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Chapter 2: The Living Test Subject

Saul stood frozen in place.

He was thinking, but time was running out.

The candlelight on the wall had already shifted from a dusky yellow to a deeper amber. Once it turned bright yellow, that meant dawn was near. And before the flames turned white, Saul had to be back on the fourth floor.

Those were the rules.

The pool of blood was still there.

If he left it, he’d be flower fertilizer by morning.

But clean it?

He was just an ordinary person. No powers, no tricks. What could he possibly do about this eerie, murderous blood?

Ask for help?

The boys he bunked with harbored some hostility toward the pre-transmigration Saul. No way they’d help. And even if they wanted to, they were just regular kids like him, helpless in the face of this kind of thing.

Report it to the butler?

The butler never appeared at night, and Saul had no idea where to find him.

His movement was restricted to the fourth-floor servants’ quarters and the 11th through 13th floors.

No way out.

Saul’s trembling fingers suddenly steadied.

He placed the mop back onto the cart and straightened his clothes.

Then, he walked to the door directly across from the room leaking blood, raised his hand, and knocked three times.

In the silent corridor, those three knocks sounded painfully loud.

Saul glanced down at the floating hardcover book. No new death prediction appeared.

He raised his hand to knock again when the door before him suddenly creaked open.

Saul’s breath caught in his throat.

The door inched open.

And behind it, a tall, slender figure emerged.

A woman, dressed in a black nightgown, she was voluptuous, but not overweight. The exposed skin was pale and smooth.

Saul looked up and saw a graceful jawline, full red lips, a high nose and above that... nothing.

The woman had only half a head.

In the dark of night, the sight nearly made Saul’s soul leave his body.

He forced down the terror and kept his expression polite.

But his teeth betrayed him, chattering uncontrollably.

The woman tilted her head. The top half of it was gone. The exposed flesh at the cross-section was pale and decayed.

Where her eyes should have been, a hemispherical glass dome was embedded.

Inside the dome, a cloudy white liquid sloshed about. As she tilted her head, something eyeball-like bumped gently against the glass.

"What is it?"

Her lips moved. Her voice was unexpectedly pleasant.

"M-Ma’am..." Saul heard the tremble in his own voice. He took a deep breath to steady it. "Blood is leaking from the room across the hall. I don’t have the means to deal with it. Please... help me."

The woman lifted her head slightly. An eyeball pressed against the glass dome.

Then it disappeared again as she lowered her head, chuckled softly, and said, "Why should I help you?"

Saul knew he wouldn’t be lucky enough to knock on a stranger’s door and find a kind, helpful soul.

"Ma’am, what would you have me do?" he bowed his head.

He was just a servant. He had no right to negotiate.

The woman cradled her chin with slender fingers. "I need a living subject for an experiment. But I’m a bit short on credits right now. If you volunteer, I’ll take care of your little problem."

Saul glanced at the hardcover book floating over his shoulder.

No reaction.

He was still far too weak to protect himself. His only hope was to gamble on the book’s death warning system.

"Alright."

The woman curled her red lips in satisfaction, clearly pleased by Saul’s decisiveness.

She stepped aside and let him enter her room, then turned and did something outside.

Saul stood inside the room.

It was larger than the shared dorm he lived in with over a dozen other boys and it even had a separate inner chamber.

An oil lamp lit the living area, casting a steady and bright glow, likely aided by some enchantment.

At the center of the room sat a long table, cluttered with strange tools and materials he didn’t recognize.

The most eye-catching of all was a black cauldron atop a small stove, bubbling with thick black liquid.

"That’s the thing I need you to try." The woman had entered again without him noticing.

Saul turned. The door was already closed. He didn’t know if the blood outside had been dealt with.

"I need you to put one hand into the cauldron. Then tell me what you feel."

She pulled out a long bench, sat down across from him, crossed her legs, and waited expectantly.

Saul knew he had no room to bargain. So he didn’t plead, didn’t beg.

He rolled up the sleeve on his left arm, took a deep breath, and walked forward. Without hesitation, he plunged his entire hand into the black liquid.

He didn’t dip a finger first, better to risk the whole thing than irritate the woman with hesitation.

"Tss—!" Saul sucked in a breath.

Not from pain but from cold.

A biting, bone-deep cold.

"Clack, clack, clack..."

His teeth chattered uncontrollably.

"You can take it out now."

At her command, Saul yanked his hand back.

But the moment he saw it, the breath he’d just let out caught in his throat again.

