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This book is good as for passing time when you have nothing else to read. It is a combo of multiple fanfictions which diminishes it's quality. The problem with this is that the author expects you to know each and every show or game he is referencing. I normally don't read fanfics which could be the reason my appeal for this book is low.Nonetheless I pushed through to the near end. From there I couldn't take it any more . The novel turned to a story to just pure info dumping as if the author just wanted to just be done with it.From there I just gave up

I couldn't continue reading the novel normally, it's really bad....
I see the comments, and I can say that people here are divided into 2 types. Those who are new to the world of novels, and they think this book is good. Well, there are no questions for them, due to their limited experience, it's normal to think this book is good.
The second type are those who already have experience, and they can immediately say that the book is bad, and will only work for beginners.
I didn't read the comments before starting the book, only the synopsis, which seemed interesting to me, so I went to read....
I wasted my time.

The two main minuses of the book that kill any potential are:
1. The author overestimated his abilities. He gave MC a very overpowered cheat, but he couldn't handle it....
The cheat is so overpowered that MC could grow in strength at an incredible speed, and at the same time not encounter any problems along the way. Literally all of his problems could have been solved if he had an imagination not like a 5-year-old child.
This is where the author failed. He gave an overpowered cheat, but precisely because of its overpowered nature, he had to spend all his imagination on how to weaken the system, otherwise there would be no intrigue in the novel.
While reading, I could easily imagine in my head 10-30 ways to solve a problem or strengthen myself to an incredible degree in a given situation.

2. I don't like fan fiction, and I didn't know that this was fan fiction, otherwise I probably wouldn't even read it. Here, this problem really ruined the book.
Instead of paying attention to the development of his story and his world, the author spent a lot of time developing in other people's worlds, and borrowing abilities from anime and games. This was very disappointing, since I wanted to read more about the abyss itself, as well as worlds that the author himself would have come up with. How he makes deals with people and representatives of other races, etc. I didn't see any of this, only a bunch of worlds from films, games, etc. Overall it's pretty boring, after every couple of chapters I had to take a break because of boredom. It just doesn't grab me.

If you're a newbie, you can read it, you might like it, but for people with experience I don't recommend wasting time.

This novel doesn’t deserve its high rating I think it should be lower. Considering that the author and the mc is retarded and can barely use his overpowered system most of the time. Not only that it feels like reading info dump after info dump later on. So much potential but it’s wasted by lazy writing. Not surprising considering the author’s other work is also dookie. This has been one of the most disappointing read, considering its high rating. Also the power of this world is confusing and barely explain, also the powers are kinda lame.

Is he going to be using a gun a lot in the novel?? is it going to be his main weapon?? it just doesn't match the theme of the novel and feels out of place and plus I hate guns in cultivation novels....

Dropped after Van Helsing part started

Author's note:

I have finally finished writing this book , and now I really want to vent!
Everyone, it was not easy for me, Lao Yao, to finally finish this book after many setbacks. It has been five years since I started writing the book!
When I started writing the book, I really didn’t think that the book would be delayed for so long, but there was no way, there was really no way. Lao Yao’s life has undergone a huge change, because not long after this book was put on the shelves, my baby daughter was born, and her appearance disrupted all my life at once.

In the past, when we were just two people, we had plenty of time to do whatever we wanted when we got home every day, whether it was writing articles or watching movies or watching videos. But since the fairy came, all of this is gone! Everything revolves around her.

I am a daughter slave. Every day when I go to work, I already think about her. When my colleagues call me to have dinner after work, I don’t want to go at all. I just want to go home and hug my child. I can’t kiss her cute little face enough! Eating is shit. How can it be more comfortable than me and my little baby?

So, during that period of time, I, the old demon, actually didn’t have much energy to focus on writing… From then on, this book started to be written intermittently.

Then we encountered the epidemic. As everyone knows, every time I went out during that period, I had to spray my whole body with alcohol when I came back, and I would wear a mask before I dared to hold my child. What I was most afraid of at that time was what to do if I tested positive. Fortunately, although I really tested positive later, my symptoms were not serious. I had a fever once and it was fine the next day. Moreover, basically no one in my family had any serious symptoms, which made me breathe a sigh of relief.

