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A Nascent Kaleidoscope by AStoryForOne

A Nascent Kaleidoscope
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An experiment gone wrong, or possibly right? A Nascent Kaleidoscope opens his eyes.

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An experiment gone wrong, or possibly right? A Nascent Kaleidoscope opens his eyes.

A reincarnated Zelretch story. Previous Fate-series knowledge recommended.

A Fate/DxD/Multi Crossover.

In Light of the horrendous new update, know that I do cross post on Fan Fiction dot Net. Collapse
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    Enqor
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    Actually best ff i read in a while.
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      Diggingfortreasures
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      I'll give it a try then thanks! Chapters on novels I follow have been slow lately

      Edit: not my cup of poisoned tea, cheers
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    DrkAvalon01
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    I stopped reading shortly after the moment the MC declared his love for Meridia. This moment is so surreal that it made me fluster. reader

    The MC has magic capable of ignoring dimensions and he showed it to a deadra prince, one of the beings who most covets this kind of magic.

    Not to mention the fact that Daedric Princes are deities who think and see the world in an entirely different way than mortals. I really doubt they can feel love for a human. Although Meridia is considered "good" among the Deadra princes, he remains a Deadra prince.

    Not to mention that the MC has the memory of his previous life, that of a thousand-year-old magicien. The fact that he dares to show such coveted magic to an unknown deity capable of killing him with a sneeze is completely illogical.

    Obviously the author doesn't care about my arguments because "f#ck logic". Thus the MC gains Meridia as his wife. 14

    Sorry for fans of this novel, but this “MC x Meridia” romance should never have existed because it goes against the reality of the Skyrim universe. A story, even a fantastic one, must have its own logic and hold up.

    If tomorrow Naruto started killing his son Boruto and his wife Hinata without any explanation other than "Because the author wanted to", I'm sure Naruto fans would go crazy. And this would be normal because it goes against the logic of this universe. bond

    If the author had been faithful to the Skyrim universe, then Meridia would have stolen the MC's magic, killed him to avoid any threat, then gone to assassinate the other Deadra princes with this magic. ahaa

    In my eyes, this romance is a serious error in plot construction, worthy of a beginner author. You are free to like this story and I'm happy for you if you do. But personally such an error is unforgivable for me. kiaa

    It's a shame because this novel had a lot of potential and good ideas. sigh

    In any case, I advise you to read this story and make up your own mind, I wish you a good read.
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      krishna04
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      Bro put all that in a spoiler
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        DrkAvalon01
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        It's a secondary element of the plot but one that may displease more than one person. My goal is to warn future readers of a problematic element. boast

        There's nothing more frustrating than reading a good story and ruining an illogical side element. eyetwit

        I'd rather watch a lousy novel that I'll stop reading from the start, rather than read a good story that becomes lousy later. reader

        By revealing a small spoiler, I save them a waste of time and great disappointment. Whereas if I hide my spoiler, many people will not read it and risk having a bad surprise later.

        Of course, if it's an important element of the story that's problematic, then I'll put it in a spoiler. welldone

        In any case, as long as a spoiler does not spoil the discovery of a story, my opinion is that there is no need to hide it. After all, denouncing rascism in a Chinese novel is also a form of spoiler. But the majority of readers do not hide this spoiler in order to prevent others from having a bad experience. know

        I consider my spoiler to be at the same level. wiseacre

        I hope I have clearly explained my point of view and the logic that results from it. satisfied
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    xektop99
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    so the author had the good idea that we needed a description of the Goddess Izanami (Izzi) until about the chapter 420+-, so Izanami has Silvery hair and Red eyes
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    Miami
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    A good Fate/DxD fanfic that branches lightly into other universes with magic-like mechanics, it has good world & character building.

    The Harem isn't just filler background characters for Mc to f#ck, each member of the Harem has their own roles, history and character, and has nice fluff moments. Its not as though every fem Mc talks to is a harem member like some reads.

    Plot is good, though occasionally it feels like its bouncing around a bit with how much MC has on his plate at times. This leads to my main irk: Mc doesn't utilize what he has to its best. Sometimes it feels like he's letting his various abilities collect dust which is frustrating at times.
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    Aldrighi
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    Super good original fanfic, its my favorite in webnovel.
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    Víteliú
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    Rank F-
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    DepressedUniStudent
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    Good story. Read on QQ, 3 chapters a week. While I enjoy this website, I usually read QQ stories there instead of here because 1. Usually fun community of readers in the posts under the chapters 2. Authors are normally pretty chill and responsive 3. Many times there are supplementary material like images, side stories, omake, etc

    For those who don’t like it - harem, fan fiction multi cross, MC is not lone dark emotionless character
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      Caizzar
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      Do you know how to read Chinese?
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        DepressedUniStudent
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        No, why?
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          Caizzar
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          How do you read on QQ? Isn't it a Chinese app?
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            DepressedUniStudent
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            Questionable Questing, the website. Originally an entirely lewd story archive, it’s basically a more horny and less restrained Space Battles at this point. It, like this story, are all English originals.
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              Caizzar
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              I thought you were talking about the Chinese social network QQ.
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      Abhijit007
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      How do you read on QQ outside China, doesn't it require a mainland phone number?
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        hellmander
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        QQ = QuestionableQuesting, it's not Chinese
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    Hyperbola
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    I got an email the other day "every time you m*sterbate god kills a kitten"

    What a coincidence every time I kill a kitten I m*sterbate
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    GodLikeV
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    Don't bother it's trash.
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      MTL Ancestor
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      Why? DxD? Harem?
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