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Dragon Ball Legend of Ayaka龙珠之绫叶传奇

Dragon Ball Legend of Ayaka
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The digital management system was reformed, and a loophole was accidentally found in the operation... Read more
The digital management system was reformed, and a loophole was accidentally found in the operation of Hell, which caused a young man to die inexplicably before his life was over.

Because Hell’s Officer didn’t pay attention to the fantasy world, with uncanny skills Ayaka began to emerge step by step in the powerful world. However, what Hell didn’t expect was that the fantasy world and the real world in the end was actually the same way. Collapse
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    AstralFear
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    • 3.3
    3.3
    TLDR: It has a lot of faults. But other than that, it's a decent enough way to pass time. Just a sorta mid-tier DBZ story.

    The good stuff:
    Well, overall it was pretty okay. Nothing really shines to me as particularly good, but mid-tier quality is still quality I guess.

    The bad stuff:
    • It really needs someone to edit it. I don't know if the gendering was ever right in the whole book? Names are wrong a lot. And because there was also so much damn Chinese cultivation goobledegook, I often didn't know what the f#ck was going on.

    • The MC also just sort of breezes through the power levels at breakneck speed, and the fights are pointless because the enemy always manages to survive.

    • The (Notalesbianharem) harem was a bit weird. It was just full of Twins for some reason? And nobody ever physically interacted? Like, I'm guessing censorship.
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    Just_A_Reader
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    i thought I read this to chapter 300+ or more did they restart? because of how different the ending of the original one was when compared to DB super? like the original drifted allot of from the end of DBZ and the beginning of DBS so is this a remake? (for those looking at this and thinking did this FOOL not read it yet i did well before the remade it and i have not reread this yet)
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    Immortal King
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    • 4.5
    4.5
    Overall Ok. The plot is a bit forced in way that she interferes with timeline soo much but all event happen almost the same. Its fun that she gets so powerful but a bit boring as we almost never get to see it. No update for past 20 days so am guessing translator has dropped or something. Can read if you have time.
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    Zayn123
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    there nothing wrong with this fanfic, I don't understand why people are giving it a low rating
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      Kazuki_King
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      Maybe the part where the summary is suggesting DB power's are higher than Hell's
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    ARD
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    Is this good ?
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