Chapter 35: Mistakes Have Been Made

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    Ññ
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    1s s
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    Damian is the red magician
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    Know wha he should do? He should make a biological poison and sterilise that whole f#cking colony clean every restart.
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    Don't worry about the Primordial being who will destroy his whole family alongwith numerous others and keep taking your time getting to know QOL stuff while playing house and do not hurt other's feelings without any useful combat magic or increasing his capacity and keep contacting other mind mages, soul mages without being proficient in it too...
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      if you're going to complain this much every few chapters, why read it at all?
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        Should all the comments be singing praises and agreeing with anything MC does!?
        I did not like his casual attitude and lack of caution so i commented about it...simple as that...
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      How's he supposed to become proficient in mind magix if he doesn't contact a mind mage(without abnormal time frame), also just rushing everything won't do anything good. It's easy for you to tell him what to do from your position but he still feels, still feels damage, ilness, and when you do something even "just a bad mood" can easily ruin all day or month of work if you will push it. So he does well for 15 y.o and pretty realistically
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    Interestingly, this was the first time since he got stuck in the time loop that he had spoken to his father again. It only took a single snide comment about his ‘weak, fainting son’ for him to remember why.

    After 5/6 years looping and growing, I imagine this couldn't be anything less than hilarious
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    Daddy issues are strong in this one too just like most protagonists.
    So much so that he doesn't even care that he hasn't even talked to his father for what is effectively years to him at this point. You can't really blame him when you know that his father is saying shit like "You are like half your older brother". Wtf is this shit.
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      I never realized that
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    Kyron's mind resistance training paid off
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    I'm kind bummed out every time he loops, knowing he won't save that little girl with the bicycle near the flooded bridge.
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      Welp he's not doing a perfect run ifykyk
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        Not yet anyways lying iykyk
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    she came running down this morning, bawling her eyes out, saying she killed you.
    “I didn’t say that!” Kirielle protested, suddenly entering the room and carrying a bowl of soup in her hands. “Mother is just making things up! It’s just that I… um…”

    hehehe addiction
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    I hope he does and decimates the sword divers once hes powerful enough, that would be cathartic
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      Why ? for petty pride ? for his ego that got hurt because they didn't welcome him with open arms?

      The aranea did what they had to do for their own safety, it's not like they know Zorian is the MC of their novel. But ngl, they were pretty preemptive on their part, that I do agree.
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        They ambushed someone they knew they could handle with the intent to break into and read his mind.
        They were so thoroughly in the wrong, with no contest, they didn't meet him even once to find out his motives.
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