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Just Deserts by Elbowsnapper

[MHA. OC. Sand Manipulation Quirk. Complete.]

Hisoka Higawara struggles to understand... Read more
[MHA. OC. Sand Manipulation Quirk. Complete.]

Hisoka Higawara struggles to understand those around him, but he's learning quickly. One day, he makes friends with a girl named Nanami, and his life will never be the same.

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Revised, restructured and rebuilt from the ground up, Just Deserts gets a new coat of paint. Enjoy. Collapse
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    #panic# please add my hero academia tag
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    Hooly, what a cringey name for a protagonist. These weeb authors man..
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      Japanese setting, Japanese story, what you wanted the MC to be named James?
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        Yeah weeb, cause "Hisoka Higawara" is totally a normal japanese name.
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          Okay smartass give us a good jap name
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            Alexander.
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              ...I don't even know what to say
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                I thinks that's how kids these days think 😂
                The tiktok generation
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              lil bro in ur parallel universe alexander conquered japan as well?
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                He's clearly joking..how did yall miss that?😭
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    damn… this is more like an Author that uses MHA as a setting to fuel his own masterpiece. Like, even without the MHA settings he would have no problem crafting a 10/10 novel.

    This was a crazy find. FamilyGuy016

    EDIT: Aight nvm. Entering the middle of the series it's really gotten super slow to a crawl seems like the story focuses in things that simply bore me.
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    • 5.0
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    I personally find it funny that it took me uh..4 months to read this.
    Anywho absolutely phenomenal work of art.
    Best fanfiction ever. Just...how the OCs are melded into the Original Work is amazing.
    Honestly only thing I can say is a negative is that it feels like there should be more, like...it feels incomplete, in a way you know? But not everything needs to feel complete to actually be complete.
    4.7/5 Rating
    Solid A+ maybe an S?
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    I don't really know what to think of the end, it was ok, I expected more chapters maybe, a shame
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    Do not distracted how there is only 12 chapters, each chapter is easily 5-7 chapters in length for any other novel.

    Quality is amazing for a Fanfic, easily one of my top Fanfics. highly recommend.
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      Actually, it would be about 17 chapters for any other novel, according to my calculations.
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    The chapters are realy long lol
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    Which character is the MC? Is it the guy or the girl in the synopsis?
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    This is probably the best MHA fan fiction I’ve ever read, and trust me when I say I’ve spent too much time reading them.

    The characters are astonishingly well written, their interactions are detailed and realistic. The original characters are interesting and well constructed. The side characters from the original story are extremely well rounded and come across as authentic people; their portrayal and motivations are oftentimes even better developed than in the original story. That, along with the lead character are this story’s greatest strengths.

    The main character is compelling and someone you root for from start to finish, his personality and quirk are entertaining to say the least and his motivation enraptures you to the point where they become indistinguishable from our own. Hisoka’s wishes become ours and his emotions sway our own, truly magnificent writing.

    The ending is satisfying and while I hope Just Deserts will get a sequel in the future I wouldn’t be too upset (or surprised) if it didn’t as the storyline wraps up very neatly.

    Overall, an amazing piece of writing. Kudos to the author for taking us on this journey and I hope to read more of his work in the future.
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    oh man, I thought mc will have Bungee Gum quirk
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