The flesh was gone.

His left hand was nothing but clean, bare-bone—like a skeleton hand straight from a medical model.

The worst part? There was no pain at all.

"Hah... hah..."

Saul panted, gripping his left wrist with his right. Both hands shook violently.

As his skeletal hand trembled, it made a dry, clicking sound.

The woman offered no comfort. She stood and tapped her chin thoughtfully.

"Must’ve added too much Jisheli python stomach acid. What do you feel in that hand right now?"

"C-c-cold... but not painful..."

Saul tried to suppress his fear and chill, doing his best to respond like a professional test subject.

"I... I think I can still control it."

He flexed his skeletal fingers slightly.

It was difficult, but they moved.

"Not bad." The woman smiled, looking quite satisfied.

She sifted through the table, selected a few ingredients, and casually tossed them into the cauldron.

Two wisps of white steam hissed upward. Then, the bubbling resumed as before.

"Now," she sat back down, her chin tilted with interest. She pointed at the cauldron.

"Put in the other hand."

Saul exhaled.

He’d expected this.

The first trial clearly hadn’t worked.

So a second test was inevitable.

He released his left hand, then decisively plunged his right hand into the bubbling black liquid.

"Nnngh—!"

A deep freeze shot up his arm.

His right hand, submerged in the fluid, went entirely numb.

"You can take it out."

He yanked it free.

Relief washed over him as it wasn’t a skeleton hand this time.

Not only that, but his rough, calloused palm was now smooth and pale.

Before she could even ask, Saul said, "C-c-cold... even colder than before... clack clack... but not painful. I can control it..."

He flexed his fingers and raised his hand to show her.

The woman smiled again, but wider this time, revealing sharp white teeth behind her red lips.

"You really are a surprise."

She stood and even clapped her hands twice.

Crossing the room, she opened a cabinet and pulled out a crystal vial, handing it to Saul.

"Drink this."

Seeing Saul's hesitant, pale face, she laughed, her body trembling with amusement. The white liquid inside her glass dome sloshed along with her movements.

"Relax. This one’s not an experiment—it’s the healing potion."

(End of Chapter)

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    Son Of Chaos
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    Seeing Saul's hesitant, pale face, she laughed, her body trembling with amusement. The white liquid inside her glass dome sloshed along with her movements.

    Am I the only one still able to imagine her somehow?
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    Jun Sakazuki
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    A baddie
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    Saejiro
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    It’s actually comedic how hard my reviews are getting bodied by downvotes. Like wow, really twisting the knife there, guys. You really got me there. Devastating stuff. My feelings are hurt. I’m weeping into a pillow. Absolute morale killer.

    Apparently, all it takes to get dogpiled is tossing a little criticism into the community hot tub, which I guess was actually a shared delusion jacuzzi. All I did was lob a tactical honesty grenade into everyone’s dungeon daydream, and suddenly I’m public enemy number one.

    I’m out here giving chapters the Gordon Ramsay treatment while still sprinkling in just enough good-faith praise like a responsible adult. But if a mildly critical opinion sends people spiraling like I just punched their Minecraft dog, maybe it’s time to evolve past the emotional durability of a wet napkin.

    I’m not handing out standing ovations whenever an Isekai coughs out ‘mana’ or ‘system’ and ‘magic’ in the same paragraph like it’s a sacred rite. But when something actually shows effort, I will give it props—and this chapter? It’s actually trying. It’s dragging itself out of the shallow end, trying to show it might have some real depth under the crust.

    It’s like the author locked Junji Ito and the guy behind Made in Abyss in a meat locker and told them to storyboard a janitor sim inside Bloodborne. And weirdly enough, it works. The horror vibes go hard. It’s grim, it’s twisted, it’s got some real Cronenbergian nightmare juice sloshing around in the corners.

    Shout-out to Saul, by the way. Finally a protagonist who isn’t some cracked out, wise-cracking character with plot armor thicker than Batman’s. He’s just some guy—some poor bastard who the world treats like a chew toy. And that already rockets him miles above the mass graveyard of self-insert wish-fulfillment clowns clogging the genre, who by now would’ve unlocked a magic mop that absorbs blood and grants them the title of “Janitor King” by the next chapter.

    But here’s the issue—the premise is sprinting like it’s late for a bus, but the writing keeps tripping over its own laces. We’re tossing out some fresh horror visuals, no doubt, but it’s still chained to the same crusty Isekai tropes we’ve all seen a thousand times.

