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Arrogant Young Master Template A Variation 4 by LivingSpoon

You have come to a world where adepts are self-improving in an attempt to achieve immortality.... Read more
You have come to a world where adepts are self-improving in an attempt to achieve immortality.

You've got a system at your disposal that you've read a lot about. But why do you feel like you've been fucked somewhere?

Ah, you're not the main character. You are an arrogant young master who insults the main character and dies at his hands after a couple of dozen chapters.

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    This is a prime example of how a potentially good story can be ruined by a lazy and poorly-written protagonist. I've read novels with lazy main characters before, but they were executed well and suited the story. In this case, the MC is lazy to the point of absurdity—he wants to get stronger but refuses to put in the effort, despite having the system handing him every advantage on a silver platter. Instead of utilizing these gifts, he constantly whines about not wanting to work hard. As the story progresses, it starts to fall apart, with random, disconnected events happening for no reason. It's clear the author is just padding the word count—case in point: the MC spends three pages counting cycles. Does the author really believe readers need that level of detail to understand? It feels as though the story was written just for the sake of it, without any real direction or effort behind it. 

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    Please ignore my comment if you are a fan or really like this novel. This novel is not for me

    This is just my opinion
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    Looking like another 4 year wait for a new batch of chapters.
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    10\10 read it on RoyalRoad
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    This has too much dry humour. Kinda boring but good to read before sleep
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    If you want something to read

    https://ranobes.net/user/CodeSpectre/favorites/238012/
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      Bro u serious this novel is in your favourites kef
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    wow, even the title admits this genre is too used and cookie cutter scenes.
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    161 chapters in 3 years
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      More like 0 chapters in 3 years swindler
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    I'm at a loss. In my opinion, this is a fun and light novel, filled with banter and irony about all these clichéd trash novels, but there seem to be "experts" gathered here who are discussing character development, plot development and other bullshit with hellish seriousness! Phe!
    My rating is 4/5!
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    there is a cool novel on the webnovel "The human giant" don't know where to read it? can't find it on pirate sites
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    was ok for about 90 chapters as a persiflage of some cliches, then the author decided it's too good and cr###d on it. so it became totally unreadable
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      what's the censored word?
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