The little baby is growing up, but the old people in the family... Perhaps this is a kind of reincarnation, a replacement of the old and the new. During the epidemic, the last two elders in my family continued to fall ill, were hospitalized, and eventually passed away. And the most infuriating thing happened at this time. The graves of the older generation in the family were buried relatively far away, so the news was not obtained in time, which led to the forcible relocation of the graves before we learned the news. So the whole family kept looking for the person in charge of the relocation of the graves at that time to ask for an explanation, and finally even made a scene... Ahem, this seems to be something that cannot be written. The editor has already said hello, anyway, everyone understands.

Then there were several car accidents at home. My uncle suffered the most serious injury. His left leg was shattered and he still uses crutches and cannot walk. He has to rely on us to pick up and drop off his two children at school...

In short, there are all kinds of troubles, so I won’t go into details here. I say this just to tell you that many times it’s not that I don’t want to update, but I really have no inspiration because of these troubles.

The early performance of this book was actually quite good, but due to various interruptions, the subscriptions dropped rapidly. In fact, my friends all advised me to stop writing if I couldn't continue, and not to force myself. But I am... how should I put it, I have a bit of obsessive-compulsive disorder, and a bit of a perfectionist. I always feel a lump in my heart for anything that is not finished, and I always think about it, and I can't eat or sleep well. The same is true for writing a book. I always feel that since I have started telling a story, I have to finish it. No matter whether the story is good or bad, the people who listen to the story must hear an ending.

So in the end, I made up my mind and forced myself to finish this book.

I dare not say whether this book is well written or not, but at least I have filled in some of the holes left in the previous part, especially the hole of the Abyss Chosen Ones. I have been looking through the previous chapters these days, found it, and finally filled it in the end.

I would like to thank all the book friends for their loyalty, especially those who have been following the book. One friend said that he has graduated from college since he started reading it. I feel ashamed to hear this. It has indeed been too long, and I can’t get back to the state I had when I started reading the book. So there may be more flaws in the later parts. I hope you can forgive me for this.

In addition, some book friends have asked why there are no Easter egg chapters in this book. The thing is, I actually wanted to have some Easter egg chapters, but when this book was first published, Qidian’s Easter egg chapters had just been tested, so to open Easter egg chapters, you need to apply to the editor. I haven’t updated for so long, and I was embarrassed to trouble the editor, so I didn’t do it in the end.

I would like to thank my editor Loach here. I told him a long time ago that I wanted to finish the book, but it took so long to finally finish it that I felt a little embarrassed to face him.

Well, no matter what, it’s a good thing to finish writing. I feel much more relaxed now. Now I don’t have any psychological burden even if I play with my kids. Thank you all for your support again. I have been writing books for more than ten years. I have been stumbling along. I am not a high-productivity writer, nor a great writer. I am just an old author. I can persist because of the support and encouragement of all the book friends, especially Qiqi. I would like to thank him here. Every time I stopped writing, he would urge me on WeChat. If it weren’t for him, I would probably have delayed it for a long time...

Okay, I won’t say any more nonsense, let me kowtow to you all!

Thank you all, this book is finished!

I wish it had been left unfinished so I wouldn't have seen such a bad finale. It processed too many characters and deleted them all at once.
First of all, I divide this novel into 2 seasons. Before and after, during a very long break.
In the first season, the power ranking, balancing, story and characters were well handled. Until the world of Diablo. Everything in the Diablo world fell apart so quickly that I considered quitting. I mean, I knew from the beginning that this novel wouldn't have a good ending, but I didn't expect it to be this bad. The character, which normally evolves 3 times in 400 episodes, started to evolve every 50 episodes (these evolutions are ridiculous and shit) and writer's brain couldn't handle it and started writing nonsense. I wish he had taken it a little slower and gone to different worlds. After all, there are demons in many games, movies and TV series. I think he wanted to finish it immediately and concentrate on his other novel. The normally 9-8 novel has turned into a 4/10 novel. Sad. I had an old comment, I had hope at that time.

This was the first fanfiction I read, and after a few years I had to come back and re-read it. The characters are well-developed, the comedy is very well-written and the settings are simply perfect. There are few negative points, which are eclipsed by all the good parts. Read it without fear, you won't regret it.