    Saul’s survival instincts are running on demo mode. He’s supposed to be the “everyman dumped into hell” archetype, but his reactions have the intensity of a Roomba on 5% battery. He strolls into a sketchy lab like he’s picking up a smoothie sample at Costco, raw-dogs his hand in a vat of black liquid nightmare not once but twice, and shows less hesitation than I do when ordering a Baja Blast at 2 am. No backup plan, no clever counterplay, no internal revolt. Just full send. Pure, undiluted RPG quest brainrot.

    And then, just when you think the body horror’s taking the wheel:
    A woman, dressed in a black nightgown, she was voluptuous, but not overweight. The exposed skin was pale and smooth.

    Beautiful. We’re in the middle of Cronenberg’s fever dream, but the author just had to shoehorn in the ol’ “but what if, hear me out, she was also a baddie?” Like bro. We’re staring at a half-headed abomination and your first instinct is “hold on, lemme check if she thick”? Peak web novel behavior. It’s not even upsetting. It’s kind of endearing. Like watching a toddler try to flirt.

    At this point, I’m gonna need a health potion and a full stamina bar just to survive chapter three.
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      Kochan
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      He strolls into a sketchy lab like he’s picking up a smoothie sample at Costco, raw-dogs his hand in a vat of black liquid nightmare not once but twice, and shows less hesitation than I do when ordering a Baja Blast at 2 am. No backup plan, no clever counterplay, no internal revolt. Just full send.

      What should he do in this situation, for example?
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        Saejiro
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        I don’t know, dude—literally anything that suggests he’s got survival instinct. Panic a little, hesitate, maybe have a split-second thought like, “Hey, maybe dunking my hand into this eldritch nightmare soup isn’t peak decision-making.” Hell, even mumbling “this shit feels kinda wrong” would at least show there’s a brain cell online.

        But nope, dude just raw-dogs the abyss like it’s a trust fall exercise with Satan. No internal logic, no emotional reaction, not even a passing “yo, maybe this is a bad idea.” And that’s the problem—it’s not what he does, it’s the fact there’s no reason why he does it. It’s like watching a Roomba crawl into a fire and wondering what its motivation was.
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          Kochan
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          Showing any hesitation would not help him, only decrease his chances of survival, it's even explained in the chapter.

          He's putting his hand in the liquid precisely because of survival instinct.
          And that’s the problem—it’s not what he does, it’s the fact there’s no reason why he does it. It’s like watching a Roomba crawl into a fire and wondering what its motivation was.

          There's a very clear reason why he does it - to receive help from the woman and not die, what are you talking about?
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            Saejiro
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            You clearly missed the point, harder than a full-screen pop-up that crashes my browser and opens 30 tabs to scam sites. Saying it makes sense in the chapter is honestly concerning—like, are we even reading the same thing?

            Sure, I guess in the most technical, calculator-brain sense, Saul shoving his hand in because it’s his “only chance” at survival adds up. But “technically makes sense” doesn’t excuse dog-shit execution. Desperation isn’t a blank check for brain-dead compliance.

            If you find yourself staring down a vat of cosmic horror stew, and the only person vouching for it looks like they moonlight as a Victorian cryptid, you certainly don’t just slam-dunk your hand in like it’s a free sample at Bath & Body Works. You flinch. You second-guess. You do literally anything that suggests your brain is doing more than buffering.

            Ask literally anyone—no one in their right mind is raw-dogging cosmic soup just because some strange, creepy sleep paralysis demon-looking lady says “trust me.” Saul is supposed to behave like any normal human, not a Roomba with a death wish.

            The fact that the author glosses over basic human reactions to life-threatening situations is wild—and the fact you’re defending it is even wilder.
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    SouLNexus
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    Man imagining the lady was hard but not impossible constraint
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    IsJustANovelBruh
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    A woman, dressed in a black nightgown, she was voluptuous, but not overweight. The exposed skin was pale and smooth.

    Saul looked up and saw a graceful jawline, full red lips, a high nose and above that... nothing.

    The woman had only half a head.


    No trouble at all , can't faze me from showing this lady some deserved love drakan jigglin
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      POWERRAGE10
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      we already got one without a head in anime, half a head with a mouth mean we can still do the head
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    Srijan
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    A kind lady
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      MidLevelProgrammer
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      Wife Material😂
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        Jade Immortal
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        Y'all are down bad
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        1. Offline
          POWERRAGE10
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          we are all bad
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            Guru
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            Pragmatic we are
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