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(I Tricked a God) Should I Change the Title?

Hey everyone,

I wanted to ask for your thoughts on the novel’s title.

I’ve seen quite a few comments mentioning that the current title feels a bit confusing. Looking at it now, I think that’s fair (the meaning I originally intended doesn’t really line up with how the story begins, and most readers understandably interpret it based on the opening.)

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So I’m considering adjusting the title slightly.

What do you think? Do you feel the current title works, or does it create the wrong expectations?

I’ve been toying with alternatives like:

The God’s Pawn Regressor

The God-Tricked Regressor

(or something in that direction)

If you have suggestions or strong preferences, I’d really like to hear them.

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    I say keep it how it is. Its simple enough to get a person interested but not too much. He did literally trick a God. And there is no unnecessary wording either.
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    I know he won't see my message, but tell me what you think of "The God’s Slave Returns" ?
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