf , it's a learning institute B!

I will not critique the gramatical errors.
Everything is awkward in dialogues , i have joked before that i have cringed reading some novels , but this time i actually did , it was so awkward i felt goosebumps .
If auth. did not intruduce Lucy , it would've been a 3.5/5 , because she is nothing more than a plot device to try and make us fell emotive toward her , and Jesus f#cking Christ mc fell in love with what is basically a kid , is auth. Russian?

Stop sexualizing a small kid (auth had the gal to write a note when he described how sensual the kid Lucy is , : NOTHING SEXUAL GUYS , STOP YOUR PERVY MINDS) this isn't a Loli novel brah. I think since he met her , with just can't stop masturbating to his own writings , in almost every ch he says how hot the kid is. Fk off

Lol the author really said deal with it bitch

Mc has a lot of contradictions over its words and actions.

Plus the translation is uncomfortable to read