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    alucard166510
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    So cliche. What if he was one minute late ? Hmm?
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    Han Sen
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    Hmm good
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    luckyblacksheep
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    Where's the void mayflies???
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    MTL Denier
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    this was so cheesy lol
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    God123
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    God this knight in shining armor appearing in the last moment is getting annoying!
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    yvkreddy
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    So cringe... Why does he need to pop up at the exact moment Lin girl is about to die. Feels too unnatural. Also I feel like things are moving too slow. Mc should annihilate the cult for doing this.
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      Zemophobia
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      It's what average authors do to build tension.

      But that tension doesn't exist for readers because this trope had been done to death.
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        MountTai
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        Completely agree. Worst is that the author can use his recently acquired luck attribute as an excuse for this. That is why I dislike luck stats in novels.

        I just turn my brain off when I read a sequence of events like this. Its poor writing, but I like the power progression in this novel enough to forgive it.
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    Caioquinn1
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    Am I going to die? Lin Chuhan wondered to herself. She felt as if she saw a person waving to her in the darkness. “Wang Teng…”

    This....!! WOMAN....Your imagination is little wild.... treat eyetwit
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    EnchantBook
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    Are you telling me that he spent 6 months in the darklands + void only to save his girlfriend at the last second? Coming up with the idea how locating little white just a minute later and Lin Chuhan is dead.
    Lmao
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      S0uL706
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      My friend u will lose too many brain cells if u start thinking....
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      Sylvus
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      Please don't try to comprehend a Chinese novel cliche scene with logical thinking. You will fry your brain bond
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    Sephiroth °^°
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    Just brick that guy already evil
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    WhatIsThisBehaviour
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    Humph! 😤 Mere Side Character Tries To Take Interest From Wang Teng’s Waifu!?!
    Courting Death!
    Know Your Place Trash.
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